
The True Martial Ancestor of Martial Arts
by Snow Lynx
About This Novel
[A new book has been released, "Martial Arts: A Thought of Flowers Blooming"] -------- Yuan Li is already invincible, why need to borrow that ancestral talisman again? -------- Female protagonist story, the beginning of Mujiazhuang, self-created martial arts, Lin Dong's White Moonlight
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Suggestions for authors
First of all, don't pay too much attention to the so-called plot. What plot and prophet are your biggest golden fingers? What do you think? You only need to remember the time of major events, such as the arrival of the strange demon emperor and the breaking of the seal by the evil god. After all, cultivation requires motivation: Secondly, I don't think there is any need to search for the protagonist, just let it happen naturally. Don't be licking or hostile, and don't trust me just after meeting a few times. If he offends me, I will retaliate and take him back when the opportunity comes. Don't worry about the future crisis of annihilation and cultivate the protagonist, opponents or partners. This is a bit like the Virgin: Finally, I hope that the breakthrough of the realm can be arranged reasonably. What kind of energy is enough and can continue to break through without any need for enlightenment? Is this reasonable? If you practice like this, you will be at the bottom of the same level. It is even reasonable to be easily defeated by someone who has crossed one or even multiple realms.
The heroine's character is not good.
For example, I have been teasing Ling Dong. Since you are single, don't worry about it. I am really convinced. Can't you learn "Hun Nuonuo"? You see he writes a lot.
The character of the emotional idiot is too stupid
Everything else is good. I can only say that having an affair with Lin Dong is a point of screening readers. I personally can accept it, as long as you don't get married. In my opinion, the most speechless thing about this book is that the protagonist can't tell that Lin Dong likes her. I'm confused. Lin Dong didn't hide his feelings, right? He's usually so smart, but now he can't tell? The character design of an emotional idiot is too much. You can even write that the protagonist knows Lin Dong's feelings for her and deliberately hangs him. It's really hard to stand it now. My opinion is: The protagonist deliberately hangs Lin Dong (a bit 🍵, but acceptable) The protagonist can't tell that Lin Dong likes her, and keeps engaging in ambiguity (it feels like the author is forcibly subduing her, I can't accept it) (The above remarks are purely personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them) By the way, let me add one sentence: I feel that the pressure is too harsh. I don't know how many dimensions of strength I have surpassed the realm of life. The power of life is so pure that it has surpassed the wheel-turning realm, but you are still a nirvana😕
She said she was single, but it turned out to be as if she was married. She was having all kinds of ambiguities with Lin Dong. Isn't it disgusting? Do you want to eat both sides?
It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's too naughty. I almost gave myself away.
It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.
Regarding the appearance of the protagonist... The reactions of passers-by are almost the same. If you put it in the Ke system, it's mental pollution, but here it's just naturally flattering. To be honest, I'm already tired of aesthetics. In terms of fighting, it gave me the feeling of Yi Ji in a brothel. The descriptions such as Qianying and Jade Hands should be as little as possible. Who cares about these things when you have already fought. The intuitive point of view is... "The waist exerts force fiercely, twists to the side, and narrowly avoids a slashing blow." If the waist is changed to a willow waist or a full waist, the display effect will be different. "The protagonist makes a starting gesture with his right hand, and his left hand is hidden behind him. When the opponent's attention is focused on his right hand, the protagonist suddenly steps on the ground, and while retreating violently, he stretches out his left hand, grasps it in the void, and the space is instantly shattered..." If the hand here is changed to, jade hand, plain hand, The catkin, the body shape is like a beautiful shadow, and if you add some rhetorical techniques with unclear meaning, your visual imagination will be scattered to these unclear meanings. As for the rest, that's all. The battle mainly reflects the visual impact. As for the subsequent behavior of dismantling official positions... I can't say much.
You feel like you want to eat both men and women
Pure Lezi people, hey, I feel that I need both, and it doesn't just refer to this aspect, it slipped away🤗
Average
She always engages in little ambiguities, and it seems like both men and women are the same, so won't she reject him or her harshly? Also, if it is said to be the Martial Ancestor, when did the protagonist's cultivation system be created? There is no trace of it until now. Now that the combination of Yuan Li and spiritual power has been developed, it can also be rebuilt to a lower realm. Don't make it to the Ancestral Realm. If your own cultivation system has not even started, then it is not called the Martial Ancestor, it is called the Martial Sect.
A big departure
Why do female channel novels appear in male channels?
Not so good The nanny article is not good-looking
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Official(148)Scraped 2d ago
Suggestions for authors
First of all, don't pay too much attention to the so-called plot. What plot and prophet are your biggest golden fingers? What do you think? You only need to remember the time of major events, such as the arrival of the strange demon emperor and the breaking of the seal by the evil god. After all, cultivation requires motivation: Secondly, I don't think there is any need to search for the protagonist, just let it happen naturally. Don't be licking or hostile, and don't trust me just after meeting a few times. If he offends me, I will retaliate and take him back when the opportunity comes. Don't worry about the future crisis of annihilation and cultivate the protagonist, opponents or partners. This is a bit like the Virgin: Finally, I hope that the breakthrough of the realm can be arranged reasonably. What kind of energy is enough and can continue to break through without any need for enlightenment? Is this reasonable? If you practice like this, you will be at the bottom of the same level. It is even reasonable to be easily defeated by someone who has crossed one or even multiple realms.
