People Are in the Dragon Clan, Building the Mysterious Old Church
by South China Sea Sweet And Sour
About This Novel
Xu Lie traveled through the dragon world with a mysterious potion system, but a small accident happened along the way. The source materials of the nine developmental stages are incompatible with this universe and are a bit contradictory. In order to mediate between the two parties, Xu Lie had to tell a big lie. "This classmate, please allow me to take up a moment of your time." "I want to tell you about our guides and saviors, the Nine Old Ones." "This classmate, do you know the history before the birth of Black King Nidhogg?" "In that extremely ancient era, nine old gods appeared on our planet." "When the planet could no longer carry the old days, the old days left us. "The remnants of the past sprouted spirituality and formed the Black King Nidhogg."... The cold-faced senior brother Chu Zihang changed his normal attitude and stopped being aloof and provocative when meeting people; the enthusiastic and flamboyant Chen Motong was as quiet as a tree and liked to hide in the dark to spy on everything; the loser senior brother Fingel stopped showing off and became the top student in Uchimaki. All of this started with Xu Lie's lies.
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Official(61)Scraped 22d ago
Although it's okay, I have a few suggestions😄: First: Sequence zero must not appear, and uniqueness must not be given away. The maximum is sequence one, and it is best to have 9 sefirot. Each sefirot is managed by a sequence, and it carries one sequence one extraordinary item from each adjacent path. When managing the sefirot, it does not go beyond control. Most people should only be promoted to Sequence 2. Sequence 1 are the most trusted people. The extra Sequence 1 should be kept by the protagonist himself, and in order to control the essence, he should keep at least one Sequence 1 characteristic for himself, so the outside should be 22*2, and there are only 44 Sequence 1 characteristics. This is really too much, so 9 people are just right, no more, no less, the instinct of aggregation will make the same path and adjacent paths fight each other, causing unnecessary trouble, so 9 is just right😙 Second: Uniqueness is the real power, which can only be left in the hands of the protagonist to control the essence. The author should not forget that the Mother Goddess has lost its uniqueness, resulting in a sharp decline in strength and a complete loss of two paths. Symbols have also had an impact. If you want to integrate the essence, you must use uniqueness. This is obvious to all in the "Circle of Fate". In the Western Continent, without uniqueness, the true gods cannot exert their power. The strongest is the "Quasi Old Day", because the light has the essence, just like the Mother Goddess, it only has symbols and no power. 😎 Third: There are several sequences that are not recommended even for high sequences, namely the "Devil" and "Witch" paths. Their own symbols are too harmful to the world. The Witch represents the embodiment of disaster from beginning to end. Even if you do nothing, your symbol will have a bad impact. Not to mention the "devil", there is no good person from the beginning to the end. Not only in your opinion, but in my opinion, he is not as good as the prisoner next door. Therefore, the leader of the "City of Disaster" should be the "Conqueror" of the Red Priest Path Sequence, and the "Shadow World" should be the "Sin" of the Bound One Sequence. 😊 Fourth: It is still recommended that the author use the "Sea of Chaos" as the cornerstone and ascend to the "Original Creator". The "God" who represents the Creator and the symbol of the Creator is the most suitable for the "Original". He wakes up in the mother nest, uses the "Sea of Chaos" as the cornerstone, grazes the other eight sources, starts to gather, uses the "Origin Castle" as an assistant, checks the conflicts and loopholes of each source, conducts fooling and deception, and finally merges into one. 😎 Ps: It is recommended that the Hanged Man be the main one, with the Visionary as the supplement, to be promoted to "God", because this is different from Adam's situation. He comes with 9 sefirot, so the first priority is how to use the power of the remaining 8 sefirot, rather than making trade-offs in order to make a single Chaos Sea the strongest. Many people are concerned about desecrating the symbols written on the slate, such as "omniscience and omnipotence" and "Lord of the Star World", using the sea of chaos to travel out. But they have forgotten that in Chinese culture, "chaos" is the strongest force. "Chaos" embraces everything and has all possibilities. Chaos There is the possibility of nurturing all things and the possibility of embracing everything, so the "Sea of Chaos" is the best cornerstone to carry power, not to mention that "Dreamer" and "The Hanged Man" can use the power of the other eight major sources of matter, and by using the authority of "mistakes", you can use 100% of your strength as much as possible. 