Thank You for the Invitation. I Just Joined the Chat Group after Traveling under One Person
About This Novel
Su Yun, who traveled through the world under one person, found that he refreshed a rule-based ability every day, and after being able to enjoy life, he lay down. Unexpectedly, he was pulled into the chat group of all heavens. "His~ Ghost Eye Detective, Zhuge Wolong... Saber is considered kind, yo~ King Da Mao, the judge of Samsara Paradise?! No wonder these leaders are showing off!" After realizing the identities of these high-quality chat group members, Su Yun observed three seconds of silence for the group leader, which immediately inspired his fun-loving nature. Stage 1: Participate in the Reincarnation Paradise, the second-order derivative world, and the Fourth Holy Grail War. Stage 2: Tyrant Song's Great Adventure in the Ghost World. Stage three: Under one person·A big fight among parallel world travellers.
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Official(31)Scraped 5d ago
The protagonist of the novel is a fool.
I insisted on reading about 20 chapters of this novel, but I couldn't stand it anymore, so I read it again to more than 40 chapters. I want to say that the protagonist of the novel is a fool. The protagonist traveled through time and was under a person. He didn't practice at all and felt that his practice was slow. I just rely on random abilities to have fun every day. Traveling through the moon world to participate in the Holy Grail War, there is no need to make a wish if you win, just throw the cup away and it will break. Where is the face? Why don't you go blindly to all kinds of knowledge systems? It's like a boss asking you to do business. If you don't do it, you have to hope that you can win money every day by sitting at the mahjong table. You have to go back and laugh at people who are slow to make money, just like you can turn around if you get lucky one day.
A bit of a drag
I wrote about 30 chapters for the Holy Grail alone, which was a bit boring.
Too watery, too much nonsense
I like to read the plot, but the author talks too much. It feels like taking a class or reading a book. Simply by adding a person to the chat group, he can talk about everything from luck to time gun, then to the grandfather paradox, and then to quantum mechanics of indecision. Finally, he gets back to the main topic, and then rambles on again and again. You can talk about whatever comes to your mind. The matter of adding someone to a chat group can fill a whole chapter. The details are in Chapter 67. If you don't believe it, you can read it. I'm here to tell you stories, not to listen to your nonsense. I know that you have checked a lot of information and have a lot of stuff in your mind. So, do you know as much as Liu Cixin? People writing novels are not as showy as you, and there is nothing practical about it. There are many such situations in the previous chapters, only half a chapter at most. Good guy, I saw the latest chapter 67, and this time it is a whole chapter. I really can't stand it anymore. Why don't you turn it into a popular science article or just pretend to be a b-article? What else are you telling a story about? Why can't I post a picture? I wanted to take a screenshot directly so that everyone can see the lightning protection, but it's a pity.
I read two chapters, and for a moment I didn't want to read any more. How do I say the word "bad" in a fanfiction chat group article? There are several characters that make me hate me so much. That guy from 500 years ago, and another one. How could such a person's character be written in the chat group? At 8:3, I will continue to watch and see what happens next. I hope that if I continue to watch, it will not be bad, but will be better. If it is better, I will improve my evaluation. If it is worse, it will not be worse. Anyway, I gave it one point.
Too much nonsense, completely obscene, all chat groups, the reality is there is not even one chapter
It's pretty mindless, but this idiot with the ability to solidify rules chose immortality last night?
Don't you want to solidify your ability to bring good fortune and good fortune? Just solidify it into eternal life? Isn't it so brainless? The eternal chat group is just the most rubbish
Shit, if a normal person can see this, then you are like this👍
Choosing immortality is not a big problem. You are immortal. You can go to some places where time flows quickly to practice and become stronger, or practice some methods that simply consume your life force. After that, you can play reasonably and find things to do. Go through the plot and then directly beat them and crush them. If you can't beat them, run away. You are so weak. Meddling in other people's business is like living forever. It won't hurt if you are beaten. You are not afraid of people tying you up and tearing out your heart and lungs every day. You can't die anyway. All kinds of experiments are done on you. Even if you run away, there will be a permanent shadow on your psychology. There is a high probability that you will become a black man and become a psychopath to take revenge on society.
