Perfect World: Dreaming Back to Immortality

I now find that some people read books without thinking. Emperor Huang Tian is powerful, but he is just a character created by Chen Dong. In a perfect world, he is the protagonist, but in this book Wang Heng is the protagonist. If you say it cannot be surpassed, then the protagonist just waits for death. Basically all immortals in the last years of the Immortal Ancient are dead. Why, the writer has to wait until Emperor Huang Tian takes revenge? Why can't it be surpassed? The one who is awesome can only be Huang, and the others are just foils. The three ways can be combined into one, and then he can become the ultimate Immortal King? Where is the brain! I feel very good about this book. Basically, the perfect novel is waiting for Emperor Huangtian to grow up, then protect the Tao, and then experience perfection again. Is it interesting? It is better to write something else. If you can write your own things through the big IP of Perfect World, then you can write a book. Everything else is just excerpts.

The few people in the lower world who only have their eyes and hands are conscious and can still show some strength. It's really funny that you were seriously injured and died in a sitting position. It's really funny that the level of the disabled immortal can survive for an era. It's really funny that the Immortal King was seriously injured and died in a sitting position. You think it's better to die together. That Immortal King died so cleanly, who doesn't have any regrets?

I can't read it. There is no priority. Write this and that. Pure water word count.

In the eyes of some people, this book is a good and enjoyable book. The author has his own framework. The big framework must have been drawn up long before writing, otherwise it would be almost in style. It is better than the water chapter without a framework and the unprepared transition to the next part of the original plot. But in my opinion, this book is very average, even very poisonous. The author has set the general tone that there is no need to be arbitrary and delay time for eternity, and one person can push it through. The advantage of writing like this is that you don't have to worry about the story of the three emperors in the future. However, some of the keynotes are inherently problematic and controversial. The author does not have such writing style to connect these tones well, such as some keynotes or nodes: the original god is powerful when born, the blood of the Immortal King and his son is powerful, and the father of the Road-Breaking Immortal King leads to the Three Body Technique , one takes the foreign route, one takes the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, and the other takes the Immortal Realm, there are three different systems. The main purpose is to lead to a path of cultivating the body and cultivating the body, and a path of following the Dharma of the hereafter, etc. The connection point in the middle is too poisonous. He said that his father, the Immortal King, paved the way for him to adopt the Three Body Dharma. He did not write down that he must use the Three Body Dharma. This is the path that must be taken to become the most powerful. His father has been paving the way from time travel to now. He doesn't even have the meaning of choice. Why does he have to take the path of invincibility? It is his obsession to become stronger and save his father's recovery. Is it possible to become an immortal king just to save his father? This obsession can be achieved. It feels like Xiao Yan's obsession with being divorced, so he let him practice to become the Dou Emperor. This excessive reason is particularly ridiculous. I wanted to become a Taoist couple with Fairy Qingyue. I knew what was going on as soon as Qingyue appeared. It was also an excessive and ambiguous reason. Shi Hao used his body as a seed. What a great foundation he had. He first reached the extreme stage step by step, and passed Nirvana countless times. He cultivated three immortal energies and was polished by ten thousand fires. On the eve of becoming a human being, I was trained and guided by Meng Tianzheng, and formed a cause and effect with the Holy Spirit before I was polished to be a human being. This is also a life of nine deaths. Not having these experiences will definitely lead to success in being a human being. What's more, those few experiences cannot be artificially made, and some people can pass one or two of them. You are a person who has no foundation and is divided into three, with an immortal. The creations left by the king, your pitiful memories, Shi Hao's heritage was flattened by the creations left by your immortal kings. Which of the Willow Gods of Endless Reincarnation has power beyond the past and present, or these few who have no resources? This road is only in the deduction, and it's not like you, who is in the first level of cultivation without a small body and knowledge, can be piled up with resources, and there are roots. According to the laws of this world in later generations, a novice cultivator directly improved the laws of the immortal realm. Some of the excessive parts did not even write about how the cultivation things came from. He just said that he had to do it and gritted his teeth and came out. It was also excessive and absurd. Later, he worshiped the Lord of the Forbidden Zone as his teacher, went to the ancient and modern place to become an immortal, and became an immortal in 40,000 years. The Immortal King, the three immortal kings, Dao and Fruit merged into one and became the emperor before settling the matter. I have pushed the plateau on my own. In fact, the framework is okay, but it is particularly difficult to write. I feel that it is even harder to write than the original work. Some difficulties have to be overcome. As a result, I chose the most difficult one to write, coupled with not so strong writing style and not so thorough thinking, it finally gave me a big mess.

Writing a few chapters for each clone really seems like a poor experience. Although the author's writing is good, this writing method is really not good. It's not like I haven't read a clone novel before, but others are mainly writing one clone and assisting in writing the other two, which seems to make the experience much better. Writing a little bit about this and a little bit about that seems to be really unexperienced, and I feel uncomfortable watching it.

