
The World Begins with Deus Ex Training Camp
About This Novel
Good news, reborn. Bad news, I just made up for my regrets when I was reborn, and now I'm going to die again. The new news is that the system has arrived, and you can go to one film and television world after another to realize wishes for others. After a total of 99 times, you can realize a wish for yourself. Go to those worlds and let everyone's regrets never happen again. The first world "Raid".
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Official(2)Scraped 11d ago
There are too many supporting roles
The protagonist is the same as the supporting character. You don't have to follow the supporting character to realize your wish. Isn't it okay to directly time travel through the development of the past few years and directly send people to help the supporting characters? What I want to see is fighting wars and profit distribution. Your outline is not good. For example, at the beginning, if you travel to become a captain, you will be rewarded with a lottery, and then you can go straight through the building and then assign them. In the hope that the people in this place will become better, you can directly arm the local people and complete the mission all the way to the next world. Wouldn't it be good?
A new book has been opened. If you have time, you can check it out.
The author has made a lot of progress and is much better than this one. I hope everyone will support it.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 11d ago
There are too many supporting roles
The protagonist is the same as the supporting character. You don't have to follow the supporting character to realize your wish. Isn't it okay to directly time travel through the development of the past few years and directly send people to help the supporting characters? What I want to see is fighting wars and profit distribution. Your outline is not good. For example, at the beginning, if you travel to become a captain, you will be rewarded with a lottery, and then you can go straight through the building and then assign them. In the hope that the people in this place will become better, you can directly arm the local people and complete the mission all the way to the next world. Wouldn't it be good?
A new book has been opened. If you have time, you can check it out.
The author has made a lot of progress and is much better than this one. I hope everyone will support it.









