
Luteu: Looting Reserve Soldiers Can Be Withdrawn
by Fmf Fox
About This Novel
Yin Hui, who was a wandering army for the first time, unexpectedly discovered that the plundered reserve soldiers could be cashed out! From then on, there was a crazy wandering army in the world of Tutu! The work "I Am a Monthly Card Party" with the same theme has been completed.
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Official(8)Scraped 2mo ago
The writing is not very good. The most poisonous thing is the setting of reserve soldiers.
Withdrawal of Wu Xun and withdrawal of reserve soldiers, it must be better to write "Withdrawal of Wu Xun" The withdrawal of Wu Xun means that the protagonist Wandering Army needs to keep fighting, but at the same time, if he keeps fighting, he will continue to have money income that can be invested in the game to continuously improve the strength of his account and form feedback. In this way, it will look good if he keeps fighting. Withdrawing reserve soldiers means that you only need to spend a small amount of money to have people give them to you continuously, and you can continuously earn reserves. Does this deviate from the topic? Is this still the shore of Rattu? In other words, Rattu is just your money-making tool. You are not playing games, but you are making money continuously by relying on Rattu. The reserve soldiers withdraw cash and then spend money every day to send the reserves to continue to make money. In other words, Rattu is regarded as a money-making software instead of a game. In fact, the novel is not playing games, but making money at work. From this setting, there is nothing interesting about this novel. Also, the writing style is really bad, it looks like a short essay without passion.
It's a bit embarrassing.
When I read the title of this book, my first reaction was to bring the reserve soldiers to reality🤐🤐, but it's okay, the writing is pretty good, but it's not as interesting as bringing the reserve soldiers to reality🤡
I advise you to publish all the books about the protagonist of the novel in the second chapter.
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You can still see it except for the ink stains.
Books with only one exciting point are boring
First of all, it's far-fetched to collect reserve soldiers all the time in the article. Also, what's the point of your dry-play game? You can just collect them all over the world. It depends on whether you collect a few hundred reserve soldiers. In addition, the weapon pink seems to not lose its rank.
A little suggestion
Really reduce the dialogue. A whole chapter is full of dialogue. If you read it, you won't read it. And it's more than one chapter. It's like this for several chapters. The most important thing is that the rhythm of your dialogue has not changed. There will always be one or two people who sing the opposite, and the remaining "smart people" will join together, and then at the end the group leader and deputy group leader will come out to summarize. . . .
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 2mo ago
The writing is not very good. The most poisonous thing is the setting of reserve soldiers.
Withdrawal of Wu Xun and withdrawal of reserve soldiers, it must be better to write "Withdrawal of Wu Xun" The withdrawal of Wu Xun means that the protagonist Wandering Army needs to keep fighting, but at the same time, if he keeps fighting, he will continue to have money income that can be invested in the game to continuously improve the strength of his account and form feedback. In this way, it will look good if he keeps fighting. Withdrawing reserve soldiers means that you only need to spend a small amount of money to have people give them to you continuously, and you can continuously earn reserves. Does this deviate from the topic? Is this still the shore of Rattu? In other words, Rattu is just your money-making tool. You are not playing games, but you are making money continuously by relying on Rattu. The reserve soldiers withdraw cash and then spend money every day to send the reserves to continue to make money. In other words, Rattu is regarded as a money-making software instead of a game. In fact, the novel is not playing games, but making money at work. From this setting, there is nothing interesting about this novel. Also, the writing style is really bad, it looks like a short essay without passion.
It's a bit embarrassing.
When I read the title of this book, my first reaction was to bring the reserve soldiers to reality🤐🤐, but it's okay, the writing is pretty good, but it's not as interesting as bringing the reserve soldiers to reality🤡
I advise you to publish all the books about the protagonist of the novel in the second chapter.
score
You can still see it except for the ink stains.
Books with only one exciting point are boring
First of all, it's far-fetched to collect reserve soldiers all the time in the article. Also, what's the point of your dry-play game? You can just collect them all over the world. It depends on whether you collect a few hundred reserve soldiers. In addition, the weapon pink seems to not lose its rank.
A little suggestion
Really reduce the dialogue. A whole chapter is full of dialogue. If you read it, you won't read it. And it's more than one chapter. It's like this for several chapters. The most important thing is that the rhythm of your dialogue has not changed. There will always be one or two people who sing the opposite, and the remaining "smart people" will join together, and then at the end the group leader and deputy group leader will come out to summarize. . . .