🤩 "Sun" "Creator" points to "Primary Creator" "Dreamers" point to the "shadow world", to the spiritual realm, The "shadow world" points to the "mother's nest", to "filth" and "the instinct of mating and reproduction". "Tyrant" points to the "city of disaster", representing disaster and material, "White Tower" points to the "wilderness of knowledge" and represents "knowledge" "Creator" and "Lord of the Stars" point to the "country of disorder", representing the master who makes everything "The Hanged Man" points to the "River of Eternal Darkness", representing the "soul" "ferrying and grazing", The "River of Eternal Darkness" points to the "Lord of Mysteries" and the "King of Time and Space", and indirectly points to the "Origin Castle". The fate of "Origin Castle" points to the "Key of Light" Fifth: How to jump from the "three weird families" to the "all five families". Use the uniqueness of the dreamer to dream up a new personality, use the uniqueness of the mistake to prepare the clone, the personality enters the master clone, the uniqueness of the sun separates and separates out its own characteristics, and transfers the separated characteristics to the clone, uses the uniqueness of the moon to treat spiritual and physical injuries, and the uniqueness of the dreamer soothes its own chaotic spirit. At this time, after swallowing the nine-secret prayer potion of the sequence, one begins to gradually advance,
It looks okay from the front, but are you sure you want others to become gods in the future? It is understandable that the essence is restless and the world is in conflict. After all, the systems are different, but I don't agree with letting others get my foundation. I would rather let the nine sefirot explode in this world than let it go out. In fact, the Chaos Sea may accommodate other sefirot if time is enough, and it can re-create the path of Adam. If the soul strength is not enough, use the power of the White King to control his subsequent effects. When this golden finger grows up, the Black King will be a four-legged lizard. You have to consider the city of disaster. You can accept a short-term sex change, but it is best not to stay too long. In addition, the promotion ceremony of the Red Priest's promotion needs to be studied.
I suddenly thought of a novel idea. The Nine Origins were originally a game made by the protagonist himself. Now that he is in the Dragon Clan, can it be considered as a result of dimensionality reduction? So, can these nine essences be considered as created by the protagonist himself? Then can the mythical form be designed to be the protagonist himself or The protagonist designs it himself, and the higher he goes, the more he becomes the protagonist, so the protagonist is equivalent to the original one. Moreover, the magic potion exists because of the original substance, and the original substance is made by the protagonist himself. The protagonist can be written like the original creator in the original work, so that everyone else is equivalent to the protagonist's resurrection container. If the author didn't write it or it conflicts with the outline, treat it as if I didn't say it
The protagonist has been lying down for forty or fifty chapters and has been writing other things💩💩💩💩
Can there be no heroine? The pace is pretty good right now. There are so many chapters and there is no emotional plot. If I start now, I will definitely be blown away. It will look very stiff.
The plot is a bit watery, but the rest is okay
The closer you get to the back, the more it looks like a piece of shit, and it feels like looking at a tomato.
Overall, it's pretty good. There's no problem with the fine writing, but the author's plot is advancing crazily as if it's being driven by something. The plot gives people the feeling that it needs to be finished quickly or it will be too late. Maybe it's like what the author wrote in the previous comment area. He doesn't dare to write too many things that have nothing to do with advancing the plot for fear of being criticized, but A good book also needs plots that have nothing to do with advancing the plot. This book can be regarded as a fanfic of the two books, but there is no shortage of daily plots in both books of Mystery of the Dragon. Even the tight timeline of Suhuan, the follow-up to Mystery, will be interspersed with daily plots. Blindly advancing the plot crazily will only make the reading of the work uncoordinated. Of course, what I said is just some personal opinion, and it may be nonsense to others 😂. Although the shortcomings are mentioned, the advantages are all in the book, and you can discover them by yourself. Summary: Excellent fan fiction, worth watching
I feel really bad. I like the protagonist and he can become a god by himself.
