Mortal's Beginning Married a Wife
by Zhu Mo Jie
About This Novel
In the mortal world, he became Han Laomo's brother-in-law. Xiong Kuohai was panicked. As a mortal, what he fears most is meeting his parents. Until that day, his fourth uncle said to him: Otherwise, you can take another concubine. But people are like this, once things start to take off. The huge waves can no longer be contained... But this is not a dream. When you take someone in, you have to take care of their clothing, food, magic pills, and pills. Practice resources. With more and more women. There are more and more worries. It's really nice to have a beautiful woman in your arms. What happens after that? So what...
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The very beginning of the chapter can dissuade some people. You have golden fingers and martial arts, but you have no spiritual roots. How can people follow your routine? The plot is not interesting and makes people feel immersed in it. They are all here to watch the fandom. Who would watch this low-level starting point and slow development? The plot is bland.
The idea is quite innovative, but the author is a mortal and doesn't remember the original work at all. When replying to the comment, he had the nerve to say that he had forgotten it all. He forgot, couldn't he read it before writing? The annual rent for an ordinary Immortal Cultivation City costs 500 spirit stones, and the permanent identity card of Jincheng costs 3,000 spirit stones. Even if you read a little bit and memorize a little bit, you can't write down such outrageous prices. And then the protagonist is crazy about dying, without any cultivation at all, and the heroine is the same. Alas, there are really too many flaws, and such a good idea is wasted.
It feels good to write, but I can't stand some parts.
Permanent residence in Tianxing City, the first city in the Chaotic Star Sea, costs 800 spirit stones. You can live permanently in a city in Yuanwu Kingdom for 3,000 spirit stones. Go and sell medicine and make a big deal all at once. I bought some things and still have more than 10,000 spiritual stones. (My child holds gold and walks through the busy city. Why do I have to work so hard to kill people?) Then you get to deal with people from the Demon Cult in close quarters and build their foundation, while your wife practices her Qi and you are a mortal. Travelers seek good fortune and avoid harm, but you have nothing to do with it.
Suitable for people who have never read the novel
From the beginning to the middle, you are constantly being stupid. You, a time traveler, have never eaten pork and haven't seen a pig running?
The beginning was useless. I want to know how he became an immortal later on?
I don't know what I wrote, it's not detailed at all.
After reading dozens of pictures, I came out. The key is to grab the tiger fish, and the pill-forming ones are all out. The protagonist is practicing Qi and leading this Qi practice, and then runs away without any reason. Is the pill-forming just a decoration? I was confused when I saw it.
The more I watch it, the less I can stand it. The main character is written in such a way that it doesn't look very smart. He is just a mortal at every turn. If he has magic power, he cultivates his body. But if he can't use his magic power, he is just a mortal at every turn.
Three stars, the beginning line, the middle, and after 300 pictures, the story is quite interesting.
The author likes to create new characters by himself, and the fan fiction is based on the interaction of the original characters. If the author likes his own character, he can write a fan fiction of the original work.
Why don't you cut it? Stop writing it.
I bit the bullet and read Chapter 5 and I was confused. There is a system and techniques but no spiritual roots. You can only add points to the system for your wife. There are some limitations. Finally, the author has something to say, asking the protagonist to use mortals to defeat immortals. It made me laugh.
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Official(10)Scraped 3d ago
The very beginning of the chapter can dissuade some people. You have golden fingers and martial arts, but you have no spiritual roots. How can people follow your routine? The plot is not interesting and makes people feel immersed in it. They are all here to watch the fandom. Who would watch this low-level starting point and slow development? The plot is bland.
The idea is quite innovative, but the author is a mortal and doesn't remember the original work at all. When replying to the comment, he had the nerve to say that he had forgotten it all. He forgot, couldn't he read it before writing? The annual rent for an ordinary Immortal Cultivation City costs 500 spirit stones, and the permanent identity card of Jincheng costs 3,000 spirit stones. Even if you read a little bit and memorize a little bit, you can't write down such outrageous prices. And then the protagonist is crazy about dying, without any cultivation at all, and the heroine is the same. Alas, there are really too many flaws, and such a good idea is wasted.
It feels good to write, but I can't stand some parts.
Permanent residence in Tianxing City, the first city in the Chaotic Star Sea, costs 800 spirit stones. You can live permanently in a city in Yuanwu Kingdom for 3,000 spirit stones. Go and sell medicine and make a big deal all at once. I bought some things and still have more than 10,000 spiritual stones. (My child holds gold and walks through the busy city. Why do I have to work so hard to kill people?) Then you get to deal with people from the Demon Cult in close quarters and build their foundation, while your wife practices her Qi and you are a mortal. Travelers seek good fortune and avoid harm, but you have nothing to do with it.
Suitable for people who have never read the novel
From the beginning to the middle, you are constantly being stupid. You, a time traveler, have never eaten pork and haven't seen a pig running?
The beginning was useless. I want to know how he became an immortal later on?
I don't know what I wrote, it's not detailed at all.
After reading dozens of pictures, I came out. The key is to grab the tiger fish, and the pill-forming ones are all out. The protagonist is practicing Qi and leading this Qi practice, and then runs away without any reason. Is the pill-forming just a decoration? I was confused when I saw it.
The more I watch it, the less I can stand it. The main character is written in such a way that it doesn't look very smart. He is just a mortal at every turn. If he has magic power, he cultivates his body. But if he can't use his magic power, he is just a mortal at every turn.
Three stars, the beginning line, the middle, and after 300 pictures, the story is quite interesting.
The author likes to create new characters by himself, and the fan fiction is based on the interaction of the original characters. If the author likes his own character, he can write a fan fiction of the original work.
Why don't you cut it? Stop writing it.
I bit the bullet and read Chapter 5 and I was confused. There is a system and techniques but no spiritual roots. You can only add points to the system for your wife. There are some limitations. Finally, the author has something to say, asking the protagonist to use mortals to defeat immortals. It made me laugh.
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