The God of War in the Marvel World

What are you writing about? If you can't write it, then don't write it. It's a waste of time and money. It was good in the past, but what you wrote after it was put on the shelf is not Dian Lao's, and there is an embarrassing plot that breaks the fourth wall. It is unreasonable to increase the Black Panther's magnetic field to 50 heavens. There is also the limit of 50 heavens in the ultimate infinite qigong. I will talk about it every three days. Your trend of eunuchs is becoming more and more obvious now, and you also said that readers like a fast pace and don't have time to set the stage. If you write well, will this be a problem? In my opinion there are several main problems: 1. The power grows too fast. It only takes more than 200 chapters to go from the 10th to the 50th heaven. The team standing on the earth in the Marvel Cinematic Universe is not that high. If it is too fast, there is no need to write. You can start from the electric current push or even the power of the beasts. The growth of the Black Panther is also not well written. There is no way to compare what the second son is like and what the Black Panther is like; 2. The protagonist's thoughts or hegemony are not enough. Why do you like Haihu? It's not that hegemony that is different from ordinary people. You don't have it. What's more terrible is that there is no growth process. In the novel, it goes from modern times to Haihu and then to Marvel. It is completely understandable that the protagonist does not have hegemony, but he cannot live without growth. And you can completely shape the protagonist into an image like hell and create a red world. If you fail halfway and cross over to Marvel, there will be no problem. However, you are completely configured as a magnetic field brat, with short-sightedness, no soul, and no ideals. This kind of protagonist should be disliked by most people; 3. The writing is illogical, or the outline is not good, and you care too much about the readers' thoughts. Reality is not logical, but novels cannot exist without it. I don't know whether the author writes the article because he likes Haihu or treats writing as a job, but no matter what, there must be a line, including the general plot line, key nodes, climax, and the protagonist's state at the end. To be honest, I didn't see it. The key structure in Haihu is actually very obvious. The power of beasts, electric current push, magnetic field rotation, 250,000-horse exploding star realm, anti-gravity realm, atomic splitting realm, self-destruction realm, and the ultimate realm. According to this, there is no problem at all. One realm, one node, and one climax are all no problem. Moreover, Marvel can fully support this power system. It can be completely sublimated at the end, from single super to multi-dimensional. It is no problem to write 1,000 chapters. Brother, there are not many people who write about sea tigers. There are only one or two books that are good. I really like this genre. I hope you can use it as an explanation to the readers.

Bullshit Martial God, he is like a loser. His self-taught apprentice starts talking nonsense and wants to kill his master when he is not strong. The key is that the useless Martial God feeds himself to the losers. Just look at his IQ. The IQ of the bullshit is online.

I just read someone's negative review, and the next second I couldn't click on it anymore. I felt a little panicked. Will I be deleted too?

In the dark novel, the fight with Captain Marvel at the beginning blew up the earth. It was obvious that there was a pitfall. During the fight, Ancient One did not take action, but it was only Ancient One who blew up the earth. The protagonist's three views are that the strong are respected, and he felt that he did not rule the earth as a pity for the weak. I have some mental problems. I really don't know why a person with such three views was put on earth. To test the poison.

It was okay before it was put on the shelves. There were no such things as (snarky, mouthy), but they were added after it was put on the shelves. In this way, it is written that only Haihu fanatics will read it, but how many Haihu fanatics are there? How many people can read this novel? Basically not many. If the author can change it, just change it.

You update so slowly that I will give up on this novel.

The creativity of this book is good, but after the middle period of writing, various combat powers were flying around. Two level 50s fought against level 97, and then a magnetic field armor was added. Anyone who wanted to wear it would destroy the country if they wanted to. When the protagonist's upper limit was only 50, a level 92 sentinel setting was added. What's even more outrageous was the addition of author elements into it. The interesting and exciting aspects of the book are a little bit interesting in the early stage, but after writing more than 100 chapters, it basically falls apart. It's like when you go to the toilet and take a few pieces of paper, and after using one piece of paper, you find that the other ones are made of iron sheet, with all kinds of gaps and thorns. When you overcome your psychology and smooth out the thorns and smooth the gaps, you find that they are covered with rust after using it.

The main character is a psychopath

This is the most awesome protagonist I have ever seen. He blew up the earth at the beginning, and it was Marvel Earth.

It's hard to find a novel about the magnetic field rotation system that's palatable, but it's only about 80 chapters, which is not enough to read!