Naruto: Immortal, I Become a Master of Forbidden Arts
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How to fight in the face of large-scale melee? Direct multiple shadow clone technique. How to fight Uchiha? Directly use the technique of Darkness to start, followed by Flying Thunder God and Eight Gates Dunjia. How to fight against an opponent who is too strong? Immediately seal away the corpses. How to beat a tailed beast? Directly up there is a wooden escape choke. How to fight Kaguya? Go straight up and hang her naked!
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Official(2)Scraped 7d ago
See Chapter 5. Conversational sentences are bad. "At that time... At that time... So..." Do you think it's okay for Sarutobi Hiruzen to talk to Danzo like this? The protagonists in the first few chapters are described quite smoothly, which is okay.
Darkness versus Uchiha? Would you like to be clear about it? People's eyes are not about whether you can see others, but whether others want to see you. If your introduction is like this, what good things can you write?
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Official(2)Scraped 7d ago
See Chapter 5. Conversational sentences are bad. "At that time... At that time... So..." Do you think it's okay for Sarutobi Hiruzen to talk to Danzo like this? The protagonists in the first few chapters are described quite smoothly, which is okay.
Darkness versus Uchiha? Would you like to be clear about it? People's eyes are not about whether you can see others, but whether others want to see you. If your introduction is like this, what good things can you write?
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