Weird World of Immortality

Emmm, when I first started reading this book, I had the attitude of giving it a try. It turned out that this book was a new version, so I read it (don't look at me **I have a short reading time and am poor, you know it.) The early part of this book is very good, very detailed, and it is different from those who cultivate immortality, with a new enemy_Orange. The guides on the ship are also well described and have their own stories. These are good. Next, let's talk about the bad ones. It was good in the early days, but I think it's broken now. I've written many chapters about the trial of entering Class A. I haven't fished for a long time (I think those fishing rods will help him catch a fish and give him the most suitable props.) But now I haven't for a long time. When I enter the boat, I just ask questions, practice, and think about how to get through the difficulties. Have I forgotten the best cheats? I have a friend who also writes novels. I chatted with him and he told me that when publishing novels, there will be a planner (what should it be called) to guide you (the so-called guidance means how you want to write). For example, he told me about the planning and told him that you should have a big turning point or a big foreshadowing at the beginning (everyone knows, waste material turns into a genius; the beginning is a mess;) I hope the author of this book can stick to his original intention and write it down, and give us a different way of cultivating immortality! The above are purely personal thoughts, please don't hurt me if you don't like them. I'm sorry for wasting a few minutes of your life.

Because there are many plot points, it would be much better if there were not so many, the female protagonist developed in the direction of a stallion story. She has multiple daughters inexplicably, and then she has a dragon egg with the dragon master, and there is an unclear relationship with Xiaoliu who looks very much like her own sister. In fact, the story is very good. The male protagonist is fine, but he shouldn't be. There are so many messy women. A bit of a stud. She also has a daughter with a mushroom ladyboy, and a dragon egg with a dragon lord. There are really too many surprises. Unlike Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, which only has one female protagonist, there are not so many messy women involved.

The content of the novel is indeed a very serious description of the characters. The psychological description of the protagonist's personality is very good, and a lot of the content will become very reasonable. 1. The protagonist's naturally suspicious mentality is indeed very good, and he is also very decisive in certain things, but it is normal to be suspicious in some places. If it is just right, it is good, but excessive suspicion will lose its luster. For example, questions require the other party's answers, as well as their own assumptions and speculations, and To determine the current situation of the environment, asking too many questions without specific value will make readers feel that it is talking nonsense. Fortunately, some places have been stopped in time, but there will still be a strange feeling after reading it. Perhaps the most obvious place is when asking about fog. 2. The author seems to describe the love between men and women in general, without giving too much description. To be honest, although the article states that Zhou Fan was an idiot before he awakened, I think Zhou Fan is still an idiot when facing her now, and may still be a straight man. You have to forcefully explain the reason, which is that Xiaoliu looks like his sister in the previous life, and then there will be no further explanation. Then I would like to make some guesses about the content of the novel: 1. Wasn't there a foreshadowing before that the appearance of the strange monster in the low hill was artificially controlled, and it happened suddenly after the protagonist awakened. Is it really a coincidence or is it just for the protagonist? 2. The world of immortality that the protagonist traveled through should be on the same plane as the gray fog space, right? After all, the things and terms that appear there only exist in the protagonist's current world. 3. There should be three "powers" in the gray fog space, right? Does it count as a tripartite check and balance? Fishing rods, blood balls high in the sky, fog. Blood cells will be absorbed when a lot of fog accumulates. Fishing bait requires a fishing rod. Can we think that the existence of fishing rods requires the existence of bait, and bait is the condition for the boat to move forward. It seems that blood cells are used to push forward. Similarly, fog has a demand for fishing bait (life span or bugs). 4. Another question is that if there were many people boarding the ship before, then the ship should always move forward, right? So considering that you can catch better quality items as the boat moves forward, how come the protagonist catches the crappiest stuff at the beginning when it's his turn to get on the boat? Will the items be reset every time the boarder's fishing rod is replaced? It should be impossible to reset the distance the ship has traveled. If we talk about resetting items, we also have to say that the existence ability on the ship is very strong, but I always feel that this is a bug. 5. There is also the origin of the fog. Is this a "creature" with no life limit? Maybe he was once a human being and traveled across this continent, because from the various manifestations of the fog, he knew all kinds of things. Unless he was God, he was the figure who once stood at the top, but in the end he "stayed" in the so-called gray fog space for some reasons. That would be very interesting. Did he also come to the gray fog space as a boarder? 6. Finally, there is the world view. It has not been developed much at the moment. The entire world continent is unknown. The country where the protagonist lives is called Wei State. He lives in a very remote place in Wei State called "Tianliangli" and lives in a very remote place in "Tianliangli" called Sanqiu Village. Judging from the current strength, the appearance of Caiyi Ti should have attracted all the top powerful people in Wei State. According to this, Wei State should also be a remote country in this continent. Judging from the fact that the strange phenomenon Zhou Fan saw was a mirage, there must be a stronger existence waiting for him, because the person who planted the white-level tree was an unknowable existence. That's all for now, I'm still looking forward to the development of the storyline, this is a good book.

