Dnd Adventurers Who Try to Be Cautious
by Hellraiser
About This Novel
This is just a DND adventurer who does not have enough IQ and tries to be cautious, but is often reckless. This is a story about a DND adventurer in an infinite adventure world. He may be playing a role he wants, or he may have become that role. It may be a little depressed, it may be a little happy, but this is a real world. Current world: Goblin Slayer (completed), Demonic modified version of Inuyasha mixed with Slippery Ghost (to be completed), Demonic modified version of Sword and Wind Legend mixed with ancient warhammer (coming soon), and there is also a group for reminders 852837465
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Official(22)Scraped 23d ago
Hello!
Hello, author, I am a member of the No Female Host Bar. The bar owner asked me to come for appraisal and I am also ready to support you.
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There are many bad sentences and many typos. I hope the author will revise it a little after every time he writes it.
One yuan, two rituals, three talents, four elephants, five elements, six unions, seven stars, eight deserts, nine dragons and ten unions. You take the rest.
Awesome! ! Towards hope. Charge.
The combat process is too drawn out.
And the battle is written even better by a three-year-old than you. There is also a sense of fighting, but there is nothing. Just like giving two green crossbows to those two women, couldn't you spend more time to let them practice? Isn't there a place to practice? A team that trusts each other for life and death, they don't even ask for their names, and they don't even know each other. Just like a joke. When we were kids, fighting in groups was more interesting than this.
The author's writing style is relatively niche, suitable for those who have experience in board games. The setting is cumbersome, and there is no early character development. The skull points in it are very funny, maybe this is the author's liking, but it is very unfriendly to readers. Just when I am about to immerse myself, I suddenly come to collect points, which is very funny. After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The book is good, the subject matter and techniques are good, but it is not suitable for the current reading environment, and it is too inexperienced.
I like this kind of novel, but this round of battle is not suitable for writing a novel.
What about the battle round? It's inexplicable. I can't understand it. I haven't played this game, but I watched the live broadcast host play it. It describes the frustration like this. Has anyone watched the latter part and removed the turn system? The rest of the writing is pretty good, but I don't like the combat mechanism alone. I guess the reason for the poor performance of this book is because of the combat rounds. I hope the author can work harder and write more raunchy books for the public. My chicken town house
can't read
I don't understand, I don't understand, I don't understand. There are too many dnd professional words in the work, and there are a lot of introductions.
How should I put it? The barriers are too high.
People who like or know DND will probably have a good time reading it, but people who don't know it will think it's too ****. The normal chapters are better, but when it comes to combat chapters, they are like an old lady's foot wraps. They are smelly and long. A battle of about 20 minutes can be written two or three times. Ten chapters, the word count is really good, and there are many unnecessary things. It makes me feel angry when I read it. It is a special feed. People who don't know DND don't need to read it. Just click the cross in the upper right corner. If you don't believe it, you can try it and leave a message to see how many chapters you persisted in to persuade you to quit.
There is really no need for the author to write in such detail
There is no need to write down the judgment of each attack. This is really unfriendly to those who don't know DND very well. The battle is stinky, long and unsightly because of this.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
What is? What is? What is? DND. ? What is? What is? DND. ?
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Official(22)Scraped 23d ago
Hello!
Hello, author, I am a member of the No Female Host Bar. The bar owner asked me to come for appraisal and I am also ready to support you.
proposal
There are many bad sentences and many typos. I hope the author will revise it a little after every time he writes it.
One yuan, two rituals, three talents, four elephants, five elements, six unions, seven stars, eight deserts, nine dragons and ten unions. You take the rest.
Awesome! ! Towards hope. Charge.
The combat process is too drawn out.
And the battle is written even better by a three-year-old than you. There is also a sense of fighting, but there is nothing. Just like giving two green crossbows to those two women, couldn't you spend more time to let them practice? Isn't there a place to practice? A team that trusts each other for life and death, they don't even ask for their names, and they don't even know each other. Just like a joke. When we were kids, fighting in groups was more interesting than this.
The author's writing style is relatively niche, suitable for those who have experience in board games. The setting is cumbersome, and there is no early character development. The skull points in it are very funny, maybe this is the author's liking, but it is very unfriendly to readers. Just when I am about to immerse myself, I suddenly come to collect points, which is very funny. After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The book is good, the subject matter and techniques are good, but it is not suitable for the current reading environment, and it is too inexperienced.
I like this kind of novel, but this round of battle is not suitable for writing a novel.
What about the battle round? It's inexplicable. I can't understand it. I haven't played this game, but I watched the live broadcast host play it. It describes the frustration like this. Has anyone watched the latter part and removed the turn system? The rest of the writing is pretty good, but I don't like the combat mechanism alone. I guess the reason for the poor performance of this book is because of the combat rounds. I hope the author can work harder and write more raunchy books for the public. My chicken town house
can't read
I don't understand, I don't understand, I don't understand. There are too many dnd professional words in the work, and there are a lot of introductions.
How should I put it? The barriers are too high.
People who like or know DND will probably have a good time reading it, but people who don't know it will think it's too ****. The normal chapters are better, but when it comes to combat chapters, they are like an old lady's foot wraps. They are smelly and long. A battle of about 20 minutes can be written two or three times. Ten chapters, the word count is really good, and there are many unnecessary things. It makes me feel angry when I read it. It is a special feed. People who don't know DND don't need to read it. Just click the cross in the upper right corner. If you don't believe it, you can try it and leave a message to see how many chapters you persisted in to persuade you to quit.
There is really no need for the author to write in such detail
There is no need to write down the judgment of each attack. This is really unfriendly to those who don't know DND very well. The battle is stinky, long and unsightly because of this.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
What is? What is? What is? DND. ? What is? What is? DND. ?
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DND lovers can watch it, it's quite real, the protagonists will die if they want to
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The author is a senior member of the Dog Lovers Association When killing someone, he raises and lowers the knife without any hesitation. After two lines, no one thinks there is a problem. Killing two man-eating wolf cubs, we were so sad and unbearable that no one could do it. Our mother's feelings were so overwhelming that we wrote a chapter. I'm really stupid, what the hell? ? ? I always thought that those who love dogs act so exaggeratedly because they just want to make money. Now I know that some people really think that humans are inferior to dogs.
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