
The Two-dimensional System of Troublesome People
About This Novel
[New book "Pillars in the Marvel World"] Gu Yi had a dream, in which A huge 'wooden hand' caught the God of Dark Dimension, Dormammu, in the palm of his hand like a chicken... Dormammu: Who are you? ? Let me go quickly... Hashirama: Dormammu, your power is too strong. I'm sorry, but I can't let you run free. Dormammu:...... Gu Yi suddenly opened his eyes. She was meditating in the room. She had a strange expression and blinked her eyes. Thinking back on the picture that appeared in my mind: Is this a dream?
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Official(28)Scraped 27d ago
Only then did I realize that Yu Yin is really full of talents. . Corpse Pulse, Ice Release, Crystal Release, the real fifth generation Mizukage, Sound Ninja... This. . . It's really awesome...
emmm
I still want you to give up the heroine_(:з∠)_
The author is so miserable
There are not as many recommendation votes as there are chapters. . .嘤嘤嘤
Make a suggestion
Author, your current writing pace is too slow, and the plot development cannot keep up. I suggest you speed up the update. The update can be slower but the pace should be as fast as possible. Don't keep writing in the village. Digging too many holes will become poisonous. Even less foreshadowing will be fine. Also, author, have you thought about the outline? If you think about it, try to describe it according to the outline. If you want to add new plots, you can add them in the later chapters. Now I feel that the plot is slow, messy and watery. That's all. I'll keep reading the next book. If it's good, I'll continue to make suggestions. If it's not, it has nothing to do with me.
Does the author, Brother, the protagonist have a wife?😘
. . . . .
come on
New book friends are here, come on, author!
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Community(0)
Official(28)Scraped 27d ago
Only then did I realize that Yu Yin is really full of talents. . Corpse Pulse, Ice Release, Crystal Release, the real fifth generation Mizukage, Sound Ninja... This. . . It's really awesome...
emmm
I still want you to give up the heroine_(:з∠)_
The author is so miserable
There are not as many recommendation votes as there are chapters. . .嘤嘤嘤
Make a suggestion
Author, your current writing pace is too slow, and the plot development cannot keep up. I suggest you speed up the update. The update can be slower but the pace should be as fast as possible. Don't keep writing in the village. Digging too many holes will become poisonous. Even less foreshadowing will be fine. Also, author, have you thought about the outline? If you think about it, try to describe it according to the outline. If you want to add new plots, you can add them in the later chapters. Now I feel that the plot is slow, messy and watery. That's all. I'll keep reading the next book. If it's good, I'll continue to make suggestions. If it's not, it has nothing to do with me.
Does the author, Brother, the protagonist have a wife?😘
. . . . .
come on
New book friends are here, come on, author!












