
Mystery: Achievement Error Starts from Replacing the Protagonist
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Summary of the full version: Russell, the gangster, traveled through time. After repeatedly criticizing the online novel "The Lord of Mysteries" and having repeated conversations with book friends. He declared: "When I appeared in the plot of "Lord of Mysteries", I definitely did better than the original protagonist." Immediately, he succeeded Zhou Mingrui and became the history college student Klein Moretti. ... "Brother, I'm just talking, why are you so serious?" Russell, oh no, the new generation of Klein Moretti looked at the crimson moonlight in the sky and wanted to cry without tears. In order not to fall into the dehumanizing ending in the original work, he had to embark on the road to compete for the Lord of Mysteries. ... Introduction to the serious version: The visionary has not yet ascended the throne. Darkness and dusk each covet the eternal throne. The three gods in the most ancient times hate each other and suppress each other. The fallen creator is already crazy. In this stage where careerists and conspirators join hands, in this steam age of backwardness and progress. Russell, who mistakenly entered the stage of history, how will he shoulder the responsibility of the savior? Is this the best of times or the worst of times. Everything depends on his choice. "A sinner's elegy? A combination of vertical and horizontal lines? Doomsday candlelight? A beauty in my arms? The answer is I want both." --"Declaration of Salvation·The New Generation of Mysterious Lord" ... The protagonist takes the wrong path to become a god and competes with Amon for the throne.
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Official(35)Scraped 18d ago
A lot of them
Replaced Klein, made mistakes, good guys, a lot of problems 1. The problem of promotion, where do you get the materials for promotion? From the original work, we can see that for Sequence 5 and above, except for the tomb, Amon basically ate it. You don't even have the materials, so why are you promoted? 2. Extraordinary characteristics are aggregated and modified by high-ranking people. If you meet Amon, you will die. Amon is a high-ranking person and can modify the knowledge and mental state of low-ranking people. This can completely make you fail a certain promotion and give you the wrong way to play. Even if it is correct, just modify it. The original work has cool operations. 3. The question of becoming a god, how do you become a god, do you take the lead? I won't talk about overcoming all kinds of difficulties and dangers. It's very funny when you play the role. If you don't have enough time, you will become a ghost. Even if you get to the second sequence, where will you get promoted? It's blocked and you can't go up. 4. The old man is stronger than you, so why should he give you the Sequence One attribute? He might eat you up. With the Source Castle, you can fight Amon, but you can't move up the door path. What are you going to do, look for the Fallen Mother Goddess? 5. In the end, I jumped to The Fool, but have you ever thought about how the original novel can beat An Banyu? It still depends on the goddess. Just write this character, the goddess bird you? 6. Audrey walks as a hunter? A coherent analysis? Against the odds, there are extraordinary people in the Hall family. If a hunter had a way to fight like this, they would have been discovered long ago. Anyway, there are a lot of bugs and problems, and some people actually say they are logical?
To be honest, I have no idea how the protagonist will compete with Amon for the divine position in the end, and steal the first-order attribute from Pales. It feels a bit alienating if he does, and he will definitely not be able to beat the 2+1 Amon if he doesn't compete. There are also some problems with the performance of each stage, and those promotion rituals cannot be completed in a short time. Let's see how it is written later.
I haven't read the content yet, but I feel a little uncomfortable with the title of the novel. If you were to replace Tang San across the Douluo Continent, then I have nothing to say, but I really can't accept replacing Klein. Maybe it's because Squid's portrayal is really too good. If the protagonist in the author's works is not so good, I can only say why should he replace Zhou Mingrui?
The author's conjecture is too serious
If you want to take the doorway, the Mother Goddess directly blocks the way to become a god. If you don't become a god and want to arm-wrestle with the Mother Goddess in the stars, you are basically courting death. Unless the fortune teller starts to choose and hugs the goddess directly, or wants to take advantage in the end, the goddess will ignore you at all. If the relationship between the new Lord of Mysteries and the goddess is not friendly, she really dares to forcibly accommodate the River of Eternal Darkness, become the fourth pillar, and then everyone can reopen it collectively. As for thieves, as long as Amon doesn't take the initiative to fight inside Source Castle, even trading for Palles' Sequence 1 is useless. At most, you can rely on Source Castle and Amon to get a 50-50 split, and with Adam, you will even be absorbed by Amon.
