Dog-headed Military Advisor

Just write, why do you have to forcefully explain to the readers what this is and what that is? It's annoying to ask for help, and you keep telling the numbers.

Insidious, wretched, vicious, shameless, and the beginning feels okay. After Su Yunlong went up the mountain, he felt that a different person had written this book. Start counting random routines. Nonsense. It's not a book at all. And the dog-headed military counselor who doesn't have the right title You should go down the mountain and become your father-in-law's dog-headed strategist first. In the middle, write a murder scene between the lady and the maid. Write something about what happened with your mother-in-law Isn't it good to raise a female ghost? What kind of weird jade corpse is there? I still think that this young lady will act as a human shield for you. Dog-headed strategist. The strategist just wants to play dirty. What kind of zombies are you doing? It's better not to travel through time and let the natives do it themselves At any rate, he knows how to raise a brat to play dirty tricks. The author also thinks about the military strategist, about the invincibility of the protagonist, about the scumbag, and about keeping all the women he has slept with to prove his innocence. If it doesn't work, just go down from the village and rewrite it.

Big brother! Are you writing a thesis? There's so much nonsense. I practiced a spell and practiced it for more than ten chapters. I'm so convinced. .

The writing is too long-winded. Basically, there are almost 1,000 words in one chapter that are incomprehensible. Write a story just write a story. Don't go off topic, okay? I see that you don't write stories at all, you just write daily verbosity.

Will the protagonist go down the mountain? What excuses are you always making? Either be the master of your own affairs or go down the mountain, what excuse can you make? What a batch of water. Just listen to me, the protagonist lets the zombies kidnap him, or Zhu Gang can naturally let Su Yunxiu and his family go down the mountain.

The author is probably the Loch Ness Monster. He's so good at water. I think the setting writing is okay, but it's too watery and too discouraging.

Haha, farewell, take your time, you are really a showman

All I can say is that there is too much nonsense and it will upset people who are watching it. Persuade to quit

The writing style is okay, but it's very weak. You can't explain things in one chapter, but you don't have to write all 5 chapters. According to your writing method: first, you can dissuade readers, second, you can write 1 chapter without pointing out, third, I can't stand it anymore, thank you for dissuading me.

A fight requires thousands of words and several episodes of psychological description. Can only be persuaded to retreat.