Hunting for the Sky

It's messy at the beginning and people can't understand it.

I feel like the author is so awesome! God's perspective! It's written carelessly... I don't read it, why are you so awesome? ? ? ?

No wonder the books are getting worse and worse, the books are good, but the protagonists are getting more disgusting than the previous ones. Sui Qiu has lost his mortal style. He is leveling up faster and faster, getting younger and younger, and the protagonist is becoming more and more childish. The leapfrogging is getting more and more outrageous, just say Wudiwen, why bother with all this!

Dude, the writing is getting worse and worse. Don't be fooled and finish the next one quickly. The first two books were so good, why is this one so ugly?

Is this nothing like the previous two books of Sui Qiu? It's time to replace someone! Not good-looking

The biggest problem is that this system is really too long. It's not like you ascend and change the map, which makes the competition at each stage very useless. If the characters take off, the next level will be completely useless. The eight heavenly realms are Bagua, and then the outer star realms are defeated to form Bagua and upgrade the Nine Palaces. . That should be it First, I changed my weapons many times: two swords, three swords, four elephant palms, five elements ring, six combined sticks and seven star whips. You don't have to change weapons in the realm. 2-4-6 Corresponds to 3-5-7. Two types are enough. It's really not good to have too much. The descriptions are not deep enough and it's easy to mix them up. Just divide them among other teammates and the heroine. Second, the Cang Realm, Spiritual Realm, Yuan Realm, and various xx realms have the same names as the previous sect families. This time they are even better. Because they were members of the sect before, people can remember them, but this time the upgrades of various realms intervened, which made my head hurt. Third, the protagonist dragged the sect all the way, which made me feel tired just looking at it. It was unnecessary. In fact, the protagonist and the sect should be separated. The sect does not need to compete for the first place. It is too tiring, unnecessary, and it cannot be written well. As a second-tier top sect, with a genius like Kou Shanchang, it is top-notch. The protagonist goes out to stock up, gather allies for the faction, and then unites 2-3 Yuanjies to form a heavenly domain, and the protagonist just holds the line. For example, if the protagonist has just entered the Five Elements Realm, he is paired with a five-star female protagonist, and then they go on adventures together, hook up, and win over a top Yuanjie sect. Benefit together, and then join forces to level up to 7th level together. Just keep pulling the fragments of the land, pulling the Cang Realm, pulling the Spirit Realm, and pulling the Yuan Realm. . It is estimated that it will also pull Tianyu. I'm tired of watching it. .

What are you talking about? What does the second level of Wuji Realm mean? It's all messed up.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

I don't know after the second chapter. What era are we in now? Things that can be solved in one sentence are written with ups and downs in the author's writing. It is not only the author's writing power that is tested, but also the reader's IQ. There are not many stories about divorced dogs and dog-licking. Having said that, the protagonist clearly knows the direction of the plot and is willing to be like a dog or a pig, but he clearly has no such intention and clearly knows that Bai Lianhua is acting, but the protagonist insists on getting involved, and even cannot even say a word after being used. Is it the supporting role that is being crushed? This is crushing readers, right?

The beginning was at its peak, but it has been retreating. The subsequent works strongly prove that the pioneering work was not written by you.