
Many Children Bring Blessings, the Ancestor's Concubinage Has Become Stronger Again
About This Novel
After more than two hundred years of cultivating immortality, Ling Haotian had already taken everything lightly. The breakthrough failed, his body and soul disappeared, and when Ling Haotian thought everything was going to be over, the old man in the system suddenly woke up! "Ding! Congratulations to the host family for adding a new member, a reward of a hundred years of cultivation!" "Ding! Congratulations to the host for giving birth to a spiritual heir, and you will be rewarded with sword drawing skills (mastery level)!" "Ding! Congratulations to the heir of the host for obtaining the destiny of the Great Emperor and being rewarded with the Sword Domain of the Ten Thousand Gods (Perfect Level)!" "..."
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Official(20)Scraped 5d ago
Death from poison
I got poisoned and died in the first chapter. Our young lady is just like a little girl. She has no tutor at all. Ancient times are not modern times. There are too many rules. It is still a world of cultivating immortals.
Long Aotian's version is a pretentious and slap-in-the-face non-brained fairy tale. Old bookworms must not enter, otherwise they will be poisoned and die!
What do 163 and 164 say? 163 Is said to be the ancestor, and 164 is the prince?
Let's put aside the combat power system. People still look different. No need to mention typos. I just want to know why Chapter 163 Bloody Storm starts from the fourth page and is like two books and can't connect with the previous plot at all? Stop writing abruptly? Splicing writing method? Or what? 😎If you want to write, just write~ If you don't want to write, please take it off the shelves~
The core of the second book: 18 levels of foundation building, the power system collapsed, the golden elixir is not as good as the foundation building, and the supporting characters died of shame
It can only be said to be rubbish, but it still builds eighteen layers of foundations
The writing is so sloppy, I won't even give it half a star, hehehe, hehehe
Just forget it if you say you have the ability to attract women. It's impossible for a woman to be so fascinated by you when she sees you! Also, the plot is so childish that I feel like I could throw away my brain.
Breaking through a golden elixir and doing so many levels is the most annoying state.
It looks okay from the front, but it looks really sloppy from the back. What are you writing about?
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Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 5d ago
Death from poison
I got poisoned and died in the first chapter. Our young lady is just like a little girl. She has no tutor at all. Ancient times are not modern times. There are too many rules. It is still a world of cultivating immortals.
Long Aotian's version is a pretentious and slap-in-the-face non-brained fairy tale. Old bookworms must not enter, otherwise they will be poisoned and die!
What do 163 and 164 say? 163 Is said to be the ancestor, and 164 is the prince?
Let's put aside the combat power system. People still look different. No need to mention typos. I just want to know why Chapter 163 Bloody Storm starts from the fourth page and is like two books and can't connect with the previous plot at all? Stop writing abruptly? Splicing writing method? Or what? 😎If you want to write, just write~ If you don't want to write, please take it off the shelves~
The core of the second book: 18 levels of foundation building, the power system collapsed, the golden elixir is not as good as the foundation building, and the supporting characters died of shame
It can only be said to be rubbish, but it still builds eighteen layers of foundations
The writing is so sloppy, I won't even give it half a star, hehehe, hehehe
Just forget it if you say you have the ability to attract women. It's impossible for a woman to be so fascinated by you when she sees you! Also, the plot is so childish that I feel like I could throw away my brain.
Breaking through a golden elixir and doing so many levels is the most annoying state.
It looks okay from the front, but it looks really sloppy from the back. What are you writing about?









