I'm Distributing Serial Potions in Tokyo
by South China Sea Sweet And Sour
About This Novel
[Extraordinary distribution behind the scenes] When Zhou Fangguan opened the mysterious trial version, he accidentally traveled through the parallel world of Tokyo with the stupid and unintelligent Sui. In order to reduce the initial pressure on his soul and to survive, Zhou Fangguan was extremely busy. In front of the stage, he is a knowledgeable and trusted occult consultant, spreading progressive occult knowledge; Behind the scenes, he is the leader of a secret organization that bestows traits and distributes magic potions, quietly harvesting the fruits of each Extraordinary's progress. Give a prudent office worker a job as a spy, and the office worker will become the first pope of a new religion; Give poor high school girls a job as prisoners, and the high school girls show unyielding resilience; Give trans people a copy of Assassin, bro, you smell so good. When the development of the times is in line with Zhou Fangguan's expectations, Zhou Fangguan will finally say the sentence in the trend of the times: "No one stands in the sky from the beginning, but the window period of the throne of heaven is about to end. From now on, I will stand in the sky." [The old book "People in the Dragon Clan, Building the Old Church" has been completed and readers are welcome to appreciate it.
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Official(15)Scraped 2d ago
It feels like it's not strong enough, and the main line of the outline is a bit vague.
This kind of behind-the-scenes writing, coupled with the fantasy and weirdness of the sequence, must create enough style and mystery. The current development feels a bit strange. We can only see the continuous exploration and deepening of the human side, but the protagonist side is still focusing on a few people. And since your power system is mysterious, the mysterious overall view and the writing method that constantly prepares for the climax of the final ceremony, these two points must be written very well, at least not too high. The current feeling is that the main plot of the author's protagonist is vague (I can only see that the author has been focusing on digesting the audience's potion, and I really can't see any obvious action ideas in other parts, including going to the United States, which feels like a random one). Currently, the Takeda branch line is okay, but there are also many flaws. I hope to dig deeper into the plot. I suggest that the protagonist should continue to lay the groundwork and bury the pit, and finally the human side will peel off the cocoon and finally climax, using the ceremony of promotion of the middle and high classes. You can think of each unit as a mystery. Each unit has its own protagonist and its climax. I feel that the author wanted to use the Takeda line as the first climax point, but the writing was not multi-faceted enough. This kind of multi-party linkage, including the previously planned Japanese secret spy church, should also be involved, and the multi-party forces fight around Takeda to have an epic feel. I'm giving it a four-point rating for the time being. I feel like the behind-the-scenes story still needs to be read in the follow-up development. If it still feels tepid later on, I'll give it a three-point rating. If there are any surprises, I'll give it a five-point rating.
I feel like I could write about the setting of sealed objects in detail. I feel like the officials and others don't take sealed objects seriously at all. It would be better to create a big thing with level 1 and level 0 sealed objects, so that they can discover how to deal with containment, and it can also highlight the mystery of sealed objects, rather than just weapons.
Compared to the male gun in the Japanese version, I still prefer the soldier who set himself on fire in front of the White House to protest the Israeli massacre in Gaza.
What did you write? It's better not to start the book yet
Yes, it is a very good behind-the-scenes novel. The plot has layers of characters and unique features. The mysterious sequences are well integrated. It is worth reading and recommended to everyone!
Instead of writing this kind of thing, it's better to just write about the mysterious fandom
May the road ahead be with you. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars
In any case, the qualified person must have unique talents. "There are no more locks, no more doors, the doors are open and the walls are no more. No fortresses are closed to me anymore. I have access to all kingdoms. There is no law for me except the law of the ant mother. I am the key that opens all doors."
The setting is very interesting, allowing Extraordinaries to have stronger abilities at low sequences. Squid gives too little data on Extraordinary abilities.
The author takes a look
It seems that vx squid is supplementing materials in various ways. The author can check it out.
Prisoner Sequence Nine is stronger than Serial Number Five, which is too much.
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Official(15)Scraped 2d ago
It feels like it's not strong enough, and the main line of the outline is a bit vague.
This kind of behind-the-scenes writing, coupled with the fantasy and weirdness of the sequence, must create enough style and mystery. The current development feels a bit strange. We can only see the continuous exploration and deepening of the human side, but the protagonist side is still focusing on a few people. And since your power system is mysterious, the mysterious overall view and the writing method that constantly prepares for the climax of the final ceremony, these two points must be written very well, at least not too high. The current feeling is that the main plot of the author's protagonist is vague (I can only see that the author has been focusing on digesting the audience's potion, and I really can't see any obvious action ideas in other parts, including going to the United States, which feels like a random one). Currently, the Takeda branch line is okay, but there are also many flaws. I hope to dig deeper into the plot. I suggest that the protagonist should continue to lay the groundwork and bury the pit, and finally the human side will peel off the cocoon and finally climax, using the ceremony of promotion of the middle and high classes. You can think of each unit as a mystery. Each unit has its own protagonist and its climax. I feel that the author wanted to use the Takeda line as the first climax point, but the writing was not multi-faceted enough. This kind of multi-party linkage, including the previously planned Japanese secret spy church, should also be involved, and the multi-party forces fight around Takeda to have an epic feel. I'm giving it a four-point rating for the time being. I feel like the behind-the-scenes story still needs to be read in the follow-up development. If it still feels tepid later on, I'll give it a three-point rating. If there are any surprises, I'll give it a five-point rating.
I feel like I could write about the setting of sealed objects in detail. I feel like the officials and others don't take sealed objects seriously at all. It would be better to create a big thing with level 1 and level 0 sealed objects, so that they can discover how to deal with containment, and it can also highlight the mystery of sealed objects, rather than just weapons.
Compared to the male gun in the Japanese version, I still prefer the soldier who set himself on fire in front of the White House to protest the Israeli massacre in Gaza.
What did you write? It's better not to start the book yet
Yes, it is a very good behind-the-scenes novel. The plot has layers of characters and unique features. The mysterious sequences are well integrated. It is worth reading and recommended to everyone!
Instead of writing this kind of thing, it's better to just write about the mysterious fandom
May the road ahead be with you. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars
In any case, the qualified person must have unique talents. "There are no more locks, no more doors, the doors are open and the walls are no more. No fortresses are closed to me anymore. I have access to all kingdoms. There is no law for me except the law of the ant mother. I am the key that opens all doors."
The setting is very interesting, allowing Extraordinaries to have stronger abilities at low sequences. Squid gives too little data on Extraordinary abilities.
The author takes a look
It seems that vx squid is supplementing materials in various ways. The author can check it out.
Prisoner Sequence Nine is stronger than Serial Number Five, which is too much.
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The protagonist travels through the ordinary urban world with the sequence origin and is almost omnipotent. The main plot is to give all things extraordinary abilities to reduce the pressure of the origin on themselves and become stronger. The setting is novel and interesting, and it is a behind-the-scenes business novel. I give it an 8.5 Rating and you can read it!
Creativity: 🌕🌕🌕🌖 Writing style: 🌕🌕🌕🌗 Settings: 🌕🌕🌕🌗 Travel through Tokyo with you for the first time to distribute serial potions and open an extraordinary era. The relatively classic Tokyo Behind the Scenes style of Wanfa Origin, which incorporates a mysterious system, is not an invincible style. The protagonist has the original character but feels that it is not strong enough. The plot is mostly about exciting battles, with very little description of mystical knowledge, and it still lacks a bit of a mysterious temperament. [Comprehensive score: 71]
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