
People Are Fighting Against Each Other: Their Extraordinary Talent Leads to a System
by Yixi
About This Novel
Travel through the sky and awaken the memories of past lives. There is no grandpa with me. How to rise on this continent? By chance, the extraction system was awakened. [Beep... Congratulations to the host for extracting the Ten Thousand Soul Banner] [Beep... Congratulations to the host for extracting the skill "Burning Technique"] [Beep... Congratulations to the host for extracting the martial arts "Great Wilderness Prisoner's Finger"] If your cultivation level increases by one level, you will get a chance to draw. The foresight intercepts opportunities and extracts treasures from all realms. "In this life, I, Xiao Ling, will definitely be invincible in the world!" Ps: There are many girls in the harem, don't enter if you don't like it, thank you Orz
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Why haven't you done anything about the light pressure level? By absorbing 14 strange fires, you can raise the three-star Douwang to the fourth-star Douwang? More than 400 chapters have just been added to Douzun, and it is written like this that Douzun is at least a thousand chapters later, and there are a few dogs drawn in the Wanjie Lottery, either things from the sewer or gold coins.
Xun'er was arranged by Gu Yuan to go to the Xiao family to find the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade. How could he be allowed to go to Canaan College. There are really many things that I can't understand
On the surface it looks okay, but in fact there is a big problem
The first timeline is very complicated, about ten years earlier than the original work. During this period, you can also find fire-absorbing palms from the market. During this period, you can enter Jianan College and become a mentor to Ruo Lin. She is only in her 30s. If you advance it by more than ten years, it is not certain whether she is in Jianan College at this time. Secondly, this statement feels very formal. You call the patriarchs and elders of your family "you", not strangers. All in all, I suspect that the author has no ideas of his own and has copied everything from the original work. It is just another life of Xiao Yan.
I don't know what the author was thinking about merging Douluo's soul bone in the front. I wonder if the cultivation belongs to oneself. This is polluting the bloodline. What's the use of the stuff in Douluo's sewer? It also changes the color of hair. Do you have blue silver bloodline? It's just a soul bone. It's a complete drag. Later, the bloodline of Tianmu Dou Emperor awakens. This is impurity. It's better to write to extract the energy inside. Also, after cutting off Gu Xun'er's beard, she still dared to fall in love with Han Yue under her nose. What do you think? Do you really think that the eldest lady of the ancient tribe has a good temper? Too smart. It depends on the situation. Don't make it a stud. There is no need for some burdens, such as Yafei, royal princess, etc. If that is the case, you really have to quit. There is no need to waste time on some marginal women. This book is somewhat similar to the one I exchanged for Qingjiao. Will it develop into Zhu Tianwen in the future? Currently I can only encourage it from Samsung.
6. Stallion, are you serious? You have no objection to starting a harem. At least you have to be the kind of little medical fairy who is willing to explode and die for the protagonist, right? , Just accept it because it looks good? , To put it bluntly, you are accepting some elegant concubine, Han Yue, etc., They have no emotional foundation. They may sell you for the sake of the family or their own interests. Why would you accept such a woman? , And another one is the character Xun'er. She is also a very good person. At least she doesn't want anything from you, like Han Yue or Ya Fei. Isn't that person good to you because of your talent? Otherwise, do you think your appearance is really amazing?
It's getting watery. . . .
Xiao Huohuo is attending a medicine training conference. How many chapters can you practice? . . . . .
The beginning of this book is quite good. The only thing that makes people feel extremely poisonous is the Blue Silver Emperor soul bone. Anyone who has read Douluo knows that absorbing the soul bone is equivalent to replacing this bone in oneself. You are not Douluo Continent. Why do you want to replace your own bones? If you want vitality, you can choose the gold of living beings. The gold of living beings is universal life in any world. It's a treasure, and you don't have to replace your bones, and I really don't understand the camouflage skill. Can't you waste one more time and use a secret method to condense your own aura? You have to make a piece of Blue Silver Emperor Soul Bone. Even if you write Blue Silver Emperor Soul Bone, you can turn it into a pill or refine it into a liquid and swallow it for yourself. You have to replace your own bones. Isn't this just because you want people to criticize you? And Rayquaza's elf egg, I'm really convinced. If you want to write about pets, just write something normal. You may think Rayquaza is a bit handsome, but if you put it in the Dou Qi Continent, this kind of square world is a bit nondescript. After all, the style of the Pokémon world is too fairy tale, and it is completely different from the existing Warcraft in Dou Qi Continent. If you ride it out, it will definitely attract attention, but in the eyes of our readers, it is just embarrassing.
Please respect the original setting when writing fan fiction, okay? The protagonist was able to possess a spiritual soul at the age of 15 by relying on a soul art in Canaan College. In the original work, Xiao Yan's high-level Dou Zong + spiritual soul strength defeated the powerful Dou Zun, and it is much more difficult for the soul to break through the spiritual realm than to break through the Dou Zun. You must know that 90% of the Dou Qi continent's Dou Zun do not have a spiritual soul.