The heroine's character is not good.
For example, I have been teasing Ling Dong. Since you are single, don't worry about it. I am really convinced. Can't you learn "Hun Nuonuo"? You see he writes a lot.
The character of the emotional idiot is too stupid
Everything else is good. I can only say that having an affair with Lin Dong is a point of screening readers. I personally can accept it, as long as you don't get married. In my opinion, the most speechless thing about this book is that the protagonist can't tell that Lin Dong likes her. I'm confused. Lin Dong didn't hide his feelings, right? He's usually so smart, but now he can't tell? The character design of an emotional idiot is too much. You can even write that the protagonist knows Lin Dong's feelings for her and deliberately hangs him. It's really hard to stand it now. My opinion is: The protagonist deliberately hangs Lin Dong (a bit 🍵, but acceptable) The protagonist can't tell that Lin Dong likes her, and keeps engaging in ambiguity (it feels like the author is forcibly subduing her, I can't accept it) (The above remarks are purely personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them) By the way, let me add one sentence: I feel that the pressure is too harsh. I don't know how many dimensions of strength I have surpassed the realm of life. The power of life is so pure that it has surpassed the wheel-turning realm, but you are still a nirvana😕
She said she was single, but it turned out to be as if she was married. She was having all kinds of ambiguities with Lin Dong. Isn't it disgusting? Do you want to eat both sides?
It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's too naughty. I almost gave myself away.
It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.
Regarding the appearance of the protagonist... The reactions of passers-by are almost the same. If you put it in the Ke system, it's mental pollution, but here it's just naturally flattering. To be honest, I'm already tired of aesthetics. In terms of fighting, it gave me the feeling of Yi Ji in a brothel. The descriptions such as Qianying and Jade Hands should be as little as possible. Who cares about these things when you have already fought. The intuitive point of view is... "The waist exerts force fiercely, twists to the side, and narrowly avoids a slashing blow." If the waist is changed to a willow waist or a full waist, the display effect will be different. "The protagonist makes a starting gesture with his right hand, and his left hand is hidden behind him. When the opponent's attention is focused on his right hand, the protagonist suddenly steps on the ground, and while retreating violently, he stretches out his left hand, grasps it in the void, and the space is instantly shattered..." If the hand here is changed to, jade hand, plain hand, The catkin, the body shape is like a beautiful shadow, and if you add some rhetorical techniques with unclear meaning, your visual imagination will be scattered to these unclear meanings. As for the rest, that's all. The battle mainly reflects the visual impact. As for the subsequent behavior of dismantling official positions... I can't say much.
You feel like you want to eat both men and women
Pure Lezi people, hey, I feel that I need both, and it doesn't just refer to this aspect, it slipped away🤗
Average
She always engages in little ambiguities, and it seems like both men and women are the same, so won't she reject him or her harshly? Also, if it is said to be the Martial Ancestor, when did the protagonist's cultivation system be created? There is no trace of it until now. Now that the combination of Yuan Li and spiritual power has been developed, it can also be rebuilt to a lower realm. Don't make it to the Ancestral Realm. If your own cultivation system has not even started, then it is not called the Martial Ancestor, it is called the Martial Sect.
A big departure
Why do female channel novels appear in male channels?
Not so good The nanny article is not good-looking
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"Martial Universe", "Fight to Break the Sky", "Great Master", "Yuan Zun"...--------Yuan Li is already invincible, why need to borrow the ancestral talisman again? The pinker the clothes, the harder the beating will be! --------The story begins in Mujiazhuang, the heroine does not marry, focuses on fighting and killing, creates her own martial arts, does not steal opportunities from Lin Mo, is not a nanny, has no system, and is not a female story! Not a female video! Not a female video!




The book has good grades "Martial Arts", "Fights Break the Sky", "The Great Master" and "Yuan Zun" Yuan Li is already invincible, why need to borrow that ancestral talisman again? The pinker the clothes, the harder the beating will be! The heroine story starts in Mujiazhuang, creates her own martial arts, is single, but will become Lin Dong's Bai Yueguang (fighting, fun)




Seedlings, single, no evaluation yet, martial arts fanfiction. Introduction: The process of cultivation is to steal yin and yang, seize luck, achieve nirvana, control life and death, and control reincarnation. Martial Ancestor, the ancestor of martial arts. You should read the world's martial arts, weed out the old and bring forth the new, and move the universe with your earth-shattering martial arts attainments. Yuan Li is already invincible, why need to borrow that ancestral talisman again? Mu Zi traveled to Mujiazhuang and relied on his top-notch understanding to rise from a humble position and become a true martial ancestor. Protect Tianxuan and conquer the world.













