Aztec Immortal

1. I think an epic person is a hero. He should have a complete life, from the naivety of childhood to the maturity of youth to the ambition of middle age to the end of his old age. He should single-handedly promote the development of the times. This is an epic. It is impossible for one person to be an epic person. Mature is born, he needs to fail and be tested, hardships temper his will, and failure tempers his will. When a man is given a great responsibility from heaven, he must first work hard on his will... No one can have smooth sailing, and growth always progresses through hardships. 2. A very true American history, well written, I like it very much. 3. If you want to reflect the wit of the protagonist, then the villain must show his IQ to the top and use repeated methods to attack the protagonist. In this way, the protagonist learns from the failure and is finally defeated. In this way, the personality charm of the villain comes out and can also support the charm of the protagonist. 4. Too little, urge for updates, urge for updates.

The author writes very seriously, and it is a pretty good orthodox historical text. By the way, I would like to say a word for the hardworking and intelligent Native Americans. The main reason why the Americas did not develop was that there were no shallow ores that could be mined and utilized, so various metal tools could not be made. Without tools, deep minerals could not be mined, and without minerals, metal tools could not be made. (Infinite nesting dolls) Another very important thing is that wheels can't be made without metal, and there are no riding animals suitable for taming in America. You can't let Americans ride bison! ┐(─__─)┌And I can't make a nose ring either! This further limits civilizational exchanges. Everything moves on feet, how big can the range be? There is no metal to use, and everyone is still working on the technology tree at home. It is difficult to develop, and it is difficult to issue government orders. It is not easy to rule a country. It is really not easy for an empire ruled by two feet to become as big as it has ever been in history. And there is also the climate problem in the north-central part. Everyone knows that there are winds in the Americas, and tornadoes occur all year round. The plain areas suitable for farming cannot gather enough fertility because the strong winds constantly blow away the shallow soil, so grass can only grow. The Indians are very smart and know how to set fires. However, after setting fires, the land can no longer be used for planting last season due to strong winds, and they cannot produce enough crops to support a large population. People cannot gather, and there are no suitable tools and livestock! It can only be half-cultivated and half-hunted, and the development of civilization is restricted. I really feel bad for them.

Judging from the early chapters, the protagonist in the author's setting is a time traveler, but I feel more like an aboriginal with modern memories. In other words, the protagonist is a new individual after the fusion of the soul of the time traveler and the indigenous people. It not only has the memory of the modern time of the time traveler, but also is well integrated into the indigenous people. The ancient poems that appear from time to time are a bit dramatic, but without those ancient poems, what's the difference between the protagonist and the indigenous people. But then this long poem emmmmε-(´∀｀; ) The descriptions of the protagonists Shulot and Avitt feel a bit gay. Two men hug each other occasionally, which feels okay, but it always feels a bit strange. Maybe it's my personal reasons. When Shulot faced the cruelty of an almost primitive society, the peace of the prosperous age in the memory of the traveler made him feel at a loss and wrong. (Although it is the Middle Ages, I think the Mexica people in the article are in a primitive society) It also makes Xuellot feel unable to accept the cruel sacrifices full of blood and death, as well as the barbaric hunting and longs for change. In the era he learned about, the torrent from the world in his memory would bring disease, death, and plunder to this land. What follows is the growth of the innocent boy. In the eyes of the elders, teenagers who participate in rebellion are destined to become victims of politics. But the wisdom given by the time traveler won the boy a chance. The elder's wisdom allowed him to see the country's hidden crisis, and the young man's wisdom allowed him to see the future of Mexica. The various reform measures proposed by the young man who wants to change the history of the Mexican people are in line with the thinking of the elders for many years, but they are more advanced. So before the old sun went out, it opened the way for the new sun. In my opinion, the elderly must not die well. I just hope the author can give the elder a good ending. The blooming flowers will eventually wither, and the evergreen trees will turn into dead wood. But some people will always remember the beauty of flowers and the shade of ancient trees. Overall it's worth a read, good luck to the author! By the way, reminder *罒▽罒*

Can they create fonts according to their own cultural beliefs? I always feel a little weird when using Chinese. I always feel that characters can be made into pictographs. To be honest, I can't imagine what the object looks like when I look at traditional Chinese characters. A nation has its own cultural beliefs. If they use our Chinese characters, what's the point? They have been assimilated in essence, which is equivalent to the disappearance of a culture. If you have different opinions, you can express them. I'm just expressing my own thoughts, not what I think. Don't curse.

Judging from the background of the times, it is impossible for a country that has just emerged from primitive society and does not have its own written language to have so many fancy ideas, and it is even less likely to be as full of suspicion and conspiracy as our ancient imperial society. Even a nation like ours that is full of internal strife has to achieve success and then die. The author has gone too far. Reading this book gave me the intuitive feeling that I was reading a Qingming novel about the development of imperial centralization to its extreme, rather than an American civilization similar to the Xia and Shang Dynasties.

