My Netizen is the Empress

This book is really good, the characters are wonderful and interesting. I have been reading online novels for about ten years, and novels like this are really rare.

This book is really great! Because it will make you wonder what you are looking at.

I can't stand it anymore and I'm all convinced by the Riddler.

It feels good, but I don't know what I'm looking at 😄

When will you mature? . Flirting hard

How should I put it? It's the same old saying I often say. The setting is top-notch and the writing is good, but can you write the plot and events better? This is a novel, not a religious classic. The clouds and mountains covered by it are specious and have no focus. What is the focus of your book? Is it the male and female protagonist's Dihua chat, the male protagonist's spiritual recovery, or the female protagonist's growth process? Your book has many elements, including spiritual revival, urban adventures, and two worlds. . . . . There has to be a focus, right? Which is the main world and which is the sub-world? Another point is that the writing style has been deliberately looking towards orthodox literature, which is very awkward. There is nothing wrong with the choice of words and sentences, but overall it is very awkward. For example, the part about the heroine's mother, I read every word for a long time, but I couldn't understand who fell in love with whom. Is it the heavenly palace where the heroine's mother brought Su Mei to, or the heavenly palace where Su Mei brought the heroine's mother. All he could think about was that she loved her, she loved him, he loved him, and he loved him. And I don't understand the meaning of Aunt Su's existence. At the beginning, he said that Bai Di didn't care about the heroine. He had never seen the heroine and she was pitiful. Then the plot later told me that the so-called Immortal Emperor of this family had a serious brain disease and was so bloody. First of all, it is the setting of the Immortal Emperor who is insane and cares about his daughter. After that, he ignores her and ignores her. If there is any filth in the harem, forget it. But in the end, there is no such thing. His daughter is protected by a big boss. Then talking about the heroine, I thought she was pitiful at first, but in the end she was too silly and sentimental, that's why she became like this.