Therefore, the author also asked people who want to read this book, to give you an accurate answer, how do you plan to arrange the nine major sefirot? Is it to allow others to become gods but not allow them to take the essence? Also, will key sequences be given away? The main thing is that you also gave the audience to Chen Motong. It's not that it's not suitable for her, but if such a main character is allowed to become a god, I guess they are the only ones. But the dreamer is a bit important.
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Official(61)Scraped 22d ago
Although it's okay, I have a few suggestions😄: First: Sequence zero must not appear, and uniqueness must not be given away. The maximum is sequence one, and it is best to have 9 sefirot. Each sefirot is managed by a sequence, and it carries one sequence one extraordinary item from each adjacent path. When managing the sefirot, it does not go beyond control. Most people should only be promoted to Sequence 2. Sequence 1 are the most trusted people. The extra Sequence 1 should be kept by the protagonist himself, and in order to control the essence, he should keep at least one Sequence 1 characteristic for himself, so the outside should be 22*2, and there are only 44 Sequence 1 characteristics. This is really too much, so 9 people are just right, no more, no less, the instinct of aggregation will make the same path and adjacent paths fight each other, causing unnecessary trouble, so 9 is just right😙 Second: Uniqueness is the real power, which can only be left in the hands of the protagonist to control the essence. The author should not forget that the Mother Goddess has lost its uniqueness, resulting in a sharp decline in strength and a complete loss of two paths. Symbols have also had an impact. If you want to integrate the essence, you must use uniqueness. This is obvious to all in the "Circle of Fate". In the Western Continent, without uniqueness, the true gods cannot exert their power. The strongest is the "Quasi Old Day", because the light has the essence, just like the Mother Goddess, it only has symbols and no power. 😎 Third: There are several sequences that are not recommended even for high sequences, namely the "Devil" and "Witch" paths. Their own symbols are too harmful to the world. The Witch represents the embodiment of disaster from beginning to end. Even if you do nothing, your symbol will have a bad impact. Not to mention the "devil", there is no good person from the beginning to the end. Not only in your opinion, but in my opinion, he is not as good as the prisoner next door. Therefore, the leader of the "City of Disaster" should be the "Conqueror" of the Red Priest Path Sequence, and the "Shadow World" should be the "Sin" of the Bound One Sequence. 😊 Fourth: It is still recommended that the author use the "Sea of Chaos" as the cornerstone and ascend to the "Original Creator". The "God" who represents the Creator and the symbol of the Creator is the most suitable for the "Original". He wakes up in the mother nest, uses the "Sea of Chaos" as the cornerstone, grazes the other eight sources, starts to gather, uses the "Origin Castle" as an assistant, checks the conflicts and loopholes of each source, conducts fooling and deception, and finally merges into one. 😎 Ps: It is recommended that the Hanged Man be the main one, with the Visionary as the supplement, to be promoted to "God", because this is different from Adam's situation. He comes with 9 sefirot, so the first priority is how to use the power of the remaining 8 sefirot, rather than making trade-offs in order to make a single Chaos Sea the strongest. Many people are concerned about desecrating the symbols written on the slate, such as "omniscience and omnipotence" and "Lord of the Star World", using the sea of chaos to travel out. But they have forgotten that in Chinese culture, "chaos" is the strongest force. "Chaos" embraces everything and has all possibilities. Chaos There is the possibility of nurturing all things and the possibility of embracing everything, so the "Sea of Chaos" is the best cornerstone to carry power, not to mention that "Dreamer" and "The Hanged Man" can use the power of the other eight major sources of matter, and by using the authority of "mistakes", you can use 100% of your strength as much as possible. 