I Was Writing a Story in Douluo, and the Goddess Came to Visit Me

I thought that Yu Xiaogang was already "invincible", but I didn't expect that there would be others who would be even worse than him. Yu Xiaogang is a bit useless and his soul power is a bit low. At least he has not given up on himself. Regardless of level 0.5/29, He is still working hard! Take another look at the pig's feet in our article! The time traveler started with 0.5, And after six years it was still 0.5. I have to verbally "reward" you here. You have practiced "standing still" well! As a local "prison boy", you have been working hard to become stronger. As a time traveler, what qualifications do you have to show off? What's more, this "Wordless Heavenly Book" is also a wonder. As long as the Douluo dungeon goddess reads it, there will be rewards, and the rewards are better than pig's feet! It's a bit like the legendary "dog-licking system"!

I read from the first chapter to the latest chapter 64, but after seeing that Bo Saixi was kicked out of the story book and her memory was taken away, her soul power decreased, so there was no need to read it. I originally read this book thinking that I would read it all, but this is what happened.

The protagonist is even more useless than Yu Xiaogang, who just stayed at level 29 for many years. It stayed at level 0.5 For 6 years. Not to mention marrow-cleansing things like whale sharks. You can work in the Wuhun Library with the help of the orphanage. You can't even afford a low-end one after 6 years. You should at least upgrade it to two or three levels.

This is the first time I see a protagonist who is worse than Yu Xiaogang. He has not been promoted to the first level in six years.

It's really poisonous. In six years, his soul power has not risen at all. All his soul power has been fed to the dog. Yu Xiaogang's innate talent can't even rise to the first level.

The protagonist is written as an experience package. I wonder which boring people will like to read this kind of novel

So disgusting🤮What kind of trash can't even get promoted to level 1 in 6 years?

Pig's Knuckle, you should focus on writing about Shrek and a few characters in it, such as Flanders/Zhao Wuji/Li Yusong. These three have the biggest problems. The other two original works didn't write much about them, but they have been together for so many years, plus the opening of the academy to recruit students, famous figures, etc. Some of the words Dai Mubai said in the original work can show that there are no good people. Although there are just as many bad people or even more, but who let Tang San include issues about Yu Xiaogang? So... There is still the issue of the original Liu Erlong

The writing is very awkward, the content of the diary is short, it misses the point at all, and it is deliberately deleted. You don't have to write according to the timeline, you can write according to the characters, but don't write blindly and use ellipses instead. What exactly are you writing? Even if the author is a newbie, he shouldn't be so bad at writing. After all, there are many novels about Douluo Diary. You don't have to follow their blueprints. The content can be used for reference. I should have only read the first Douluo Diary.

I don't even practice strange martial arts. Even if it takes six years to practice half-level Xiantian, it will still take a few more levels. Also get some whale glue or something for the time traveler. No matter how useless it is, it's impossible to still be half level