Traveling Through Conan Thirty Years Ago, Intercepting Concubine Hu Yingli

I'm a bit speechless, the character design is almost falling apart after more than 40 chapters. It started well. I took a shortcut because I was almost late. The encounter with the corpse was in line with the tiredness of being a policeman in my previous life, but I didn't want to be a policeman in this life. Therefore, I was passively involved in the cases in the early stage. The next few cases revolved around my companions, the learning environment, and the safety of the living area. It was good to proactively solve the case. However, the emotional treatment of the companions in the middle deviated from the protagonist's character. After more than 40 chapters, I was convinced when the suspect directly spoke in front of you about committing a crime. It should not be about understanding the other party's situation. Seeing the other party's crime and finding evidence of the crime depends on the situation. Whether to expose it or not, rather than seeing the poor people meet in the underworld, wouldn't that be very funny. And the main character is not a police officer. He is more active than the police every time a case occurs. If his behavior as a police officer cannot be changed after more than ten years of being a child, then it is impossible to play with Ying Feili. The frequency of five or six crimes around him in ten days is too high. Conan followed the detective Mouri Kogoro to find cases, and he followed the crime. In your case, the crime followed the protagonist. What's more, the crime happened too fast and it was not in line with the protagonist's relaxed personality. Excessive crime is not about the protagonist pretending to be cool and people will watch, but the reason why the crime was committed here and the rationality of why the protagonist participated in the process. If there was a case where the protagonist ran away, the character would have collapsed. And the daily life between the protagonist and the heroine is also broken. I suggest that the author describes how the relationship between several heroines and the protagonist slowly warms up, and then they have relationships during the case. Finally, there are descendants. In order to prevent other heroines from knowing about fake marriages, they go abroad... The subsequent plot is easy to write. During this period, the protagonist needs to maintain the relationship, and you can also write a paragraph.

Quite boring, no cheats. How can the protagonist be compared to the people inside. Moreover, the protagonist is like a person with no sense of existence. With him or without him, the plot is still the same, without any change. So what did he wear it for? Did you go there for lunch?

I've seen those who robbed Xiaolan, those who talked with Sonoko, and those who talked with Miyano, but no one would ever think of traveling back to Conan twenty years ago and snatching Xiaolan away. Cao's ambition as a thief is really strong. This subject is also a scorpion shit - the only one. Because we traveled twenty years ago in the Conan timeline, we couldn't copy the original work. Those events could only be combined with the later stories and adapted into our own original cases. At first, it made sense because I took a shortcut to school and encountered the incident, but later there were too many cases, and the NPCs were all dull. It was very tiring just to set up the protagonist's high IQ. The second thing is to combine it with the background of twenty years ago, but the author thinks one thing is the same, and writes the same thing. Finally, the writing is poor. The more you read the article, the more you read it. This novel is all about the author's YY story about the protagonist going to date the mother of the protagonist's group. The reading experience is very poor. I do not recommend it.

There is no progress in the main plot. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into these cases, but after repeating it several times and focusing on daily life, it seems that less than 10 days have passed since Chapter 45... When will the timeline be accelerated? ? I'm a little tired now

😙There are three cases in a row at the beginning, and I don't want to follow the plot and develop the emotional line at all. Going on several cases in this way does not help except to establish a high IQ character for the protagonist. After all, the first case is enough to establish the character. Later, when advancing the emotional line, I can insert a few sentences like "When did I help them solve such and such a case?" With your title and this introduction, am I here to see you solve the case? Why don't I look for criminal investigation documents to see if the case is solved? Samsung gives writing fluency

Can the author become a member?

Originally, traveling back in time 30 years was a bit of a gimmick. As a result, I was confused and frustrated. I said that I didn't want to be a criminal police officer anymore and didn't want to be so tired. Forget it, I have worked as a criminal police officer after all, everyone has cordoned off the scene and led others to forcefully join them. There is also an ordinary little detective, with no golden fingers and average ability. He uses modern criminal investigation to do reasoning. According to the standards of many cases in Conan, they are unsolved cases. You are already in your 50s and 60s 30 years ago. Without the support of various technologies, you can make some inferences and solve even a few cases. Can you think clearly? How can the criminal police really do this without the support of DNA, fingerprints, blood and other technologies? Why did it take more than ten years for previous cases to be solved? You have no basic logic Then when someone is 16 and you are already ruined, you end up saying you are too young, which is really embarrassing. Is this the former criminal police officer? If you encounter a case, just join in, or save it, and regard yourself as a savior. In the end, someone was killed. You advertise yourself so highly, and your predecessor was also a criminal police officer, so why don't you kill a stupid person? The magician Koizumi's family is also a poisonous spot. You don't have any abilities, maybe not even as good as a police officer there. Not to mention that you are wearing all the clothes, and you also know that there are magicians, but in the end, they cast spells, and you think like a fool, you think they are cheating. Also, your front feet are immune to magic, and your back feet are cursed to sneeze. You might as well say that people are scolding you behind your back. Enough to spill the beans. And then after learning about magic, your idea is to travel back in time, which is so cool. Can a person really pass through a person without leaving? There is no similar person in the world who can go to other worlds and just refuse to leave. Come back and take a look, show it off, it's so showy. Author, you should go home more often in real life. Play this song on a loop 24 hours a day. It can be seen that you really miss home. Take an 11-12-year-old sister and go to the corpse to get the soul of an adult? Former detective? Police consultant? All kinds of people were forced to join forces, but Conan didn't give in like this. Conan hasn't killed anyone yet, but he also wants to save the murderer. You claim to be higher than Conan. Look at what you have done.

The protagonist is another Conan, who simply abandons his girlfriend for the sake of the case. Just for the sake of someone you don't know, I'll just trick Belmode. The sense of justice is too strong, and he is somewhat seeking death.

Go ahead, this is the first Conan book to be worn so early. It's so novel. Xiaolan should be the protagonist's daughter, Lin Lan, haha

There are more than a hundred pictures, just like the beginning, the emotional line is blurred, and the career line is also dragged out. How long will it take to get to the plot like this?