Peerless Tang Sect: I, Huo Yuhao, Join Sun and Moon

How many female protagonists does the author have? Can you write them down? You didn't write out the starting point, but you should write it down here, or else you'll always have the protagonist be a eunuch? Please write the heroine. You can't let the protagonist be a eunuch.

After watching it for such a long time, the pace is slow and ink, and the plot is probably written more closely than the original text. Even though the protagonist's experience is completely different, Shrek Fang's actions are still the same. The main aspects remain unchanged, and there are no details. The characters and the effects of some soul skills and soul rings are also very briefly described, and the descriptions of battle scenes are even less. And the Black Tang God King is normal, and it's fun to read the original text to complain about, but from time to time there are some inexplicable and irrelevant text descriptions, such as roasting soft-bone rabbits eating blue silver grass, Shrek's brainless fans going crazy, just like the number of words, I have to write a string of complaints that can be complained in one or two sentences, and a sentence pops up everywhere. And it always feels like this is not like a male video, but a female video.

I haven't read much but I have some suggestions. 1 I think the biggest highlight of Asking Humanities is to challenge all the gods. It's not about opening a harem. Even if you open a harem, you must have absolute strength and bring enough benefits. If you can't write a good book, you will be left behind. I think how much a girl loves you will be how cruel you are when you betray her. Even if you open up, don't mix emotions. Use interests as a bond instead of pornographic waste to conform to the thinking of most people. 2. The protagonist can always be single. Don't be confused about the unclear love. After flirting with one, replace it with the next, otherwise it will be easy to collapse. You can look at the ratings of those books. If I write 7*5 like this now, I will lose. Except for the harem that was popular a few years ago, those books have high ratings, but now I want to say that the era of harem is coming to an end! Now is the stage for becoming a king, a stage where rivers of blood flow! ! ! 3. The protagonist can be portrayed as aloof and cold, but he cannot smile playfully to everyone. For example, he says something with a smile, smiles bitterly, shakes his head, smiles helplessly, and touches his nose, which is too awkward. I want to see the cold king, but I don't know what everyone thinks. 4 The most important point is that the protagonist should not be cold and callous when seeing a woman, or be cold and heartless when seeing a man. This is not as good as Tang San. Tang San, despite his dirty tricks, can still be considered a tenth of a hero, and avoid lightning! ! ! 5 I would like to add that don't give gifts to people when you meet them. It's not even as good as boiling sheep. At least it must be valuable. I didn't say it's a lot of money. Giving away jelly grass indiscriminately is a huge poison. 6 You can learn from Fang Yuan. If nothing else, at least don't lose your mind just because you see a beautiful woman. You can also learn a little bit. 7. Don't make any plans to capture a girl, it's disgusting 🤢It's like,,, I saw a book before that asked actors to bully girls, and made the girl fall in love with him, then eat her up and find the next one. I vomited. 8 Don't tell others about your important information. 9 Don't talk stunningly to a girl when you see her, talk a lot of rubbish, it seems. . . I don't know what you think, but don't write about a protagonist who loses his focus when he sees a woman, and is distracted. It's very cheap. Which popular novel has you seen written like this? . . . Use daily or funny clips to replace the number of water characters. It is really not feasible to add a bunch of symbols and ellipses. . These poisonous points are found in most fanfics. I haven't read many of them. I'm just giving suggestions without any malice. I also want those who love reading the above to reflect on why the protagonist can't love himself? If you want to add someone else, I think Fang Yuan's character is perfect If you have the above poisonous points, your score will be dropped. Nowadays, most children watch it. Unlike before, they like to watch blood flowing in rivers or pretending to be cool. It is just a suggestion to learn the two pillars. I don't force you to watch it or not. I also want to talk to everyone. I am extremely annoyed by having a harem in fan fiction but there is nothing I can do about it. It is really irritating. It's really hard to find leading actors in the Chengwang genre nowadays. They are all stud male protagonists, scumbag male protagonists, and sweet dog male protagonists. . Well. . . . I'm underage. If you like stallion stories, please don't criticize me.

The scores are calculated, right? Most of the comments are negative, but the score is higher than that of the book "Senior Sister Helps Me Practice". The comment section of that book is basically full of praise, but the result is not as good as this one?

I hope the author will quickly let Yuhao and Meng do such shameful things

If you don't know much about the settings, I suggest you go to Zhihu and read the Douluo Continent setting collection summarized by the big guys. You can avoid pitfalls of many useless settings. In short, come on, the author. I wish you can become a platinum master. The setting collection is summarized by old fans. It collects the settings that are still in use and the basic settings of the Douluo world view. It can help people understand Douluo quickly. Come on, the author!

The author, Zhang Lexuan's martial spirit is the moon, Kong Deming's martial spirit also has the moon, let's do it first

The author is Gege, and I despised it even though I paid to read it. I have only read more than 100 chapters now. Who knows when I will be able to finish it. 🤠

I think the two heroines of the author, Wang Qiu'er or Snow Emperor, are better. The one I dislike the most is Taotie Douluo Xuanzi, who is level 98. Super Douluo led students twice. The result was almost total annihilation both times. A character like this is worse than being poisoned to death. Although the explanation is a bit reckless, at least it won't be like Xuanzi. Leading a team can lead to the annihilation of the whole army for the first time and the second time, let alone a five-ring evil soul master who can kill a level 98 Taotie Super Douluo. Taotie Douluo himself doesn't have much brains, he is just a tough guy!

This book may not have a female protagonist for many chapters, or even have no female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, then I can guarantee that the number of readers of this book will drop rapidly. The description of emotional lines is the most complicated and the easiest to collapse.