I won't criticize you either. A rational analysis starts from the beginning and keeps saying that you are dreaming until the end of Chapter 15? Then he said what kind of disease he had... And what if this ancient immortal world was just a dream. Then go experience it and have fun! 😱Awesome, talented😑Does the author feel that he has the writing style of a great master? ? Forget it, the immortal kings next to him haven't noticed what's wrong with him! I've been searching the protagonist's memory and still haven't found anything. If you had a golden finger or something, I might be able to explain it myself~ But what am I looking at now? Looking at a psychopath? If you want to imitate the weird fairy, just say so! There is no need to be secretive 😏 I really won't lie to you, and I won't be embarrassed~ In the end, I finally figured out where the protagonist's illness came from. Emperor Huang Tian sent you back to Immortal Ancient, right? Then the sequelae appeared, and I read too much of this kind of fanfic. I can still tell the difference between true and false fanfic🤐

It is more reasonable for one of the three clones to major in training and become the ultimate immortal king. It would be outrageous to arrange to defeat the king and become the emperor. Even if each clone reaches the limit and surpasses it, it is impossible. Then this method is the quasi-immortal emperor method. It's just a method created by the Immortal King. The limit is there. It is too outrageous to want to surpass Emperor Guang and directly become a quasi-immortal emperor. There are only a few quasi-immortal emperors in countless epochs, and there are many who are amazing and brilliant, and there are also many who have breakthroughs and innovations. This book is a very good and perfect fanfiction. It has gradually developed into an invincible and brainless novel, forcibly surpassing the Huangtian Emperor🤐

See what he wrote on the front? It is not a good path for Emperor Huang Tian to take only the physical body and not the soul. I just want to laugh. According to the settings of the Zhetian Trilogy, no matter how you practice, the last path is the path of sacrifice. Just talking about the distance to walk this road. If you can't create a new system yourself. You are still talking about this, it really makes me laugh to death

It is impossible to break through the Immortal King without the descendants of the Immortal King. Perfect World and Shi Wu became Immortal Kings in the same generation. Several of them are descendants of the Immortal King. The reason for covering the sky is because of the Tianxin mark.

The writing is so messy, the perspective keeps switching, too frequently, and the perspective changes every few chapters. This is not a game, and it doesn't require such a strong global vision. And it's so embarrassing to keep using other people to brag about the protagonist. I feel like no one in the whole world has the heart to be strong. The author has been describing how bitter and tough the protagonist is, but many of them are things that are not necessary to show. When written, it makes people feel that they are doing it just to listen to praise from others. . . Would you mind omitting those things? The heart of a strong man lies in being strong. He will move forward indomitably and never retreat even if he is the enemy of the world. I see you have said it in other posts, you have read the book Perfect World more than 20 times, but how come it has no taste at all? Having said that, I still want to complain that the quasi-immortal king treats a fairy prince like a slave. It is okay to treat the fairy king like this. But the protagonist said that the Immortal Prince is just a son, not an Immortal King. As you said in your book, the Immortal Prince is basically a true immortal, and at most a quasi-immortal king, right? How could Xunyang have this attitude? Does what you write like this mean that Xunyang does not have an invincible Taoist heart? Including the real immortal at the beginning, I feel that everyone who comes into contact with the protagonist is not good. . . But without this will, how could they achieve what they have now? From the beginning to the end, there is not a single character in your book who has an invincible Taoist heart in the true sense. This is a huge failure. It feels like everyone is missing a sentence when they meet the protagonist. Congratulations to you, good luck to you. What's even more disappointing is that even the characters with infinite charisma in the original work can be written as mediocre, and I don't know what to say. You can take a look at Shi Hao's friends and opponents. Which one doesn't firmly believe that I am invincible? Another thing, I feel like the protagonist likes to show off. This is imposed by the author. The protagonist can speak everywhere, from the Immortal King to the Humane Supreme, to the one who melts spirits and moves blood. Is it necessary to write it like this? No big words. Do you want to develop into a social butterfly? To be honest, this one really looks like a clown Another aspect is the dialogue. In fact, it is written in plain language and readers can understand it. This is not a problem. The main reason is that the writing is too plain, as if I put my thoughts on the surface. I am being humble. Don't you think I am awesome? Sometimes I want to laugh when I watch it. It's so embarrassing. The supporting characters like to brag about the protagonist, and the lead character has to humbly brag about himself. It's amazing. The last one is the female character. This author is really not good at writing. In fact, he can learn from Chen Dong. If I don't know how to write, I will write less. If I can't grasp the psychology of girls, I can't grasp it. Now that I see Qingyue here, I really can't stand it anymore. You can't skip chapters yet. Once you skip a chapter, you'll be back to the problem you talked about at the beginning. You'll switch perspectives after a few chapters. If you skip a chapter or two, you won't know what's going on. Suddenly I remembered it. Let me remind the author. You can imagine what the Immortal King is. By analogy with the human world, do they look like emperors, or are they high-ranking people who have lived for countless years and have looked down upon everything? Food, beauty, wine, the beauty of the world are all nothing to them. On the one hand, they want to hold on to their territory, and on the other hand, they want to expand their territory. The Immortal King is used to seeing life and death. In addition to protecting the world, the only obsession is the Immortal Emperor. The fairy king in your book has too many desires. It is not the desire to become an emperor, but other miscellaneous desires. Moreover, he has no strong character at all. He talks too much, and what he says has no connotation and is very colloquial. Hello, Immortal King, Hello Wang Heng Fairy King, have you eaten? Just ate, what about you? It's just a fairy prince, it's ridiculous, it's outrageous for no matter the strong or the weak to see the protagonist being closer than his father. In fact, if you are classifying it, covering the sky and perfection can all be classified into hot blood. I really didn't see a single bit of it in your book, which makes me feel very sad and lacks any enthusiasm. . . Let's leave for now and come back to read it after a few hundred chapters. I don't know if it will still be like this in the later stage. If it's just three chapters with one perspective, forget it.