How Come You Have Such Strong Superpowers?

The main character, Our Lady, starts with a girl who looks like SB and I can't stand it anymore.

I thought I was the only one who felt that this thing was too pretentious, and the content was written in a fog, and I felt that the masterpiece I wrote was actually the author's own pleasure. He wrote part of what he wanted, and the other half stayed in his mind. The author knows it, but the readers don't.

I have only read the first few pictures so far. I am confused. I don't know what is written? I can't stand it anymore. I withdrew.

There was some self-thinking at the beginning, but I became more and more like an idiot later on. I couldn't stand it, so stop writing emotional lines. Even though the male protagonist had absorbed the desire before and returned it little by little, the writing became more and more stiff and awkward, like a person who has no self-thinking. No matter what he thinks about for a while, he doesn't think about it anymore and just lets it go. The contrast between what was written in the front and what is written in the back is too big. The number of words cannot be like this.

Mentally retarded plot, mentally retarded characters, mentally retarded

Every time there is an ambiguous plot, I get tired of it. I can't stand it anymore. On the contrary, the battle is more interesting. Can you stop writing emotional dramas and just write about urban supernatural battles? You wrote the battle plot so well, please don't touch your feelings, please.

Except for the plot about the heroine, everything is okay. The plot that was originally exciting to fight is suddenly inserted into a relationship scene, which is very disconnected.

After 20 years of Taoism, it was gone. It was mainly about the work in my hometown and my true self. They were basically the same group, and the protagonist was still under their control. Then something goes wrong and the protagonist is left alone to take the blame. Then something goes wrong again, and the protagonist is in a new Conan state. The key protagonist still has no motivation to become stronger. There are a bunch of laggards around me. Then within a few days of knowing each other, he died for someone else and even performed in public. No opinion! No character written by the author would survive 15 days. Beginning with resurrection

After reading the reviews, I thought this book was well written, but when I went in and read it, I didn't know anything about it. It didn't introduce the background of the world or anything. It didn't introduce anything. It was completely confusing and ugly.

It feels like a different person wrote it later