The Famous Detective Wakes up from a Dream
by Panyi
About This Novel
With a mysterious watch, he was taken into time and space into Detective Conan. By an accident, he did not become the protagonist of the story, but became the golden supporting role, the somewhat confused, greasy and cute uncle, Mouri Kogoro. As a die-hard fan, with his extraordinary memory, just when he was about to show off his skills, he was forced by the system's power to pretend to be confused and help the protagonist Conan complete the reasoning for each reservation. Accidents always happen inadvertently. It turns out that the plot of the story has already changed. The only one who can see through the truth is the famous detective Mouri Kogoro who seems confused on the outside but is smarter than ordinary people! Conan! What do you think? Welcome to leave a message to discuss the plot!
What Readers Think
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Official(14)Scraped 4d ago
shock!
Why don't you look at your neck when you're dressed as Moori Kogoro?
Why is the male protagonist Mouri even dumber than the original Mouri Kogoro? He looks like the author's featureless and emotionless tool, but the supporting characters don't have the distinctive charm. This is a very bad review. The male protagonist Mouri can't change the plot at all, but the author has completely changed the original case plot arbitrarily🤔
The reason why your book is not popular is because your system is the biggest failure of your writing. You constructed the imaginary plot very well. But you added some Chinese factors into it. But it makes people think that you, a Japanese, have never been abroad, how come you talk so much, know so much, and often talk about so much. It is easy to make people doubt that although the supporting characters have no IQ, this is also a big failure of yours. If this system can be structured like ordinary daily life, I believe many people will be willing to see it. Because the system you wrote is too complicated, many people are not willing to see such confusion and typos. So there are many people who don't want to read the book.
Don't enter the original party
Some of the fanciful things written do not conform to the logic of reality, and they deviate too much from the original work. People who are interested in the original work should not come, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch. It is really difficult to accept that the character of Mouri Kogoro is written like this.
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How many heroines are there? Who are the heroines?
Check-in building
The second Ming Ke novel I read (the first one was written by Eunuch)
There are too many loopholes in the system. If you can't fix the loopholes, don't talk so much about the system.
The system has too many loopholes. There are too many system dialogues in the front, and there are restrictions on this host and that. After a while, you will be given a resurrection potion. If you can't fill in the holes, don't have so many restrictions. If you have too many restrictions, you won't be able to fix the loopholes that appear later. You can just write more Conan World to make up the word count. Don't have so many restrictions, restrictions, and the system. There are too many loopholes. I hope the author can change the first few pictures. Any small system rewards or a simple system will be enough. Anyway, they are all the protagonists of Conan. Just mess around and that's it. It makes others feel that the system is very powerful. After a while, it will limit this and that. Then there are loopholes later. I personally feel embarrassed. I hope the author can change it.
Just brush up the ratings, write a lot of nonsense.
come on
Not bad, author, please keep working hard, 10,000 a day is pretty good!
Hello, boss
Well, more than 800,000 words, let's take a look. By the way, if you have nothing to do, you can also read mine... Forget it, the number of words is small, so I can't compare with yours. By the way, how long have you been writing?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 4d ago
shock!
Why don't you look at your neck when you're dressed as Moori Kogoro?
Why is the male protagonist Mouri even dumber than the original Mouri Kogoro? He looks like the author's featureless and emotionless tool, but the supporting characters don't have the distinctive charm. This is a very bad review. The male protagonist Mouri can't change the plot at all, but the author has completely changed the original case plot arbitrarily🤔
The reason why your book is not popular is because your system is the biggest failure of your writing. You constructed the imaginary plot very well. But you added some Chinese factors into it. But it makes people think that you, a Japanese, have never been abroad, how come you talk so much, know so much, and often talk about so much. It is easy to make people doubt that although the supporting characters have no IQ, this is also a big failure of yours. If this system can be structured like ordinary daily life, I believe many people will be willing to see it. Because the system you wrote is too complicated, many people are not willing to see such confusion and typos. So there are many people who don't want to read the book.
Don't enter the original party
Some of the fanciful things written do not conform to the logic of reality, and they deviate too much from the original work. People who are interested in the original work should not come, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to watch. It is really difficult to accept that the character of Mouri Kogoro is written like this.
'
How many heroines are there? Who are the heroines?
Check-in building
The second Ming Ke novel I read (the first one was written by Eunuch)
There are too many loopholes in the system. If you can't fix the loopholes, don't talk so much about the system.
The system has too many loopholes. There are too many system dialogues in the front, and there are restrictions on this host and that. After a while, you will be given a resurrection potion. If you can't fill in the holes, don't have so many restrictions. If you have too many restrictions, you won't be able to fix the loopholes that appear later. You can just write more Conan World to make up the word count. Don't have so many restrictions, restrictions, and the system. There are too many loopholes. I hope the author can change the first few pictures. Any small system rewards or a simple system will be enough. Anyway, they are all the protagonists of Conan. Just mess around and that's it. It makes others feel that the system is very powerful. After a while, it will limit this and that. Then there are loopholes later. I personally feel embarrassed. I hope the author can change it.
Just brush up the ratings, write a lot of nonsense.
come on
Not bad, author, please keep working hard, 10,000 a day is pretty good!
Hello, boss
Well, more than 800,000 words, let's take a look. By the way, if you have nothing to do, you can also read mine... Forget it, the number of words is small, so I can't compare with yours. By the way, how long have you been writing?
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