🤩 "Sun" "Creator" points to "Primary Creator" "Dreamers" point to the "shadow world", to the spiritual realm, The "shadow world" points to the "mother's nest", to "filth" and "the instinct of mating and reproduction". "Tyrant" points to the "city of disaster", representing disaster and material, "White Tower" points to the "wilderness of knowledge" and represents "knowledge" "Creator" and "Lord of the Stars" point to the "country of disorder", representing the master who makes everything "The Hanged Man" points to the "River of Eternal Darkness", representing the "soul" "ferrying and grazing", The "River of Eternal Darkness" points to the "Lord of Mysteries" and the "King of Time and Space", and indirectly points to the "Origin Castle". The fate of "Origin Castle" points to the "Key of Light" Fifth: How to jump from the "three weird families" to the "all five families". Use the uniqueness of the dreamer to dream up a new personality, use the uniqueness of the mistake to prepare the clone, the personality enters the master clone, the uniqueness of the sun separates and separates out its own characteristics, and transfers the separated characteristics to the clone, uses the uniqueness of the moon to treat spiritual and physical injuries, and the uniqueness of the dreamer soothes its own chaotic spirit. At this time, after swallowing the nine-secret prayer potion of the sequence, one begins to gradually advance,
It looks okay from the front, but are you sure you want others to become gods in the future? It is understandable that the essence is restless and the world is in conflict. After all, the systems are different, but I don't agree with letting others get my foundation. I would rather let the nine sefirot explode in this world than let it go out. In fact, the Chaos Sea may accommodate other sefirot if time is enough, and it can re-create the path of Adam. If the soul strength is not enough, use the power of the White King to control his subsequent effects. When this golden finger grows up, the Black King will be a four-legged lizard. You have to consider the city of disaster. You can accept a short-term sex change, but it is best not to stay too long. In addition, the promotion ceremony of the Red Priest's promotion needs to be studied.
I suddenly thought of a novel idea. The Nine Origins were originally a game made by the protagonist himself. Now that he is in the Dragon Clan, can it be considered as a result of dimensionality reduction? So, can these nine essences be considered as created by the protagonist himself? Then can the mythical form be designed to be the protagonist himself or The protagonist designs it himself, and the higher he goes, the more he becomes the protagonist, so the protagonist is equivalent to the original one. Moreover, the magic potion exists because of the original substance, and the original substance is made by the protagonist himself. The protagonist can be written like the original creator in the original work, so that everyone else is equivalent to the protagonist's resurrection container. If the author didn't write it or it conflicts with the outline, treat it as if I didn't say it
The protagonist has been lying down for forty or fifty chapters and has been writing other things💩💩💩💩
Can there be no heroine? The pace is pretty good right now. There are so many chapters and there is no emotional plot. If I start now, I will definitely be blown away. It will look very stiff.
The plot is a bit watery, but the rest is okay
The closer you get to the back, the more it looks like a piece of shit, and it feels like looking at a tomato.
Overall, it's pretty good. There's no problem with the fine writing, but the author's plot is advancing crazily as if it's being driven by something. The plot gives people the feeling that it needs to be finished quickly or it will be too late. Maybe it's like what the author wrote in the previous comment area. He doesn't dare to write too many things that have nothing to do with advancing the plot for fear of being criticized, but A good book also needs plots that have nothing to do with advancing the plot. This book can be regarded as a fanfic of the two books, but there is no shortage of daily plots in both books of Mystery of the Dragon. Even the tight timeline of Suhuan, the follow-up to Mystery, will be interspersed with daily plots. Blindly advancing the plot crazily will only make the reading of the work uncoordinated. Of course, what I said is just some personal opinion, and it may be nonsense to others 😂. Although the shortcomings are mentioned, the advantages are all in the book, and you can discover them by yourself. Summary: Excellent fan fiction, worth watching
I feel really bad. I like the protagonist and he can become a god by himself.
Therefore, the author also asked people who want to read this book, to give you an accurate answer, how do you plan to arrange the nine major sefirot? Is it to allow others to become gods but not allow them to take the essence? Also, will key sequences be given away? The main thing is that you also gave the audience to Chen Motong. It's not that it's not suitable for her, but if such a main character is allowed to become a god, I guess they are the only ones. But the dreamer is a bit important.
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