
Douluo: Qian Xunji's Secret Chamber Life
About This Novel
Travel across the Douluo Continent, become the Pope of Wuhun Palace - Qian Xunji, and gain the power of the system. Looking at the knocked unconscious girl - Bibi Dong, Qian Xunji fell into deep thought. ... My name is Bibi Dong. I'm dead. But I forgot how I died. But I remember my teacher was not a good person. He separated me from Xiaogang for his own selfish desires. I will not be deceived by him again in this life. Etc! Isn't this a secret room? Could it be! What a risk! ... "Um, teacher, can you listen to my quibbles for a minute?"
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Official(40)Scraped 2d ago
Is it really necessary to release Bibi Dong? Isn't it good for such a supercilious wolf to let him stay in the basement with peace of mind? As for making his children resent him, it can naturally be done during education. Isn't it different to destroy her psychological defense after shaping her three views? I really can't understand the operation of the latest two chapters.
I am a Twitter blogger. After reading the novel written by the author, I feel that the plot is unnecessary and is pure prostitution. As for the plot, the writing is terrible and there is no innovation at all? You can learn how to write Chihiro Ji next door, which can be called a sofa decisive and ruthless. At the beginning, Bibi Dong was sold to the Qibao Glazed Sect and turned into a fertility tool and finally drove her crazy. And your opening, to be honest, is terrible. You might as well let Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang go away at the beginning. Later, let the protagonist defeat the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect, and use Yu Xiaogang's accusation of colluding to win to destroy the Blue Dot Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect. Author, you can use this book as a reference and write a new one. For example, this book begins when Bibi Dong is six years old The protagonist starts from the beginning when Bibi Dong is about to elope with Yu Xiaogang. He agrees to Bibi Dong's request and lets Bibi Dong elope with Yu Xiaogang, but the prerequisite is to abolish Bibi Dong's cultivation and martial spirit. He has taken back the Spirit Hall and the resources cultivated over the years, and puts pressure on the Blue Point Tyrannosaurus Sect to demand compensation for the resources cultivated by Bibi Dong over the years. This kind of opening is not much more interesting than the kind of person who only knows love. You can go and see how this book was written. It is comparable to a masterpiece. Then look at how you wrote it. There is no innovation. Just write it and write it in a bad street way. For example, the character Arou, in many Douluo fandoms in the early stage, either accepts Ayin or accepts Arou, and there is no innovation at all. No wonder the author's novels are not popular. Who would want to read this crappy routine? There is no innovation at all. You might as well follow my suggestions and write a new fan novel.
It's like a walking teddy, the whole text is turning blue
Rubbish, all running accounts, no details
Bibi was reborn, why didn't he have any brains? What about IQ?
... Wuyu, this time traveler is just like the original owner, he is also a scumbag, an idiot, it is simply disgusting, what kind of pope does he need a woman? Mdzz Social scum are scum, really disgusting
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There are no details at all. How can people be more interested in the author? I suggest you read it. "Longevity Begins with Taking Care of the Painted Skin Master's Wife". This book's script is better written. It has details and will not be blocked. It has a good grasp of the scale. A 🥩 article without details is better than just returning without a heroine. 🥩 An article without details is like a person without a soul. Then it is better to restart it. Wow, don't you think?
Have you never seen a woman? When you see one after another, ugh, it's so fucking disgusting! 😐
The scum of society knows all about c
Is the main character a Teddy? Quite disgusting 😐
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Community(0)
Official(40)Scraped 2d ago
Is it really necessary to release Bibi Dong? Isn't it good for such a supercilious wolf to let him stay in the basement with peace of mind? As for making his children resent him, it can naturally be done during education. Isn't it different to destroy her psychological defense after shaping her three views? I really can't understand the operation of the latest two chapters.
I am a Twitter blogger. After reading the novel written by the author, I feel that the plot is unnecessary and is pure prostitution. As for the plot, the writing is terrible and there is no innovation at all? You can learn how to write Chihiro Ji next door, which can be called a sofa decisive and ruthless. At the beginning, Bibi Dong was sold to the Qibao Glazed Sect and turned into a fertility tool and finally drove her crazy. And your opening, to be honest, is terrible. You might as well let Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang go away at the beginning. Later, let the protagonist defeat the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect, and use Yu Xiaogang's accusation of colluding to win to destroy the Blue Dot Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect. Author, you can use this book as a reference and write a new one. For example, this book begins when Bibi Dong is six years old The protagonist starts from the beginning when Bibi Dong is about to elope with Yu Xiaogang. He agrees to Bibi Dong's request and lets Bibi Dong elope with Yu Xiaogang, but the prerequisite is to abolish Bibi Dong's cultivation and martial spirit. He has taken back the Spirit Hall and the resources cultivated over the years, and puts pressure on the Blue Point Tyrannosaurus Sect to demand compensation for the resources cultivated by Bibi Dong over the years. This kind of opening is not much more interesting than the kind of person who only knows love. You can go and see how this book was written. It is comparable to a masterpiece. Then look at how you wrote it. There is no innovation. Just write it and write it in a bad street way. For example, the character Arou, in many Douluo fandoms in the early stage, either accepts Ayin or accepts Arou, and there is no innovation at all. No wonder the author's novels are not popular. Who would want to read this crappy routine? There is no innovation at all. You might as well follow my suggestions and write a new fan novel.
It's like a walking teddy, the whole text is turning blue
Rubbish, all running accounts, no details
Bibi was reborn, why didn't he have any brains? What about IQ?
... Wuyu, this time traveler is just like the original owner, he is also a scumbag, an idiot, it is simply disgusting, what kind of pope does he need a woman? Mdzz Social scum are scum, really disgusting
Forehead
There are no details at all. How can people be more interested in the author? I suggest you read it. "Longevity Begins with Taking Care of the Painted Skin Master's Wife". This book's script is better written. It has details and will not be blocked. It has a good grasp of the scale. A 🥩 article without details is better than just returning without a heroine. 🥩 An article without details is like a person without a soul. Then it is better to restart it. Wow, don't you think?
Have you never seen a woman? When you see one after another, ugh, it's so fucking disgusting! 😐
The scum of society knows all about c
Is the main character a Teddy? Quite disgusting 😐