The previous writing is quite good, and there is nothing wrong with the useless start. Chapter 23 (Marriage) All of a sudden, there is a break-off of the engagement flow, which gives a sense of deja vu of being a waste, breaking off the engagement, and pretending to be a slap in the face. It's hard to find a book that I can read. [Emot=default,06/][emo t=default,06/]

Just like in Xiaobai's novel, there are as many saints as dogs, in this book, there are as many strange things as in the air, and they are everywhere, all of which are extremely unreasonable. In a small Tianliang city, monsters can appear more than once a day. The protagonist has the opportunity to kill monsters in a small county every day. The countryside, lakes and rivers are full of monsters. How do humans survive in such a harsh living environment? With highly developed modern technology, it is possible to produce survival materials in such a harsh environment. But in an agricultural society with extremely backward productivity, in a small county with a small population, cannibals can appear on the streets at any time. How can people survive in such an unstable living environment?

The protagonist always says that he has great talent, and the leader also says that he is perfect at every stage, but why do I feel that he only relied on medicine and exercises to get there? The fact that the elixir will directly upgrade you to a level after taking it has nothing to do with your qualifications. I feel that these things would be the same for any other person. . . There are also nine ghosts that the protagonist has cultivated. I think the protagonist has to change the blood level and I haven't used them yet. I don't know what they are used for, and I haven't introduced them.

