Wandering Skeleton
About This Novel
You can't live if you do something wrong to yourself The wealth and status gained before death, the wandering pursuit after death. Volume 2: The story of the protagonist raising an heir, second person.
What Readers Think
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Official(25)Scraped 5d ago
Is the author a newbie?
Reborn as a skeleton? Very novel, my humble work was reborn as an elixir
However, I personally suggest that you turn the protagonist into a human as soon as possible, or have the conditions to choose to turn into a human, and you can switch freely. After all, just a skeleton doesn't give a good sense of immersion, not to mention you are still in the first person [handshake][handshake]
nice
What the hell is Jason on the cover...
Wow, can the author pay attention to the typos? I saw at least 100 typos.
The writing is immature
The writing is immature, it feels like you are reading a running account
Came in confused
I was so confused that I didn't even know what was happening.
good
It's just that I'm not used to seeing much at first sight, a newcomer.
Opinion
There are typos in the introduction, which is not a good sign. Sometimes you should also pay attention to mood words. For example, "If you look closer, you will find an extremely beautiful person with long cyan hair hanging around her waist and wearing a silver gemstone necklace." You must know that we are readers or listeners, not viewers. Another word "you" will give the reader a sense of peace. Of course this is just my personal opinion.
Does the author know how to be a eunuch?
Will it? Will it?
Can I paddle in the water?
Brother, are you here or not?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(25)Scraped 5d ago
Is the author a newbie?
Reborn as a skeleton? Very novel, my humble work was reborn as an elixir
However, I personally suggest that you turn the protagonist into a human as soon as possible, or have the conditions to choose to turn into a human, and you can switch freely. After all, just a skeleton doesn't give a good sense of immersion, not to mention you are still in the first person [handshake][handshake]
nice
What the hell is Jason on the cover...
Wow, can the author pay attention to the typos? I saw at least 100 typos.
The writing is immature
The writing is immature, it feels like you are reading a running account
Came in confused
I was so confused that I didn't even know what was happening.
good
It's just that I'm not used to seeing much at first sight, a newcomer.
Opinion
There are typos in the introduction, which is not a good sign. Sometimes you should also pay attention to mood words. For example, "If you look closer, you will find an extremely beautiful person with long cyan hair hanging around her waist and wearing a silver gemstone necklace." You must know that we are readers or listeners, not viewers. Another word "you" will give the reader a sense of peace. Of course this is just my personal opinion.
Does the author know how to be a eunuch?
Will it? Will it?
Can I paddle in the water?
Brother, are you here or not?
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