You might as well continue writing a normal Paradise fan...
Your money is a bit excessive. Just introduce a Sumiko and talk about his history. You also need to write about the height of the Tema mask. This...
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Official(31)Scraped 5d ago
The protagonist of the novel is a fool.
I insisted on reading about 20 chapters of this novel, but I couldn't stand it anymore, so I read it again to more than 40 chapters. I want to say that the protagonist of the novel is a fool. The protagonist traveled through time and was under a person. He didn't practice at all and felt that his practice was slow. I just rely on random abilities to have fun every day. Traveling through the moon world to participate in the Holy Grail War, there is no need to make a wish if you win, just throw the cup away and it will break. Where is the face? Why don't you go blindly to all kinds of knowledge systems? It's like a boss asking you to do business. If you don't do it, you have to hope that you can win money every day by sitting at the mahjong table. You have to go back and laugh at people who are slow to make money, just like you can turn around if you get lucky one day.
A bit of a drag
I wrote about 30 chapters for the Holy Grail alone, which was a bit boring.
Too watery, too much nonsense
I like to read the plot, but the author talks too much. It feels like taking a class or reading a book. Simply by adding a person to the chat group, he can talk about everything from luck to time gun, then to the grandfather paradox, and then to quantum mechanics of indecision. Finally, he gets back to the main topic, and then rambles on again and again. You can talk about whatever comes to your mind. The matter of adding someone to a chat group can fill a whole chapter. The details are in Chapter 67. If you don't believe it, you can read it. I'm here to tell you stories, not to listen to your nonsense. I know that you have checked a lot of information and have a lot of stuff in your mind. So, do you know as much as Liu Cixin? People writing novels are not as showy as you, and there is nothing practical about it. There are many such situations in the previous chapters, only half a chapter at most. Good guy, I saw the latest chapter 67, and this time it is a whole chapter. I really can't stand it anymore. Why don't you turn it into a popular science article or just pretend to be a b-article? What else are you telling a story about? Why can't I post a picture? I wanted to take a screenshot directly so that everyone can see the lightning protection, but it's a pity.
I read two chapters, and for a moment I didn't want to read any more. How do I say the word "bad" in a fanfiction chat group article? There are several characters that make me hate me so much. That guy from 500 years ago, and another one. How could such a person's character be written in the chat group? At 8:3, I will continue to watch and see what happens next. I hope that if I continue to watch, it will not be bad, but will be better. If it is better, I will improve my evaluation. If it is worse, it will not be worse. Anyway, I gave it one point.
Too much nonsense, completely obscene, all chat groups, the reality is there is not even one chapter
It's pretty mindless, but this idiot with the ability to solidify rules chose immortality last night?
Don't you want to solidify your ability to bring good fortune and good fortune? Just solidify it into eternal life? Isn't it so brainless? The eternal chat group is just the most rubbish
Shit, if a normal person can see this, then you are like this👍
Choosing immortality is not a big problem. You are immortal. You can go to some places where time flows quickly to practice and become stronger, or practice some methods that simply consume your life force. After that, you can play reasonably and find things to do. Go through the plot and then directly beat them and crush them. If you can't beat them, run away. You are so weak. Meddling in other people's business is like living forever. It won't hurt if you are beaten. You are not afraid of people tying you up and tearing out your heart and lungs every day. You can't die anyway. All kinds of experiments are done on you. Even if you run away, there will be a permanent shadow on your psychology. There is a high probability that you will become a black man and become a psychopath to take revenge on society.
You might as well continue writing a normal Paradise fan...
Your money is a bit excessive. Just introduce a Sumiko and talk about his history. You also need to write about the height of the Tema mask. This...
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