Shadow Douluo

I'm an honest kid. I really don't play King of Kings. I didn't even know that Lan's CP was Wen Ji.

You, this author, are really great. You wrote about the hero Lan just after it came out not long ago. Have you played too much as a king?

The most disgusting person in Douluo Continent is Xiao Wu, who is loli-like, uneducated, and cute, and Tang San is also selfish. It's really cool that the protagonist beat up Xiao Wu and Tang San.

Let me start by saying that I haven't read this book or the background story of the King, but the relationship between Lan and Cai Wenji is precious, isn't it? In Dou Yi, Tang San was due to Xiao Wu's paranoia and bloody nature; in Dou Er, Huo Yuhao drank the blazing hot spring for Tang Wutong, just to remove the heartbroken red; in Dou Yi, Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena fought for their respective lineups, but in the end they chose to die together. (Although he did not die in the end), the warm love between Lan Xuanyu and Dong Qianqiu in Dou Si (I have not finished reading Dou Si (only read the first three volumes), I can only reluctantly speculate that it is a warm story) Isn't it the same for Lan Xuanyu and Cai Wenji? So I really hope this book can continue to be written, come on!

To put it bluntly, Shrek only has a false name. He has no resources or environment for cultivation. He also cultivates monsters. Tang San and the others have not cultivated them through their own efforts. In my opinion, Dai Mubai and the others are just people who don't want to go. There are many other rules and he cannot be allowed to go out and do whatever he wants. What, Dai Mubai just joined Shrek, and Ma Hongjun, that martial soul, which academy would dare to accept him? As for Oscar, it was just that he was discovered early and was poached by those four eyes. The reason why he refused to let go. Otherwise, with Oscar's talent, which academy would dare not to accept him?

No one would think that Lan's martial spirit should not be a useless martial spirit. Can a normal knife be a useless martial spirit? Do you really think Su Yuntao is a fool? Why is it that even if Tang San has full soul power, he still has a useless martial soul? Because this has been regarded as a normal habit by them. It's already common sense.

Maybe it's because Lan is too numb and indifferent, so God arranged for him to travel to Douluo Continent to experience a new life. He should not be so numb and indifferent in this new world.

The content is quite attractive, but Lan's character is not reflected, and he is a bit unlike Lan. Originally, what attracted Lan was his cold and wooden temperament, and the contrasting personality of doting on Cai Wenji, but here it feels like the killer temperament is gone. Although the author repeatedly emphasizes Lan's temperament, there are some places where it feels like Lan is no longer the killer Lan with Mu's emotions. Even if the change is changed, it is impossible to change it so much (rational reply, discussion is welcome, Gang Jing leaves on his own)

First of all, the content of this book is very novel. The author has bold ideas and imagines what will happen when King of Glory Zhonglan comes to Douluo Continent. However, I have a few suggestions (please don't criticize me if you don't like it, thank you): 1. The author can add some exaggeration techniques to the psychological description to better reflect the characters' psychological fluctuations and make them feel more real. 2. You can use the third person method to write about Lan's appearance in other people's minds. You can also write about the thoughts of people around Lan and the values ​​of this continent, reflecting the difference between Lan and other people. 3. You can add some little things when Lan and Cai Wenji do anything, write down every bit of them, and the differences between Cai Wenji and others, and introduce their unique brother-sister relationship. These are my suggestions. It's not easy to type, but I heard that handsome guys and beautiful girls would give me likes!

Shrek, don't join. It's a rubbish academy with nothing. If Tang San went to Tiandou Royal Academy, his strength would be much higher than in the original.