The protagonist has been arranged by the girl in the dark night since he was born. Does he still want to run away? Don't you join the Church of the Goddess of the Night and don't embrace the thigh of the Goddess of the Night? I don't know how you died later. Mr. Men has already remembered the three sequences of one and the uniqueness. You cannot become the true god of the gate path, the thief, and Ameng. You can only choose the diviner, and the uniqueness of the diviner path. In the hands of the goddess of the night, if you want to take away the thief, but don't want to hug the goddess of the night, can you let him give you his uniqueness in vain? How is that possible?
The starting point is good, secondly don't start
I feel poisonous because you let the audience member choose the hunter path. How to explain to his father the origin of his potion? The original book has already mentioned that there are extraordinary people in his family. It's a good thing it's an audience, after all, it has the mission to preach among the nobility. It's a secret among ordinary people, but it's known to nobles like his father. You choose the hunter rank for a wealthy lady? Door, Hermit, Perfection, Black Emperor, Judge Not better than a hunter?
The writing is quite interesting.
But it is not in line with the setting of the original work. Sacrifice and bestowal. This ritual can only be completed in sequence seven. Where does your spirituality come from? You said it is supported by the Source Castle, but there is no such thing as spirituality in the Source Castle. The Source Castle is the original substance, and the original substance is the embodiment of the rules. Well, and you have forgotten one thing, a very important point, Klein. When he was resurrected, he had a quilt, but the goddess of the night threw his quilt to the land abandoned by the gods. Otherwise, he would be resurrected in Sequence One and directly become the container of the Heavenly Lord. Unless you say that you traveled through time and became the Heavenly Lord, then I have nothing to say.
I just recently watched the old man in Amon's fight against Leonard. He, the King of Angels, fought a Sequence 1 as if it were for fun. He finished it in less than 30 seconds. Can the protagonist be stronger than him?
The writing is really bad, the plot design is not good, and you look down on the original Xiao Ke. The protagonist you describe is too good to say anything, and the plot of the character is too rigid to death. You know the plot, but you don't have a clear idea of how the main line will develop. You only stay at the superficial level, which is rubbish. It's like having no brain. He doesn't know how to analyze the situation, he pushes forward rigidly, and he also likes to repeatedly describe some insignificant details, like enriching the plot, but the effect is exactly the opposite. Those insignificant details reveal that the author's writing is cumbersome, the plot is garbage, and the description is blunt.
I wanted to laugh after reading the introduction. In order to maintain humanity, I compete for mystery. If you want humanity, don't advance. The two mountains on the wrong path were stuck. As soon as he sat down on the demigod's seat, Amon came to eat after smelling the smell, not to mention grabbing the sequence one from the old man and then using the sequence one to beat the 2+1 King of Angels.
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Official(35)Scraped 18d ago
A lot of them
Replaced Klein, made mistakes, good guys, a lot of problems 1. The problem of promotion, where do you get the materials for promotion? From the original work, we can see that for Sequence 5 and above, except for the tomb, Amon basically ate it. You don't even have the materials, so why are you promoted? 2. Extraordinary characteristics are aggregated and modified by high-ranking people. If you meet Amon, you will die. Amon is a high-ranking person and can modify the knowledge and mental state of low-ranking people. This can completely make you fail a certain promotion and give you the wrong way to play. Even if it is correct, just modify it. The original work has cool operations. 3. The question of becoming a god, how do you become a god, do you take the lead? I won't talk about overcoming all kinds of difficulties and dangers. It's very funny when you play the role. If you don't have enough time, you will become a ghost. Even if you get to the second sequence, where will you get promoted? It's blocked and you can't go up. 4. The old man is stronger than you, so why should he give you the Sequence One attribute? He might eat you up. With the Source Castle, you can fight Amon, but you can't move up the door path. What are you going to do, look for the Fallen Mother Goddess? 5. In the end, I jumped to The Fool, but have you ever thought about how the original novel can beat An Banyu? It still depends on the goddess. Just write this character, the goddess bird you? 6. Audrey walks as a hunter? A coherent analysis? Against the odds, there are extraordinary people in the Hall family. If a hunter had a way to fight like this, they would have been discovered long ago. Anyway, there are a lot of bugs and problems, and some people actually say they are logical?
