The Body-forging Lone Wolf in Cyberpunk

I wrote a bunch of poisonous points, and then said that I had already written them all, so I would write more poisonous points.

To put it simply, it is not recommended. If you keep feeding the poison, the writing can only be continued by constantly returning to the original game plot.

There are too many words, and the dialogue is too long-winded. It's like an epic in Marvel. It's okay for you to watch the movie, as it's fun and special, but if you want to read the text, it's dissuasive, and it also gives me the feeling of a nanny novel.

The protagonist is a bit of a clown, and can dismantle heavy hammers with his hands. One year, the CD was resurrected, but Saburo Arasaka tricked him into connecting V to the black wall, causing recli to take effect in his body. Then for this reason, various forces were treated as dogs in exchange for V's treatment opportunities. Your 20-year-old body, calmness, reflexes, and almost 20-year-old intelligence are just decorations. You can face Ultra directly, but you can't solve it. There is also the stream-of-consciousness writing method of the main character's system that was widely promoted in the early stage and left people confused. In the latest chapter, the protagonist rescued President Max for the promise of saving the lark. The president patted his butt and left, asking the protagonist to rescue the lark as well. Original text "This is a technology that New America has never been exposed to... But we have also done some research in this area, but..." "But what?" Miles said, tapping the table. "I will return to New America early. There is no way. If I don't go back for a day, the political situation in the country will become more turbulent... Of course, after Li De and Alex complete their mission, I will send someone to pick you up." Even if you don't complete the additional mission, you won't even get the reward for this mission. Is the protagonist's twenty-something body just a decoration? Just let the president go. Also, Lark bypassed the protagonist and told V that the data matrix could cure V, and asked V to keep it secret from the protagonist. After that, the protagonist had a chance to confess and explain his origins, but was interrupted and never said it again. Is your system subnet communication that cannot be monitored by others just a show-off?

However, there is a problem. This system changes the memory of the protagonist, saying it is to protect him. The system also has its own intelligence. In other words, the protagonist is being manipulated all the time, like a puppet on a string. The author may want to say that the system is always thinking about the protagonist, but readers cannot think that way. Another question, it's not like a novel, it's like playing a game and watching the plot,,,

As long as the character in the original work has a name and cannot be attacked, it will be fine if he rides on the protagonist's face and shits on him

It's a bit overwhelming and I can't even get through the free chapters.

Update faster, okay. Update faster.

The plot before it was released was about entering the building to steal the chip. The protagonist did not interfere with this part of the plot in advance. The T-bug should be gone. The relic chip is still plugged into V, and there is still a setting that will kill him if he pulls it out. However, the author said that the protagonist has a solution through the system flow. For those who want to save time, it is recommended to read Chapters 75-79 before it is released. This part is also more controversial. If you can accept it, then the overall plot should be acceptable.

I could accept it at first. Until Chapter 192, I didn't know the meaning of his appearance. It was inexplicable.