The AI expansion will be used later, so run, the author is going crazy trying to make money, and those who came from the starting point are still eunuchs. . . .
The novel written by this author is really bad. 20% Of the whole novel is written by the author himself, 60% is expanded by the AI assistant, and the remaining 20% is copied and pasted by others.
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Official(208)Scraped 20h ago
Why haven't you done anything about the light pressure level? By absorbing 14 strange fires, you can raise the three-star Douwang to the fourth-star Douwang? More than 400 chapters have just been added to Douzun, and it is written like this that Douzun is at least a thousand chapters later, and there are a few dogs drawn in the Wanjie Lottery, either things from the sewer or gold coins.
Xun'er was arranged by Gu Yuan to go to the Xiao family to find the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade. How could he be allowed to go to Canaan College. There are really many things that I can't understand
On the surface it looks okay, but in fact there is a big problem
The first timeline is very complicated, about ten years earlier than the original work. During this period, you can also find fire-absorbing palms from the market. During this period, you can enter Jianan College and become a mentor to Ruo Lin. She is only in her 30s. If you advance it by more than ten years, it is not certain whether she is in Jianan College at this time. Secondly, this statement feels very formal. You call the patriarchs and elders of your family "you", not strangers. All in all, I suspect that the author has no ideas of his own and has copied everything from the original work. It is just another life of Xiao Yan.
I don't know what the author was thinking about merging Douluo's soul bone in the front. I wonder if the cultivation belongs to oneself. This is polluting the bloodline. What's the use of the stuff in Douluo's sewer? It also changes the color of hair. Do you have blue silver bloodline? It's just a soul bone. It's a complete drag. Later, the bloodline of Tianmu Dou Emperor awakens. This is impurity. It's better to write to extract the energy inside. Also, after cutting off Gu Xun'er's beard, she still dared to fall in love with Han Yue under her nose. What do you think? Do you really think that the eldest lady of the ancient tribe has a good temper? Too smart. It depends on the situation. Don't make it a stud. There is no need for some burdens, such as Yafei, royal princess, etc. If that is the case, you really have to quit. There is no need to waste time on some marginal women. This book is somewhat similar to the one I exchanged for Qingjiao. Will it develop into Zhu Tianwen in the future? Currently I can only encourage it from Samsung.
6. Stallion, are you serious? You have no objection to starting a harem. At least you have to be the kind of little medical fairy who is willing to explode and die for the protagonist, right? , Just accept it because it looks good? , To put it bluntly, you are accepting some elegant concubine, Han Yue, etc., They have no emotional foundation. They may sell you for the sake of the family or their own interests. Why would you accept such a woman? , And another one is the character Xun'er. She is also a very good person. At least she doesn't want anything from you, like Han Yue or Ya Fei. Isn't that person good to you because of your talent? Otherwise, do you think your appearance is really amazing?
It's getting watery. . . .
Xiao Huohuo is attending a medicine training conference. How many chapters can you practice? . . . . .
The beginning of this book is quite good. The only thing that makes people feel extremely poisonous is the Blue Silver Emperor soul bone. Anyone who has read Douluo knows that absorbing the soul bone is equivalent to replacing this bone in oneself. You are not Douluo Continent. Why do you want to replace your own bones? If you want vitality, you can choose the gold of living beings. The gold of living beings is universal life in any world. It's a treasure, and you don't have to replace your bones, and I really don't understand the camouflage skill. Can't you waste one more time and use a secret method to condense your own aura? You have to make a piece of Blue Silver Emperor Soul Bone. Even if you write Blue Silver Emperor Soul Bone, you can turn it into a pill or refine it into a liquid and swallow it for yourself. You have to replace your own bones. Isn't this just because you want people to criticize you? And Rayquaza's elf egg, I'm really convinced. If you want to write about pets, just write something normal. You may think Rayquaza is a bit handsome, but if you put it in the Dou Qi Continent, this kind of square world is a bit nondescript. After all, the style of the Pokémon world is too fairy tale, and it is completely different from the existing Warcraft in Dou Qi Continent. If you ride it out, it will definitely attract attention, but in the eyes of our readers, it is just embarrassing.
Please respect the original setting when writing fan fiction, okay? The protagonist was able to possess a spiritual soul at the age of 15 by relying on a soul art in Canaan College. In the original work, Xiao Yan's high-level Dou Zong + spiritual soul strength defeated the powerful Dou Zun, and it is much more difficult for the soul to break through the spiritual realm than to break through the Dou Zun. You must know that 90% of the Dou Qi continent's Dou Zun do not have a spiritual soul.
The AI expansion will be used later, so run, the author is going crazy trying to make money, and those who came from the starting point are still eunuchs. . . .
The novel written by this author is really bad. 20% Of the whole novel is written by the author himself, 60% is expanded by the AI assistant, and the remaining 20% is copied and pasted by others.