To be honest, I have no idea how the protagonist will compete with Amon for the divine position in the end, and steal the first-order attribute from Pales. It feels a bit alienating if he does, and he will definitely not be able to beat the 2+1 Amon if he doesn't compete. There are also some problems with the performance of each stage, and those promotion rituals cannot be completed in a short time. Let's see how it is written later.
I haven't read the content yet, but I feel a little uncomfortable with the title of the novel. If you were to replace Tang San across the Douluo Continent, then I have nothing to say, but I really can't accept replacing Klein. Maybe it's because Squid's portrayal is really too good. If the protagonist in the author's works is not so good, I can only say why should he replace Zhou Mingrui?
The author's conjecture is too serious
If you want to take the doorway, the Mother Goddess directly blocks the way to become a god. If you don't become a god and want to arm-wrestle with the Mother Goddess in the stars, you are basically courting death. Unless the fortune teller starts to choose and hugs the goddess directly, or wants to take advantage in the end, the goddess will ignore you at all. If the relationship between the new Lord of Mysteries and the goddess is not friendly, she really dares to forcibly accommodate the River of Eternal Darkness, become the fourth pillar, and then everyone can reopen it collectively. As for thieves, as long as Amon doesn't take the initiative to fight inside Source Castle, even trading for Palles' Sequence 1 is useless. At most, you can rely on Source Castle and Amon to get a 50-50 split, and with Adam, you will even be absorbed by Amon.
The protagonist has been arranged by the girl in the dark night since he was born. Does he still want to run away? Don't you join the Church of the Goddess of the Night and don't embrace the thigh of the Goddess of the Night? I don't know how you died later. Mr. Men has already remembered the three sequences of one and the uniqueness. You cannot become the true god of the gate path, the thief, and Ameng. You can only choose the diviner, and the uniqueness of the diviner path. In the hands of the goddess of the night, if you want to take away the thief, but don't want to hug the goddess of the night, can you let him give you his uniqueness in vain? How is that possible?
The starting point is good, secondly don't start
I feel poisonous because you let the audience member choose the hunter path. How to explain to his father the origin of his potion? The original book has already mentioned that there are extraordinary people in his family. It's a good thing it's an audience, after all, it has the mission to preach among the nobility. It's a secret among ordinary people, but it's known to nobles like his father. You choose the hunter rank for a wealthy lady? Door, Hermit, Perfection, Black Emperor, Judge Not better than a hunter?
The writing is quite interesting.
But it is not in line with the setting of the original work. Sacrifice and bestowal. This ritual can only be completed in sequence seven. Where does your spirituality come from? You said it is supported by the Source Castle, but there is no such thing as spirituality in the Source Castle. The Source Castle is the original substance, and the original substance is the embodiment of the rules. Well, and you have forgotten one thing, a very important point, Klein. When he was resurrected, he had a quilt, but the goddess of the night threw his quilt to the land abandoned by the gods. Otherwise, he would be resurrected in Sequence One and directly become the container of the Heavenly Lord. Unless you say that you traveled through time and became the Heavenly Lord, then I have nothing to say.
I just recently watched the old man in Amon's fight against Leonard. He, the King of Angels, fought a Sequence 1 as if it were for fun. He finished it in less than 30 seconds. Can the protagonist be stronger than him?
The writing is really bad, the plot design is not good, and you look down on the original Xiao Ke. The protagonist you describe is too good to say anything, and the plot of the character is too rigid to death. You know the plot, but you don't have a clear idea of how the main line will develop. You only stay at the superficial level, which is rubbish. It's like having no brain. He doesn't know how to analyze the situation, he pushes forward rigidly, and he also likes to repeatedly describe some insignificant details, like enriching the plot, but the effect is exactly the opposite. Those insignificant details reveal that the author's writing is cumbersome, the plot is garbage, and the description is blunt.
I wanted to laugh after reading the introduction. In order to maintain humanity, I compete for mystery. If you want humanity, don't advance. The two mountains on the wrong path were stuck. As soon as he sat down on the demigod's seat, Amon came to eat after smelling the smell, not to mention grabbing the sequence one from the old man and then using the sequence one to beat the 2+1 King of Angels.
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The protagonist directly replaced Zhou Mingrui and traveled through time to become Klein, taking the wrong path to compete with Amon for the divine throne. Stable three updates




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