All Heavens: Starting from Knowing Whether to Rule the World

One, the first world was too long. An initial world with more than 200,000 words? May I ask, what does this do? How does it help the protagonist's growth? The world in general is just a low-martial world view. On the contrary, readers become a little tired of it after reading it. Second, I also read the comment section. It's okay not to write about the Condor, but you can write about the Divine Condor, because we have one of the biggest regrets in the Divine Condor, and you know it even if you don't mention it. Or Tianlong can also write it down. After all, Tianlong's skills of Xiaoyao Sect are still good. Liu Ban Wang Yuyan, Liu Ban A'Zhu, and A Bi. Older people also like it better. But there is really no need to shoot the vulture. Three. Regarding the choice of practice system, this is the most important thing in all astronomical matters. The most taboo thing among Zhu Tianwen is to practice in any system, and to practice in any system. In the end, due to the comparison of realm and combat power, his cultivation became different. I see in your introduction you mentioned the trilogy, Mortals and Eternal Life. I suggest you here. In the early stage, he assisted in practicing the mortal system, and in the middle and later stages, he focused on the immortality method. The reasons are: There is no structural problem with these two systems. Cultivation theory and logic have been evaluated by many over the years. Needless to say, Shen Ji's system, his story writing may not be as good as that of Hong Mao Dong in the trilogy. However, the system structure, practice theory, and logical thinking are recognized in this circle of great gods, and no one can surpass him. On the contrary, the story of the trilogy is very exciting, but the architecture and theory. Logic and other factors are much worse. Moreover, the architecture of the trilogy is too exaggerated, and it all relies on patching later. There's something wrong with the system, and it's a big problem. You can go into the trilogy and find resources to practice the mortal or immortal method. You can also practice the techniques in the trilogy if appropriate, but don't practice the Dharma. It's useless, let's talk about it, the three thousand avenues of eternal life. What law does not exist? The mortal system and the immortal system are direct and do not conflict. On the contrary, the mortal system is very auxiliary and can increase longevity. After practicing qiu, your lifespan will basically be unlimited. In the immortality system, not everyone is like Fang Han, it only takes more than 20 years. Even the number one person in the Xuanhuang world in the original work, Linglong, the daughter of Hongmeng Immortal King, took more than four thousand years to reach Xuxian. Hua Tiandu has more than a thousand people with ten levels of magical power. This is normal operation. As for cultivating the mortal system, it is very good to get through the early stage, and you will have considerable combat power during the Qi training period. There is no lifespan bonus in the early stages of immortality. So I suggest you, the author, think about it carefully. The trilogy was a hit. Thus was born a stick of blowing. But what they boast is completely illogical. And there's something really wrong with the architecture of the trilogy. As we all know, Hong Maodong is suitable for writing stories, but not suitable for setting settings. To put it harshly, his trilogy system is a piece of cake. As for you who don't have a system and can't directly cultivate eternal life, you can make some changes. For example, in Eternal Life, the gods invaded the Xuanhuang World for the first time. Old Man Hongmeng sent out a Tianyuan strike, which penetrated the fairy world, the three thousand worlds, and countless dimensions, caves, etc. At this time, due to some unknown reasons, time and space changes were triggered. The strength of a god's golden elixir , was affected because he was relatively close, and fragments of the World Tree struck him. Because they had just been cut down, the fragments had not lost their vitality and were absorbed into the magical fruit and storage crystals. During the time and space travel, the magical fruit gradually lost its effectiveness, and the protagonist met by fate. I got this storage crystal in a certain world, which contained things and resources that the gods had stolen from destroying other worlds and invading the Xuanhuang World. With magical powers, you may be lucky enough to get one or two or three or four avenues, elixirs, spiritual weapons, and treasures. As for Taoist weapons, because of traveling through time and space, the spirit of the weapon is gone, and it is convenient to arrange the spirit of the weapon of your choice. It depends on how you write it. Of course, the resources you write should not be too outrageous. Overall, it is just a protoss with golden elixir strength. Although the protoss is generally rich, plus the invasion and robbery, generally speaking, it is only one or two levels of wealth. In this way, it is reasonable and logical. It feels better too.

Zhifuwen is basically the best written by Wen Guan Lu. However, do you have the strength to write about the heavens? Do you want to open it alone? ! !

Author, it's best not to write about low-level martial arts such as the Condor Shooting. There are eight thousand people out there who write Condor Shooting in Zhutianliu. Even if your writing style is comparable to that of Jin Yong, it's useless. All the plots that can be adapted have been adapted by others. No matter how funny your protagonist is, he can't escape the same homogeneity. He can't survive the siege at all. Readers will basically jump away after just looking at the table of contents. Moreover, the plot line of the world of The Condor is originally simple, and there are few treasures in it, which have no effect on the protagonist. Do you know that the generals in the world are basically second-rate warriors? It is obvious that Gu Tingye's personal strength is not bad in leading troops to suppress the rebellion and escorting the new emperor. Do you know that the strongest may only be at the level of a first-class warrior, but the five skills of the Condor are only acquired, and the gap in the world is too small. Are you planning to let the protagonist break through innateness in the Condor? Then it would be better to go to Fengyun. The middle martial arts world will be seamlessly transformed into the low-level fairy tale. Wouldn't it be better to connect with the Zhuxian world later?

Do you know that it is a low-level martial arts story? Although the protagonist is in good health and has never practiced martial arts, he is also a civil servant. The martial arts in the next world should not be too high, just step by step. I recommend writing about traveling through Guandong, beating dogs with sticks, etc. You can learn martial arts, but also have feelings for family and country, and national justice. Personally, I think it is very good. Do you know how to practice martial arts next?

Write a few more glorious family histories of the Chu family

Not bad, not bad. I haven't seen it yet, but I know it's well written. The plot is fast and compact and the plot is vivid. It's worth a read and I recommend everyone to read it!

It's nice, but the word count is too short. Come on!

There are very few protagonists in Zhifu who take the path of civil servants. Most of them write about the path of military generals, or those who take the path of military commanders and end up changing dynasties directly. Compared with civilian officials, military commanders are easier to write. This novel is very good now. It is the best among the novels of Zhifu civil servants that I have read. The only shortcoming is that the writing is not detailed enough. Many things are done in one sentence. It can be summarized by words such as "year after year" and "after three years". Of course, it may also be related to the author's intention to write about the astronomical world. In fact, it would be better if the author writes a separate civil novel. It can include but is not limited to Zhifou World. The ancient court novel of tired and tired movies and TV series may be very good. For Zhifou World, the author's writing style is available.

Just water, water, water. I felt good from the beginning, but now I feel a little bit wet, and I can't understand it. Then I'll just go crazy with you.

I can't accept being in seclusion for tens or hundreds of years. One Nascent Soul stage only lasts for more than 1,000 years, which is 1/10 of your life span. It's really outrageous. For example, if you can live to be 100 years old, but you go into seclusion for more than 10 years, it's only 1/10 of your life span. It's really outrageous.