I Helped Qin Shihuang Build the Great Wall
by Kentian
About This Novel
Some people say that people today cannot step in the footsteps of the ancients, but we can help the ancient greats complete their unfinished business! Yun Xiaoshui traveled to the Qin Dynasty and uncovered Qin Shihuang's "Craftsman Recruitment Order." He helped build the Great Wall, open the Chi Road, build the Epang Palace, build the Lishan Tomb, and dig the Ling Canal twice. By exposing the ominous omens and prophecies of the "Three Mysterious Events", Qin Shihuang's fifth eastward tour was cancelled, so that all subsequent events - Qin Shihuang's sudden death in the sand dunes, Zhao Gao's poisoning of Fusu, Li Si's edict to Hu Hai to usurp the throne, Chen Sheng's army in Dazexiang, the Chu-Han struggle for supremacy, etc., All did not happen... After the Qin Empire became strong and powerful, Yun Xiaoshui helped Qin Shihuang build a second Great Wall in the north, starting from the Heilongjiang Estuary in the east, passing through Yanran Mountain and Ortai Mountain, and ending on the east bank of Balkhash Lake in the west... "Haha! I helped Qin Shihuang continue the Great Qin Empire for many years -" In the end, Yun Xiaoshui not only saw the true face of the "Goddess of Wushan", but was also "abducted" by her...
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Just wanted to ask
Why build the Great Wall? Why build the Great Wall if he can directly pacify the north?
Not a beggar? Ten stars negative review.
Chapter 1 Isn't he a beggar? Why is it that the second chapter is about the adopted son of the county governor? Where did the female guard come from? When did she become the adopted son of the county guard?
I really don't know what to say
If you write like this, you might as well just get an engineer to travel back in time. Why are you talking about old gods? After you talk like this, won't people ask you about the elixir of life? What will you give then? Other novels are just a bit of a tease at most, but what they use is about court politics. When you do this project, does it matter whether people at that time realized the importance of this? And if you try to bring this old immortal out, people will definitely test you. If you say you can become an immortal, then mortals will definitely not be able to kill you, right? It's fine once, but people will definitely be suspicious two or three times. Then if I force you to find out about the book, what use will you get? Moreover, the golden finger you traveled to the past is just a book. Is it still the same thing whether he can read it himself? So what do you want him to do? Self-study? Putting aside those projects, some parts require machine tools. How does he do them? Does your book contain any instructions for making machine tools? You have learned all about the design of those projects in one book. How thick does your book have to be? This is a complete failure. What can an ordinary person do if he travels to the past? The protagonists you see are not revealed just because of the actual relationship, but they must have shining points in one aspect, such as character, will, talent, etc. Tell me, what do you write about? He didn't know anything originally, but once he traveled back in time, he knew everything, and he didn't see the specific learning process. If you give him a book and he becomes such an awesome person, then how can he still be an ordinary person in reality?
When I mention the First Emperor, I think of that big blue fluttering moth... Am I hopeless...
Very wrong chapter
You ate the story between the first and second chapters
After learning about the history of various countries, I found that Qin Shihuang was the greatest person in history. Without him to unify the six countries and unify their culture, build the Great Wall, and intermarry, the Chinese and Han people who came would have been like Europe today.
The more I understand the historical facts of the Great Wall, the more awesome I feel.
The more I understand the historical facts of the Great Wall, the more I think it is awesome. It uses local materials according to its location, such as those close to the sea and mountains, etc. The Great Wall has different innovations and wisdom.
Bad review
Although it is not easy to create your work, I was confused after reading five chapters. I am a little confused about what label you are writing.
The author is writing
What are all these things? Where did that female escort with no connections come from? Where did the identity of the young master come from? At least don't change it when writing it.
This is history, not fantasy.
Don't deify the protagonist too much and make it too outrageous. What the hell are you saying? Are you crazy?
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Just wanted to ask
Why build the Great Wall? Why build the Great Wall if he can directly pacify the north?
Not a beggar? Ten stars negative review.
Chapter 1 Isn't he a beggar? Why is it that the second chapter is about the adopted son of the county governor? Where did the female guard come from? When did she become the adopted son of the county guard?
I really don't know what to say
If you write like this, you might as well just get an engineer to travel back in time. Why are you talking about old gods? After you talk like this, won't people ask you about the elixir of life? What will you give then? Other novels are just a bit of a tease at most, but what they use is about court politics. When you do this project, does it matter whether people at that time realized the importance of this? And if you try to bring this old immortal out, people will definitely test you. If you say you can become an immortal, then mortals will definitely not be able to kill you, right? It's fine once, but people will definitely be suspicious two or three times. Then if I force you to find out about the book, what use will you get? Moreover, the golden finger you traveled to the past is just a book. Is it still the same thing whether he can read it himself? So what do you want him to do? Self-study? Putting aside those projects, some parts require machine tools. How does he do them? Does your book contain any instructions for making machine tools? You have learned all about the design of those projects in one book. How thick does your book have to be? This is a complete failure. What can an ordinary person do if he travels to the past? The protagonists you see are not revealed just because of the actual relationship, but they must have shining points in one aspect, such as character, will, talent, etc. Tell me, what do you write about? He didn't know anything originally, but once he traveled back in time, he knew everything, and he didn't see the specific learning process. If you give him a book and he becomes such an awesome person, then how can he still be an ordinary person in reality?
When I mention the First Emperor, I think of that big blue fluttering moth... Am I hopeless...
Very wrong chapter
You ate the story between the first and second chapters
After learning about the history of various countries, I found that Qin Shihuang was the greatest person in history. Without him to unify the six countries and unify their culture, build the Great Wall, and intermarry, the Chinese and Han people who came would have been like Europe today.
The more I understand the historical facts of the Great Wall, the more awesome I feel.
The more I understand the historical facts of the Great Wall, the more I think it is awesome. It uses local materials according to its location, such as those close to the sea and mountains, etc. The Great Wall has different innovations and wisdom.
Bad review
Although it is not easy to create your work, I was confused after reading five chapters. I am a little confused about what label you are writing.
The author is writing
What are all these things? Where did that female escort with no connections come from? Where did the identity of the young master come from? At least don't change it when writing it.
This is history, not fantasy.
Don't deify the protagonist too much and make it too outrageous. What the hell are you saying? Are you crazy?
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