Douluo's Vitality Control
by Y Layman
About This Novel
The author has a new account and a new book, "Douluo Begins, Stealing the Heavens!" >>(The undefeated master! Undefeated in his camp, he goes his own way and dominates the entire Douluo!) If you pass by, don't miss it! ......... When Xia Lan collides with Douluo...... When Xia Lan Gua Seal becomes a martial spirit...... When Tang Qiye is rejected by the gods... Where will he go? What's the use of being invincible below level 100? I want my woman to stay by my side forever, but the world of gods won't allow it? I will break the shackles of Douluo and enter the divine realm! Friends who like the book group (959774106) can go in and chat to better express their views and opinions. In addition, I have a glass heart. This is my first time writing, so I accept my opinions. If you are ignorant, please leave.
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Official(161)Scraped 11d ago
Resign
It was okay at first, but I haven't watched it since Xiaotian came out. A random apprentice is more talented than the protagonist. Who is the protagonist? Also, the relationship of the protagonist is too pretentious. On the one hand, he wants to say that he is loyal and has always liked Ning Rongrong. On the other hand, when he meets a beautiful one, he keeps warm and flirts casually, and occasionally makes a pornographic joke. You are imitating Yang Guo, showing mercy at all times, and not even a leaf among thousands of flowers touches him. Then do you know how many people have died alone because of him?
.......
It's too poisonous. It seems that no one has given Tang San the Xuantian Technique in the original work. Now, Tang San has directly given it to the protagonist. Why does the protagonist want to worship the master as his disciple? The protagonist is a person who has read the original work several times. Doesn't he know the opportunity? And if you're not the heroine, don't write too much plot. I couldn't stand it after reading two or three chapters, and I slipped away.
Trash book, discard it, write a fanfic and still follow Tang San
It didn't look good, it was broken at the beginning. Can Xuantian Kung be taught casually?
Goodbye, the protagonist Taizu. If you want to start a harem, don't talk about how dedicated you are in front of you.
To tell you the truth, I only read your book because of the single heroine. The book "Opening a Harem" is no different from other Douluo novels. To read this book, I might as well find a book with more words.
Bad review!
As a time traveler who knows the content of the original work, there was no level 30 before the age of 9, no level 50 before joining Shrek, and no level 70 before the Soul Master Competition, so he was just a loser!
How dare you write like this? Not only did you worship the master, but you also tried every means to push Xiao Wu to Tang San, and even tried to promote peace in various ways, fearing that Tang San wouldn't accept her. I stopped reading it after that, and I didn't feel happy at all after reading a few chapters.
Ning Rongrong is the heroine, I really don't like it
The protagonist has watched Douluo 8 times, and even though Ning Rongrong's character has gotten better in the later years, her character at the beginning was probably not liked by anyone other than the M-girlfriend. The protagonist also got close to her. I don't know if Ning Rongrong provoked Dai Mubai when she first entered the academy. She wanted Tang San to kill Dai Mubai after being scolded. She has a princess disease. She wants to kill someone when someone offends her outside. I don't know if there is anything more outrageous in the sect.
emmmmm
Can you guys recommend some Douluo fics where the heroine is Gu Yuena?
Who knows which heroine is the Snow Emperor?
Who knows which heroine is the Snow Emperor?
,,,,
It's so rubbish. Even the character design is rubbish. The writing is also rubbish. I don't know why it got such a high rating...
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Community(0)
Official(161)Scraped 11d ago
Resign
It was okay at first, but I haven't watched it since Xiaotian came out. A random apprentice is more talented than the protagonist. Who is the protagonist? Also, the relationship of the protagonist is too pretentious. On the one hand, he wants to say that he is loyal and has always liked Ning Rongrong. On the other hand, when he meets a beautiful one, he keeps warm and flirts casually, and occasionally makes a pornographic joke. You are imitating Yang Guo, showing mercy at all times, and not even a leaf among thousands of flowers touches him. Then do you know how many people have died alone because of him?
.......
It's too poisonous. It seems that no one has given Tang San the Xuantian Technique in the original work. Now, Tang San has directly given it to the protagonist. Why does the protagonist want to worship the master as his disciple? The protagonist is a person who has read the original work several times. Doesn't he know the opportunity? And if you're not the heroine, don't write too much plot. I couldn't stand it after reading two or three chapters, and I slipped away.
Trash book, discard it, write a fanfic and still follow Tang San
It didn't look good, it was broken at the beginning. Can Xuantian Kung be taught casually?
Goodbye, the protagonist Taizu. If you want to start a harem, don't talk about how dedicated you are in front of you.
To tell you the truth, I only read your book because of the single heroine. The book "Opening a Harem" is no different from other Douluo novels. To read this book, I might as well find a book with more words.
Bad review!
As a time traveler who knows the content of the original work, there was no level 30 before the age of 9, no level 50 before joining Shrek, and no level 70 before the Soul Master Competition, so he was just a loser!
How dare you write like this? Not only did you worship the master, but you also tried every means to push Xiao Wu to Tang San, and even tried to promote peace in various ways, fearing that Tang San wouldn't accept her. I stopped reading it after that, and I didn't feel happy at all after reading a few chapters.
Ning Rongrong is the heroine, I really don't like it
The protagonist has watched Douluo 8 times, and even though Ning Rongrong's character has gotten better in the later years, her character at the beginning was probably not liked by anyone other than the M-girlfriend. The protagonist also got close to her. I don't know if Ning Rongrong provoked Dai Mubai when she first entered the academy. She wanted Tang San to kill Dai Mubai after being scolded. She has a princess disease. She wants to kill someone when someone offends her outside. I don't know if there is anything more outrageous in the sect.
emmmmm
Can you guys recommend some Douluo fics where the heroine is Gu Yuena?
Who knows which heroine is the Snow Emperor?
Who knows which heroine is the Snow Emperor?
,,,,
It's so rubbish. Even the character design is rubbish. The writing is also rubbish. I don't know why it got such a high rating...
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