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Can the author improve the speed while maintaining quality? The character development of the protagonist is quite good and not too exaggerated. The character image of the protagonist is what I like best, he is cheerful and sunny, coupled with humor, Can the author make 🐷feet a joke maker in the future? I won't have too many pictures. It will be ok. In addition, I strongly recommend that you give me a monthly pass

After reading this book, I felt a sense of immersion, as if I were Fang Jing and fantasized about having a sister. I had various reasons to say no to life because there was no way out, just like there was no one behind me.

This book has the potential to become a hit. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have online IQs. The writing is also very real. There is nothing that can be learned immediately. It also describes the learning process of the protagonist. Very good(*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

This novel is the only one I read in class. Author, I hate you! !

Abandoned here. Personally, I am most annoyed by the traffic generated by capital and underage girls. Nothing. Make headlines every day. So annoying.

The first part was actually pretty good, but in the middle I was speechless. I haven't seen MD for a long time. The girl said "I like you" and she became my girlfriend. Then she grew old overnight. I'm embarrassed to copy future songs, but I can feel at ease copying TV series and movies. I won't act if I have a starring role. I'm prepared to quit the industry when I have enough money. What the hell, rubbish.

Damn, is this book a single heroine or a harem? I still don't want to see the harem, so I must think about it carefully! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Actually, I don't mind writing "danmei" in big letters😁😁

Is there something wrong with the parents of exchange families? IQ is not online? You don't need to be so smart when it comes to plotting, right? With just this IQ and EQ, can the program team find him? First of all, the protagonist is a child, right? Is there any natural bonus? Secondly, there are cameras in the exchange house. This idiot named Qin just said something like buying a life for more than 10,000 yuan in the living room? Made of brain water? The protagonist has no special skills and no system. Just practice singing and it will sound great? There are so many things to complain about, I really don't know where to start and where to end! Write a book. Arrangement. Lyrics. Musical instruments. Genius also needs to be accumulated, right? In terms of mind,,,,,

After reading almost a hundred chapters, I really can't stand it. The most toxic part is the main character's sister. The author has not experienced the life of a poor family, so he should not write about such a background. As the saying goes, children from poor families become masters early. Most families are not poor families, and children in the family dare not be like what is written in the book. You are writing about children from a remote mountainous area, and you also said that when their parents were alive, they earned two thousand yuan a year. Under such circumstances, do the children in the family dare to waste money? The protagonist is said to have traveled through time, but the younger sister is not. The personality of the younger sister you wrote is only possible if she comes from an average family background. Especially in one paragraph, is it possible to kick a sack of books into a field? Even if you don't want to, you can't do it. If you want to write more relaxedly and funny, you have to respect some actual situations, otherwise, change the background. That's all. They are purely my own opinions.

How old are you? This character is like a young lady