After reading the first dozen chapters, the author added a setting of a former detective in the protagonist's life. When they knew that the original owner had suffered a head injury and his parents believed he had amnesia, because his father usually didn't talk much and didn't ask for anything, he ate, slept and ate every day and stayed there for several days. One day there was a ghost behind him who wanted to kill him, and he disappeared when his parents came. The protagonist knows that it is a ghost, and his parents also say that it is a ghost. It is not unusual for the protagonist to know this from the behavior of his parents, so the protagonist should have a basic understanding in his mind: This is not in line with the worldview of his previous life. It turned out that there was a magic charm in the house that could drive away ghosts. He said it was unscientific. He held a ceremony and had visions. He said it was unscientific, but the demons killed him without feeling unscientific. The parents said that there will be a hair-tying ceremony in two days. It is an ancient fifteen-year-old coming-of-age ceremony. The protagonist is going to participate. The two of them looked very scared. The protagonist could also see it, but he didn't ask. He thought several times, "Is there something strange about the ceremony?" Finally, he said a lot of words. The protagonist asked. The parents were afraid and couldn't tell you. You can just follow what others do. What's funny is that the hair-tying ceremony in the world where the protagonist lives is to test the lifespan. When the lifespan is up, ghosts will collect the souls. The whole village didn't know about the protagonist except for Shui Ziliu's so-called suspense. Moreover, the parents were probably more worried and anxious about this kind of thing. The protagonist's parents didn't, so they were scared. After the ceremony, they themselves said that the ceremony was harmless, just a simple test, and it had a positive meaning in that world view. I don't know what they are afraid of, and the original text doesn't seem to be scary for the protagonist, just the two of them. The test results show that the protagonist has the shortest life expectancy of his age, four years. Their parents said that they could survive if they escaped from the village, and they also said that other people would stop them if they knew they could escape (the reason for setting the world view), and then for some reason they just came out and they would definitely die even if they didn't stop them from escaping. Isn't it possible to survive if you escape? He also said that joining the village guard should be specifically for dealing with ghosts, but the parents in the original article said that when the guard was mentioned, the protagonist thought to himself, "Guard? What is the guard?" He didn't ask, and finally asked after a long time. The parents were tight-lipped. Although they didn't know much about the guard, they had a certain understanding, but other than the word "guard", they didn't tell their dying biological son anything. Even if they thought about sending him in, they didn't tell anything to make their son reckless. And there is no need to hide this escort. It is purely the author's obscenity. It is super scary and the suspense can scare you to death. But this is just the most basic explanation of the worldview setting. For example, there are police in the city to maintain law and order, there are sects to practice in the fairy world, and there are organizations to deal with ghosts in the ghost world. Even if their parents only have a certain understanding of it, they can still give readers a basic idea of ​​the protagonist: the one who fights ghosts in the village. Just like the hair tie, there is no need for the character to hide it. The author said, "This thing is so terrifying, I'm afraid it will burst if you know it." Everyone knew that it was for dealing with ghosts, and then the mystery was revealed. Oh, it was for dealing with ghosts, and it was something that everyone knew. The parent who had his hair tied up felt so horrified that he hid it and explained that it had a positive meaning. I was torn. The father is set to be dull and unable to speak, the mother follows her father, and the protagonist is set to be smart and able to do things (although he is written as a fool). Then he only communicates with the captain of the escort team, and he is also the father who provides benefits and conveniences. The protagonist watches the whole process, and thinks to himself. The protagonist's thoughts in these dozen chapters are just copied and pasted from the previous text, and there is nothing that the protagonist reader needs to think about. In addition, although the protagonist does not understand the world view of the world in which he lives, his basic human sophistication and a "smart" protagonist can only rely on his dull father. Someone needs to explain that he does not know anyone, but in those days when nothing happens, he does nothing but eat and sleep. At least these dozen chapters are written out of normal human thinking, but anyone with normal human thinking, or someone who has only read two or three routine novels, will not write like this. . . Fresh and refined, transcendent and holy

First of all, this book is really unconventional. . I was blown away by my imagination. I saw a few book reviews that had a lot of comments, especially the one about the clichéd female channel. . Wherever you read this book, it is there to confuse others. . And about the Holy Mother 😂emmm. . All basic enemies were hacked to death. . Even the temporary teammates who were poisoned were not saved. . 19 Were chopped to death and 15 others were exiled. . Is this called the Holy Mother? I holy you m. Also about the heroine 😂 I'm crazy. . The mushroom ancestor who originally had several sons - turned into a girl - couldn't defeat Zhou Fan, but used Zhou Fan's blood to create a golden mushroom - and after eating it, she became pregnant. . Phew, Mushroom Zu can also become a heroine? In addition, the female dragon - Long Sudan - used Zhou Fan's JY, 2333 is too cool, right? There is also a gay friend who can be either male or female, and judging from the author's integrity, he probably hasn't run away either. . . Are there any of these plots in female videos? 😂 What would you do without misleading others? Now the author is writing about the ship becoming a ship girl - Yan Gui returns in women's clothing - I won't even frown! !

Some time ago, I read Gu Zhenren and Mu Shen Ji, etc., But I didn't think they were as good as this book. At present, the world in the book only shows the tip of the iceberg. And the book does not have much nonsense. It is clean and concise, with few urine points. The plot is smooth. This is also an affirmation and encouragement to the author. Monthly tickets and 7 recommendations per day will be provided. I don't know who is better, the ghost or the boat. There are also high and low levels of agnostic. Some are not as good as the guide, and some are better than the guide. Yin Gui Mo, Cai Yi Bo, Wei Hai... The author can open a public account and post some weird pictures.

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