I'm Distributing Serial Potions in Tokyo

This kind of behind-the-scenes writing, coupled with the fantasy and weirdness of the sequence, must create enough style and mystery. The current development feels a bit strange. We can only see the continuous exploration and deepening of the human side, but the protagonist side is still focusing on a few people. And since your power system is mysterious, the mysterious overall view and the writing method that constantly prepares for the climax of the final ceremony, these two points must be written very well, at least not too high. The current feeling is that the main plot of the author's protagonist is vague (I can only see that the author has been focusing on digesting the audience's potion, and I really can't see any obvious action ideas in other parts, including going to the United States, which feels like a random one). Currently, the Takeda branch line is okay, but there are also many flaws. I hope to dig deeper into the plot. I suggest that the protagonist should continue to lay the groundwork and bury the pit, and finally the human side will peel off the cocoon and finally climax, using the ceremony of promotion of the middle and high classes. You can think of each unit as a mystery. Each unit has its own protagonist and its climax. I feel that the author wanted to use the Takeda line as the first climax point, but the writing was not multi-faceted enough. This kind of multi-party linkage, including the previously planned Japanese secret spy church, should also be involved, and the multi-party forces fight around Takeda to have an epic feel. I'm giving it a four-point rating for the time being. I feel like the behind-the-scenes story still needs to be read in the follow-up development. If it still feels tepid later on, I'll give it a three-point rating. If there are any surprises, I'll give it a five-point rating.

I feel like I could write about the setting of sealed objects in detail. I feel like the officials and others don't take sealed objects seriously at all. It would be better to create a big thing with level 1 and level 0 sealed objects, so that they can discover how to deal with containment, and it can also highlight the mystery of sealed objects, rather than just weapons.

Compared to the male gun in the Japanese version, I still prefer the soldier who set himself on fire in front of the White House to protest the Israeli massacre in Gaza.

What did you write? It's better not to start the book yet

Yes, it is a very good behind-the-scenes novel. The plot has layers of characters and unique features. The mysterious sequences are well integrated. It is worth reading and recommended to everyone!

Instead of writing this kind of thing, it's better to just write about the mysterious fandom

Why write about martial arts? Write about Cyberpunk 2077. Squid writes about steampunk. You write about cyberpunk. Moreover, cyberpsychosis is directly out of control, and it will cause trouble just thinking about it, and the powerful firepower of cyberpunk will not make the combat power out of control. It's interesting to think about the information-based hackers of the Secret Peeper versus the mobile AI, and the steady firepower of the Hunter versus the Animal Gang of Warriors.

The setting is very interesting, allowing Extraordinaries to have stronger abilities at low sequences. Squid gives too little data on Extraordinary abilities.

In any case, the qualified person must have unique talents. "There are no more locks, no more doors, the doors are open and the walls are no more. No fortresses are closed to me anymore. I have access to all kingdoms. There is no law for me except the law of the ant mother. I am the key that opens all doors."

The two books written by the author are very good. If the next one also writes sequences, you can consider martial arts. I really want to see what sparks he creates? Of course, this is just a suggestion. Whether or not to write it depends on the author.