The White Moonlight of the Goddesses

Can the author see it? There are things I have wanted to say to you for a long time. But I am just a pirated reader, and I always feel like I will be criticized by other readers if I speak out. But recently you have always made the same mistakes in these few books, and the more you write, the more serious the mistakes become. It even feels like you are a little confused and don't know how to write a book, and you even want to give up writing a book. There is no other way. In order to avoid running out of books to read, I can only take the risk and talk about it. I have been reading your books before. In your books, there are often stories of old directors who, in order to win awards, make increasingly sick movies, do not know how to tell the story well, are out of touch with the masses, and make some art that is inexplicably not appreciated by the public. But have you ever discovered that you are actually like this too? Readers actually don't like you for being a literary youth. They just want to watch it for fun, to be happy and relax. But as you keep writing, the protagonist starts to think about life, and he thinks about it for several chapters, which is very depressing. When you have no money, you think about life, but when you have money, you still think about life. The plot of thinking is described in a very depressing way, which gives people an inexplicable feeling of moaning for no reason. It's very awkward, you know? As he writes, the protagonist starts to twist, and as he writes, he starts to twist. Come on, you guys are working overtime and earning a dead salary. I really can't understand that you, who are already successful and famous, are still thinking about the protagonist of life. Can't you just let him show off and slap you in the face? If you really can't write a funny plot, you can also design a good love plot! Just like I really didn't expect that the rogues and all kinds of accidental pretense and slaps in the face that became famous in the early stage of Mingli would be quite good. But you have to make the protagonist more successful, the more confused and frustrated he becomes. Just baffling. Look at Charlotte, this is a normal person. And there are always some sexy polyamorous practices, especially in that book where the heroine lured the heroine away, slept with the drunk protagonist, and gave birth to a child. When I saw this plot, I really thought, have you never seen Little Dragon Girl or what, you think the plot is very interesting when the male and female are swapped? The more successful you are in shaping the protagonist's personality and the better the heroine is, the more poisonous your plot will be, okay? Your situation of grinding and moaning between several women is only suitable for the kind of pure scoundrel, shameless soft-boiled man, and domineering Neptune. It is not suitable for grinding and moaning, and is more suitable for a carefree harem. But your female character must be good-looking, intelligent, talented, and rich, and her character creation must be extremely successful. Why should I beg for help from several free-spirited women to compete with you, and why should I shamelessly back you up? Especially when you are so nagging and nagging, which makes me anxious to watch. Every time the protagonist is an emotional idiot, I don't take the initiative, and I have no idea that you like my character. This kind of character is very annoying, really. The woman is not an idiot. Can't you see that the male protagonist is just like the white lotus who fishes without taking initiative and taking responsibility? Are you stupid? You keep criticizing me. No matter how talented or pitiful your male protagonist is, when your male protagonist changes gender, he will be exactly the same as Bai Lianhua who has a pitiful past in female videos. But people like Bai Lianhua, you know, people like this are very annoying to both men and women now. But when you write a love story, you make the male protagonist look like a pitiful, talented but poor little Bai Lianhua. I am really drunk. Really, you either have to be carefree about your harem, or you don't have any ambiguity with other female characters. Be honest and be friends with other female characters, and you can be a little more funny. Then there is only one sweet line for the female protagonist. You keep having an affair with other female characters, but the male protagonist always looks like I don't understand. It's really annoying. Another thing I'm very curious about is, oh, I'm just curious, not that this kind of plot is bad - regardless of the character of the heroine in each book at the beginning, as the writing goes on, she turns into a cold goddess, with a strong personality, a poisonous tongue, and a very proactive relationship. She has the feeling of a domineering iceberg president who treats you silently. Occasionally, she psychologically forces the male protagonist into a corner, and the male protagonist blushes and her heart beats after teasing her. And no matter how cool the male protagonist is, no matter how powerful he is, when the female protagonist is domineering, he will always feel like he is on the receiving end. This is true for almost all male and female protagonists in every book. I'm not saying that this kind of character design is not good, and there is no aesthetic fatigue. Although you can quickly judge who you want to be the heroine based on the character of the female character, there is no sense of suspense at all, but the creation is quite successful and not boring. I'm just curious, author, do you just like this kind of woman? Is it a dream girl you can't get or something else? I always feel that the male protagonist is the same type of person as you, and he likes women who are stronger than him. Well, the above is just a curiosity, the character design is fine. Finally, what I want to say is: For the book "I Really Don't Want to Be Famous," I still remember your acceptance speech when it was released. You said that you loved writing books and that you would keep writing them for the rest of your life. You said that you had been very hard and tired but never gave up. But now, the more you write, the more you pursue the disease of literary youth. The protagonist thinks about life and the emotional drama. Not only does it not change, but it becomes more and more serious. Are you different now from the old villain directors in your novels who are unrepentant and pathologically pursuing foreign awards? Was your original intention in writing the book to incorporate personal information and instill some literary youth outlook on life into readers? You just wanted some royalties at first! Do you want life to be less difficult? Others don't understand, but you should understand that people don't want to see young people and naughty people! Think about your original intention, think about what made you money in the first place, what kind of naughty and literary people are you? Is it a small realistic life lesson for readers? Or is it simply how to make it funny, how to have fun, how to attract readers?

I thought Lu Yuan was back again. I read Chapter 36 in one go and I really couldn't stand it anymore.

The first few pictures persuaded me to quit, it was so confusing.

Bai Yueguang in the entertainment industry! ! ! Not the goddess's!

Keep reading, it's very good. The more you write, the better.

It's too stream of consciousness. I can't understand it. Ten words.

Is it Li Sheng or Chen Sheng? It's a bit messy.

One moment it was said to be a parallel world, and the next it was said to be the future of the band! One moment I write about my memories, and the next I write something else... It's really confusing!

The only two shortcomings are that the protagonist is too stupid and too dull. Although he has the age of two people, he is calm and stable, but his dreams and mentality have not changed at all from the previous life. He always has 7 million, tens of millions, tens of millions, tens of billions, and still thinks that he is an ordinary person with hundreds of thousands or millions. This character is only written by an idiot author. It is a complete failure. The second is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, Goddess Gate. It's too ****-Buddhist and completely deviates from the title of the book. You have to open a harem. Even if you don't take three or five with you, you have to take a family of three or four to travel around the world when you retire. After all, the two of you still have 50% of the company's shares and you can spend your whole life without working. After all, there is a saying, life is short, carpe diem.