Versatile Mage: Summon the Eight Demons at the Beginning

The writing is really disgusting. Mu Ningxue ran away from marriage and went away with another man for a day. This is the only one who can forgive me. He is really a pure green turtle.

It's so toxic that I can't stand it. The male protagonist has a warrior-level pet. Why didn't he kill Mu Ningxue and the whole family even forgiven her? She's mature.

It's a bit toxic. It was okay at first, but now the further you go, the more it looks like a nanny story, and now it's a nanny story.

It has always been inexplicably interspersed with a lot of self-centered and subjective thinking, what position, what is the law of the jungle, what is human beings as natural intruders, you have to write your philosophy and write a separate book. It is originally a human being who has passed through, you have to become a demon, and after becoming a demon, you have the feeling of becoming a human observer inexplicably. In the early stage, it was like a stallion coming from a human being. It became ambiguous, and in the middle, he said like a saint that he would just watch and not care much. Ye Chang discussed it with himself for no apparent reason for 3 or 4 chapters because of someone who was clearly written as evil. At the beginning, he said that his parents did not care about him and did not approve of him for any reason. As soon as he wrote that his mother was talented and top-notch, he immediately blamed her mother for not knowing her situation. In short, there are too many flaws. Even 2 stars can only be considered as if the subject matter is okay. I can make up a lot of content by myself, but what the author wrote is really nonsense and incomprehensible.

This is the first time I've seen a protagonist who's been raped all over France😪 Will he torture Mu Ningxue later?

I can't stand it anymore. I keep writing about the main principles, the protagonist's position, and the changes in the protagonist's personality (I know you want to write about the protagonist's strange personality due to blackness and righteousness). But the description is too much. I only update twice a day, and half of it is spent on describing the personality or emphasizing the protagonist's personality, or writing about the protagonist's resentment for previous experiences, etc. These are too much. You can write less about emotions and resentment caused by previous experiences, or the protagonist is schizophrenic. Yes, write more battles or use resources to create opportunities for growth, etc. Even if it is a flat review, some people will continue to read it and some people like to read it. The last few chapters are all about the mental problems of the protagonist, or who the protagonist deserves, and the emotional problems of the protagonist. These writings are difficult to read, and will lose a lot of people. It is inexplicable, because removing these emotional relationships or resentment towards the father and dissatisfaction with the country will not affect the reading, but if you add these, it will appear very inexplicable. For example, the comments I have written so far can be summed up in one sentence: the emotional line and life experience and destiny can be appropriately reduced, which will improve the reading experience and not lose readers. But I still wrote a lot that looks very complicated, but removing the front and only looking at the back does not affect the content of the expression🤡

So-so. The protagonist's character is too different. I think this is a problem, I have a delusion in my heart, I like to be a nanny, I can't stand firm, I owe favors every day. If you have the strength, don't use it. If you are afraid of that, be afraid of that. If you have eight demons, the world will be destroyed together.

Brother talent, you wrote what I dare not write. Update soon, dear brother. Have I finished reading? I suggest the author write 40,000 words in the morning, 40,000 words at noon, 60,000 words in the afternoon, and add another 2,000 words in the evening! One day adds up to 132,000 words😁😏. What I said is right, give me a thumbs up and help me get to the top. Let the author see it greatly

The protagonist is described as like a giant baby, very pretentious, and likes to talk awkwardly back and forth. For a while, it doesn't go well, and he thinks, "Oh, my demon is coming out, and I can't control it." Then his saint warrior personality comes out to fight with his demon personality, and then barely wins, and then merges again, and then he says that there are two voices in my head that keep arguing, and then repeats this plot. I can only say that the description is too ordinary, lacks courage and lacks highlights. It has always been like this. When chasing a girl, she will say "I am this kind of person. If you don't like me, you can stay away from me" and then she will pick up another one. This is not stupid. It has been like this for a long time. Some people in the comment area like to come out and say, "Why do you still read it if you don't like it? This is screening readers." What can I say? Xxn?

In a word, there are so many people watching the cuckold plot? Are they all into cuckolds?