Douluo Jueshi: I Moved the Entire Dragon King
by Shi Ming
About This Novel
[Peerless Tang Sect + Legend of Dragon King] Lin Feng traveled to Douluo Continent during the Peerless Tang Sect and became an ordinary soul master. Fortunately, he awakened "I am the genuine system". As long as more and more people and more important characters in the original work believe that the power he fabricated is real, the rewards Lin Feng will get will be richer. The beginning of the game landed in the Star Dou Forest. It was now the Peerless Tang Sect period. When Huo Yuhao had just obtained his first soul ring, Lin Feng quickly set his sights on Huo Yuhao. During the entire Peerless Tang Sect period, no one was more important than Huo Yuhao. First of all, at the beginning, Huo Yuhao is lured into his own Shrek Academy! From now on, I am the genuine one! Zhou Yi: "The students I teach have the highest passing rate!" Wu Changkong: "The so-called excellence is not measured by the number of students expelled." Xuanzi: "I, Taotie Douluo, am unbeatable under Elder Mu!" Yun Ming: "I suppressed the current world with my spear, and I defeated sixteen titled Douluo in a row!" Tang San: "I am the God King, who plans everything! I have planned for Douluo Continent for ten thousand years!" Tang Wulin: "Ask Poseidon to die!"
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Official(139)Scraped 2d ago
Tsk, Dragon King and Peerless Shrek exist at the same time. Dragon King includes Yun Ming, Ya Li, Zhuo Shi and others. Geniuses too. Peerless only Mu En is sober. Others are pigs. Geniuses too. Love watching. Please update more and don't stop updating.
After reading your comments, I would like to give you a suggestion. The first idea of rewards is wrong. The rewards should be rewards for unlocking characters and various resources for cultivating disciples, rather than giving martial souls to the protagonist. The second idea is to add a passive meaning that the protagonist can inherit the martial souls and soul rings of students or teachers in the academy. The same goes for becoming a god. In the academy stream, there must be an academy route to allow you to really focus on the students. The subsequent writing method should also be biased toward students, so that it will look much better.
Regarding the names of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect and the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect, the original text also calls the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect Duo, so I chose this name. The full text of the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect is only mentioned twice. The original work is available here, you can look it up by yourself.
Writing is okay
But I feel that the protagonist is too weak. It's not a problem to keep giving rewards to the protagonist. Just give the protagonist a reward to make the protagonist invincible. As the brother in the comment area said, it would be better to give the academy some special bonuses. For example, after completing a mission, the cultivation speed will be permanently increased by 1%. Such a superposition, plus various elixirs, formations, and exercises, will superimpose the training speed of those students. If you want to improve your level, you can also learn Han Li's three-turn Heavy Yuan Gong San Gong and rebuild it to increase the soul power and increase the number of years of absorbable soul rings, or the bottleneck will disappear.
Thank you for your support. However, this book is a first-time Q-reader. More updates will affect the score. The score is related to the reading rate of the book. Two chapters a day will make a big difference in the completion rate. If there are more updates, the completion rate will continue to decline, so I can only update twice a day, but the number of words in the chapters will be increased as much as possible. Thank you for your support! The following is the reading completion rate. The difference on the same day was 3%.
It's worth looking forward to. If the characters of Long Yeyue and Cai Yuer are revealed in the future, it's best to change them. They are really too abstract.
It looks good. The author will try to write a few hundred pictures. Later, he can include all the titled Douluo in the Dragon King legend, such as the Ruthless Douluo, the Passionate Douluo, the Poseidon Douluo, the Tianfeng Douluo, the Qingtian Douluo, the Pluto Douluo...
Why can't I read it if the author is here?
Too little regard for the protagonist
Xuanzi keeps insulting the protagonist and the academy. It would be better to cripple his legs, or cripple him to more than 80 levels and never make progress.
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Official(139)Scraped 2d ago
Tsk, Dragon King and Peerless Shrek exist at the same time. Dragon King includes Yun Ming, Ya Li, Zhuo Shi and others. Geniuses too. Peerless only Mu En is sober. Others are pigs. Geniuses too. Love watching. Please update more and don't stop updating.
After reading your comments, I would like to give you a suggestion. The first idea of rewards is wrong. The rewards should be rewards for unlocking characters and various resources for cultivating disciples, rather than giving martial souls to the protagonist. The second idea is to add a passive meaning that the protagonist can inherit the martial souls and soul rings of students or teachers in the academy. The same goes for becoming a god. In the academy stream, there must be an academy route to allow you to really focus on the students. The subsequent writing method should also be biased toward students, so that it will look much better.
Regarding the names of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect and the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect, the original text also calls the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect Duo, so I chose this name. The full text of the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect is only mentioned twice. The original work is available here, you can look it up by yourself.
Writing is okay
But I feel that the protagonist is too weak. It's not a problem to keep giving rewards to the protagonist. Just give the protagonist a reward to make the protagonist invincible. As the brother in the comment area said, it would be better to give the academy some special bonuses. For example, after completing a mission, the cultivation speed will be permanently increased by 1%. Such a superposition, plus various elixirs, formations, and exercises, will superimpose the training speed of those students. If you want to improve your level, you can also learn Han Li's three-turn Heavy Yuan Gong San Gong and rebuild it to increase the soul power and increase the number of years of absorbable soul rings, or the bottleneck will disappear.
Thank you for your support. However, this book is a first-time Q-reader. More updates will affect the score. The score is related to the reading rate of the book. Two chapters a day will make a big difference in the completion rate. If there are more updates, the completion rate will continue to decline, so I can only update twice a day, but the number of words in the chapters will be increased as much as possible. Thank you for your support! The following is the reading completion rate. The difference on the same day was 3%.
It's worth looking forward to. If the characters of Long Yeyue and Cai Yuer are revealed in the future, it's best to change them. They are really too abstract.
It looks good. The author will try to write a few hundred pictures. Later, he can include all the titled Douluo in the Dragon King legend, such as the Ruthless Douluo, the Passionate Douluo, the Poseidon Douluo, the Tianfeng Douluo, the Qingtian Douluo, the Pluto Douluo...
Why can't I read it if the author is here?
Too little regard for the protagonist
Xuanzi keeps insulting the protagonist and the academy. It would be better to cripple his legs, or cripple him to more than 80 levels and never make progress.
1
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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