After resuming the update, I was ready to read it again, but I had already read it 3 or 4 times. I couldn't stand it when I read it again in the future, because I knew a lot of the plots relatively well. Then I read it again, and there was nothing new. Then I felt that the novel was scattered, that is, it is divided into many lines, but it is not bad. The writing of each line is quite good, but combined with the author's own updating speed, it became scattered and slow, which can be called scattered. So much so that I doubt whether this book will write about the third life when the protagonist dies in the second life. This so-called immortal is just the author's earliest fantasy. It has been written for too long. I have no doubt about the author's persistence. I just wonder whether the author has written 15 million words by the time he finishes writing the second life? In this case, will you write a third life again? It's just that some of the thoughts in my mind are not enough. As an author, you just need to be yourself. After all, novels are not your main business.

The description of the environment is vivid and attractive, and the characters are vivid, from kings to peasants. The scene switching is natural and cinematic. The foreshadowing is meaningful and appropriate, and the holes can be filled. He is especially good at describing psychological activities, with characters growing up and the plot not being abrupt. The image of the old farmer can be excerpted for character analysis, which is very exciting.

The protagonist said he wanted to become a true king, and he also portrayed the love between him and Alyssa as pure and beautiful. But in fact, I can't walk when I see a beautiful woman, such as the girl who developed gunpowder. The author writes about the love between the protagonist and Alyssa, but also writes about the unclear relationship with that girl. This is really disgusting. But then the author gradually stopped writing about her and stopped the loss in time. Then another girl, Alan, appeared who was not killed by the protagonist at the beginning. I have no contact with it now, so I don't know what kind of bloody plot will follow (I haven't seen more than 500 chapters yet). As a result, when he went to conquer the southern nobles, a nobleman used a honey trap. The protagonist wanted to resist but still welcomed her, and he was coy and coy, but he almost accepted it. Good guy, the protagonist was almost killed by the woman with poison. The author really knows how to play, and I guess the protagonist will really be able to suppress his desires this time. I personally feel that the time for the development of the protagonist is tight now, so there is no time to waste on women. One Alyssa is enough, and if there are more women, the emotional line will be complicated. There must be something going on and how to complete the grand project. And since the author has focused on describing the protagonist's determination and loyal love with Alyssa, I think a single female protagonist is the best. After all, the Aztecs were monogamous.

Well, five stars first. After all, there are few people writing about American culture. Be encouraged. The protagonist is from time travel, but is a bit childish, unconventional, and a bit artistic. There is also the meeting with the elder priests. I won't complain about the scene where the protagonist is eager to show off his abilities in front of a few old political foxes. I regard it as necessary for the work. But later when the protagonist explained the text to the elders in the secret room, he included many contents that did not exist in Mesoamerica. Wouldn't the elder wonder how you know this? Could it be that he really regards you as the reincarnation of a god? From the previous introduction to the elder, it can be seen that he uses gods as a tool of governance, and it can be seen that he is a sober person. Even if he is regarded as a person with extraordinary talents, usually those who are eager to show off will be regarded as a threat, and the end will not be good. Therefore, the author still needs to express the logic more smoothly.

Or, it was still gravel shot, and whether the Aztecs' salt was mainly mineral salt or lake salt, did they know how to smelt refined salt? How will Shulot prepare to fight against smallpox? Or should we kill them all while the Spaniards are still at sea and continue to maintain isolation? When does the protagonist plan to connect with the Ming Dynasty? Civilization always requires communication. If Columbus was killed, Magellan would be even more desperate. The Aztecs must adapt to the times as soon as possible. Therefore, the most feasible way was to communicate with the Ming Dynasty, which was not interested in overseas expansion at the time. The technology and ideas gained from exchanges with Eastern civilizations are enough for the Mexicans to accept unification as early as possible and establish a more effective bureaucracy. More importantly, the Ming Dynasty at that time had the most advanced measures to treat smallpox in the world. If the protagonist sends an envoy to the Ming Dynasty, he must first send more people. If one of them comes back, he will make money. Perform Han rituals and get approval from the Confucian cultural circle as soon as possible, and then bring more gold and jade as tribute. (Of course, this is my personal opinion. The author can refer to it. If it affects the author's outline, just pretend that I didn't say it. However, I still want to advise the author that it is useless to escape blindly. Intercepting Columbus on the islands on the east coast of America is just a temporary measure. If you really want to make the Mexicans stand at the top of the world and rewrite the destiny of the Indians, death is inevitable, and the Indians have been isolated for thousands of years. They also need to pay a heavy price to adapt.)