Legend of the Dragon King: I Am the Sugar King
About This Novel
The six-year-old sugar man who successfully escaped from the Stomark family opened the "door" to the world where his mother once lived. Inoue Izuma: "How to choose? Never have anything to do with the evil soul master or dark snacks again, or will you be defeated by me here?!" The single heroine Gu Yue, sister Xu Xiaoyan, and Kamen Rider Gabu will not ruin the three views like the original show
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
Author, who is the heroine of this book?
Please support me~
There is too little content at the moment. I can only say that the structure has some problems, but it is not a big problem. Please support~
good
How to put it this way, overall the environment details of switching scenes are too few, and the characters are a bit tight, which is not harmful to me personally. The main reason for the sense of fragmentation is that the scene is changed at every turn, but the change scene only has "..." Without explaining where the transition is? There is no mention of the surrounding environment, so it will create a strong sense of fragmentation. Others will not notice this if they are looking very quickly. Overall, it is not bad. Just pay attention to the scene switching.
Give yourself one star and try to get better in the future.
It feels a bit fragmented, but logically it makes sense. Keep working hard.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
Author, who is the heroine of this book?
Please support me~
There is too little content at the moment. I can only say that the structure has some problems, but it is not a big problem. Please support~
good
How to put it this way, overall the environment details of switching scenes are too few, and the characters are a bit tight, which is not harmful to me personally. The main reason for the sense of fragmentation is that the scene is changed at every turn, but the change scene only has "..." Without explaining where the transition is? There is no mention of the surrounding environment, so it will create a strong sense of fragmentation. Others will not notice this if they are looking very quickly. Overall, it is not bad. Just pay attention to the scene switching.
Give yourself one star and try to get better in the future.
It feels a bit fragmented, but logically it makes sense. Keep working hard.
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