Time Travel Douluo Qian Xunji
by A Newbie Who Has Just Written A Novel
About This Novel
Traveling through Douluo, I am Qian Xunji. I go back to the time when I first awakened my martial soul at the age of six, making the martial soul hall even more powerful. Tang San, Yu Xiaogang can be destroyed with just a snap of his fingers. Unify the continent, sail to the Sun and Moon Continent, integrate Wuhun Palace and Poseidon Island, establish Tianyun Academy, and ease the conflict between humans and soul beasts Initial entry promoted mainland China to enter a federal republic and established a research institute
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Official(10)Scraped 10d ago
The author tortured that spider very hard for me
When Qian Renxue is born, give her a happy and complete childhood without the cold eyes of that spider.
The content looks okay, and so is the plot arrangement. I would like to give you a suggestion: reduce some dialogue content and add more combat content.
It's well written and worth reading. That is, the protagonist's development process in the early stage can be accelerated.
It's well written, I hope the author will work harder and don't finish it badly.
It looks okay from the front, but it's going to be very troublesome in the academy. It's really stupid to use the two names together. What's the problem with just Qian Xunji? When others call you, the title is Li Tianyu. Doesn't it affect your writing of Qian Xunji at other times? The three words "Li Tianyu" are only suitable to appear in other people's titles, or when introducing yourself. It's really stupid to describe yourself next to me and still use this name. This is just a writing skill.
After watching the beginning, the protagonist has a huge appetite... I also want to think about the Three Gods in One or the Star Dou Forest in the far north... I can only say that the male protagonist has a dream, come on
Well, if I don't understand what he wrote, I can just write another novel.
Come on, write well, work hard, come on, come on
Why didn't you write that Snake Spear is also Qianxunji? All kinds of age modifications are made regardless of whether they are reasonable or not.
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 10d ago
The author tortured that spider very hard for me
When Qian Renxue is born, give her a happy and complete childhood without the cold eyes of that spider.
The content looks okay, and so is the plot arrangement. I would like to give you a suggestion: reduce some dialogue content and add more combat content.
It's well written and worth reading. That is, the protagonist's development process in the early stage can be accelerated.
It's well written, I hope the author will work harder and don't finish it badly.
It looks okay from the front, but it's going to be very troublesome in the academy. It's really stupid to use the two names together. What's the problem with just Qian Xunji? When others call you, the title is Li Tianyu. Doesn't it affect your writing of Qian Xunji at other times? The three words "Li Tianyu" are only suitable to appear in other people's titles, or when introducing yourself. It's really stupid to describe yourself next to me and still use this name. This is just a writing skill.
After watching the beginning, the protagonist has a huge appetite... I also want to think about the Three Gods in One or the Star Dou Forest in the far north... I can only say that the male protagonist has a dream, come on
Well, if I don't understand what he wrote, I can just write another novel.
Come on, write well, work hard, come on, come on
Why didn't you write that Snake Spear is also Qianxunji? All kinds of age modifications are made regardless of whether they are reasonable or not.
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