I Was in Tokyo and Picked up a Dangerous Young Lady

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It reminds me a bit of a book: My Girlfriend is a Evil Girl; the first few chapters of this book are somewhat similar, but I haven't read the rest.

You also said that you are an adult in your second life after all, and this is Japan, not China. A strange minor lives in your house without calling the police or contacting her family. Now any minor knows how to deal with it. There is no foreshadowing, just a direct threat and then compromise. Is it reasonable? Don't tell me that you don't know the consequences of committing a minor crime, and it's not the Middle East, Iraq, or Africa. You don't have to think about it. It's better than closing the store. It's not like you can't survive if the store is closed. You have a system. If you can't draw comics or draw notebooks, there are no obstacles in these aspects. You can draw quickly with a capsule. Are there any future troubles? It's not as dangerous as a strange minor. There was absolutely no need for the gangster at the back to say the words eldest lady or make some gestures or expressions. He just didn't hear it because he was focused on the fight. It wasn't very perfunctory. Shouldn't it be easier to hear if you focus during a fight? If you are focused, you must keep an eye on the enemy. Well, there are many people, so you can't hear it, but he must have a "big, big, big lady" expression, as well as body movements. Even if you don't notice these, if someone yells "stop" and then leaves, there must be a reason. No one shouts or calls. , Just stop and leave. Even a fool can see the problem. The enemy came with hatred. For this purpose, a dozen people were called out to perform. They were beaten twice and then left. Besides, the police didn't come. They just said focus and took care of everything. At least it is consistent with some common sense. The intelligence here is too serious. The people who traveled through time are normal people, not fools. They are able to think independently, but not stupid. And that woman, you wrote that she blushed. The male protagonist still knows her and has a grudge. Which enemy will blush when they meet. You said you didn't see it. You didn't write it. It gave people the feeling that they were face to face. Above. I'll see if anyone else has been hit on the head.

Fortunately for you, it didn't end in abuse, otherwise I would have turned into a keyboard fairy. Let you know that with the keyboard in my hand, I have the world. I will keep up the good work with the next book, come on＾0＾~

I feel like you are reasoning with me. When reading this book, can we be less rational and write more about daily life?

You can write well, but you still have to pay attention to the details that you understand🤡

I'm really speechless. The plot starts to become incoherent as soon as Qing Shui Tong is introduced. He insists on inserting himself into other people's lives when they don't know each other. The male and female protagonists have to be careful about this elementary school student even if they touch their legs. What does it have to do with her? I'm really speechless.

The woman forced herself up, couldn't you write it more clearly? When encountering this situation, the first thing to do is to call the police instead of writing a novel like you did.

No matter how you look at it, it's all chaos. The plot is exactly the same.

The motivation to keep reading is completely before the main character gets up to A, and after A gets down, I can't stand it anymore. The writing style is just like that. It may be good for novices, but not so good for old bookworms.