
As a Pirate, He Died with Kaido at the Beginning!
About This Novel
The new book "One Piece: Kaido is capable, win me over with Yamato" also known as: "Starting from the Vice-Captain of the Beasts Pirates" "Kaido: What?" I regard you as a brother, but you want to be my son-in-law? >>
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Ling Feng turned out to be a time traveler. When he woke up, he found that the environment he was in had completely changed, which was quite confusing. However, Ling Feng's brainstorming ability was also strong enough, and he came up with so many things at once.
I've always had a question, why didn't Kaido eat more Devil Fruits if he wanted to commit suicide?
Speechless criticism
Putting aside the issues of tags and dog dragging, the character of Kaido in the first chapter, even though I haven't watched much of One Piece, I know that Kaido is not that naughty. As someone who writes about One Piece, how come Kaido feels like the tsundere and masochistic heroine of an urban novel? ? What jbwy
Suddenly there was a voice? It turned out to be the system. Knowing that this was the world of One Piece, Ling Feng was very happy at first, but this was just the beginning. How should he survive on this empty island? Ling Feng was very melancholy.
Too much nonsense
It's all nonsense, so talkative. It's embarrassing to watch.
As long as the author improves the strength of the protagonist and doesn't talk nonsense, there won't be so many people in the comment area.
From the first chapter to now, some boring parts can be filtered out, and there is no need to write several chapters. Just because others can see it doesn't mean we can see it. After writing so many chapters, I am still stuck in the country of Wano. There is no need to write these in a large space. If you write about punching Luffy and kicking Akainu, who won't read it?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(118)
Ling Feng turned out to be a time traveler. When he woke up, he found that the environment he was in had completely changed, which was quite confusing. However, Ling Feng's brainstorming ability was also strong enough, and he came up with so many things at once.
I've always had a question, why didn't Kaido eat more Devil Fruits if he wanted to commit suicide?
Speechless criticism
Putting aside the issues of tags and dog dragging, the character of Kaido in the first chapter, even though I haven't watched much of One Piece, I know that Kaido is not that naughty. As someone who writes about One Piece, how come Kaido feels like the tsundere and masochistic heroine of an urban novel? ? What jbwy
Suddenly there was a voice? It turned out to be the system. Knowing that this was the world of One Piece, Ling Feng was very happy at first, but this was just the beginning. How should he survive on this empty island? Ling Feng was very melancholy.
Too much nonsense
It's all nonsense, so talkative. It's embarrassing to watch.
As long as the author improves the strength of the protagonist and doesn't talk nonsense, there won't be so many people in the comment area.
From the first chapter to now, some boring parts can be filtered out, and there is no need to write several chapters. Just because others can see it doesn't mean we can see it. After writing so many chapters, I am still stuck in the country of Wano. There is no need to write these in a large space. If you write about punching Luffy and kicking Akainu, who won't read it?


















