
Parasite in the Sharingan Eye
by Fukuzawa R
About This Novel
Time traveled and was reborn as a parasite living in the eyeball. After a lot of hard work, the time traveler who finally connected to the eyeball nervous system suddenly discovered that this was actually a nine magatama reincarnation sharingan eye! ! And the owner of the eyes is... Kaguya Otsutsuki! ! (Naruto anime plot, the theater version will not be considered for the time being)
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"There are two ways to open the eternal kaleidoscope. One is to take away the kaleidoscopes of other tribesmen and transplant them into one's own body; the other is to fuse the wood escape cells of Hashirama." Neither of these two methods can become the eternal kaleidoscope. The second one can only be delayed and cannot be blinded. It requires the kaleidoscope of the same brother to open eternity. Other blood relationships cannot. This setting is not rigorous. I hope it can be improved.
Obito can't be saved at all.
He was originally booked by Banya, and Rin was also controlled. Like Obito Nagato, he had a curse mark on his heart, and there were three tails in Rin's body. The protagonist was so weak in the early stage, and he still wanted to save people?
It's very good, but some places are far-fetched and uncomfortable to watch.
There are some incongruities in the setting of the protagonist. First of all, the protagonist's body can suppress Kaguya's Samsara Eye. The protagonist's soul should be very special. Even a clone cannot be better than a mere class teacher. Also, the publicity identity of the girl in the protagonist's small number is not good. This not only attracts attention and leads to restraint, but also is harmful and useless. Not to mention her own IQ, even Orochimaru should not let her do anything. On the other hand, the protagonist's IQ alternates between high and low, and his personality alternates between emotional and ruthless. The character is not fully developed at all. Don't let other people's opinions affect you, just write the protagonist you want.
Tell me my thoughts
Obito was the person booked by Madara, that is, the person who executed the plan, so Obito died heroically and was saved by Madara at the critical moment. This was originally planned by Madara. Obito saw Rin being killed by Kakashi with his own eyes. This was also planned. White Zetsu and Black Zetsu had come out early, and the Samsara Eye was given to Nagato early. When Jiraiya left, the Third World War was about to start, so the Samsara Eye was already with Nagato during World War II, and Madara should have started moving early. The Second Hokage died in the battle. This was caused by Madara. The second generation stayed because he could escape with the Flying Thunder God, but why didn't he escape? It must have been Madara's action. Another reason is that the second generation had discovered that Madara was still alive, so he used it to lure Madara out for a decisive battle. This also explains why the second generation died in the battle and severely injured Madara.
Why don't you pick up Kaguya? It's exciting to think about it😂, Kaguya has been sealed for so long, and she doesn't even have anyone to talk to, so she transfers her consciousness back to talk to Kaguya about life and ideals when nothing happens, and she won't be the protagonist after she comes out?
Anyone?
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There are so few, I can't read enough (the author is really short and weak), why can't I just go through dozens of chapters at once?
If you have more money and less money, drink in the hotel. If I really like you, I will go directly to get your phone number and send it to me. Thank you! . ,. ,? . ! ? I'm at the school gate ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Community(0)
Official(96)
mistake
"There are two ways to open the eternal kaleidoscope. One is to take away the kaleidoscopes of other tribesmen and transplant them into one's own body; the other is to fuse the wood escape cells of Hashirama." Neither of these two methods can become the eternal kaleidoscope. The second one can only be delayed and cannot be blinded. It requires the kaleidoscope of the same brother to open eternity. Other blood relationships cannot. This setting is not rigorous. I hope it can be improved.
Obito can't be saved at all.
He was originally booked by Banya, and Rin was also controlled. Like Obito Nagato, he had a curse mark on his heart, and there were three tails in Rin's body. The protagonist was so weak in the early stage, and he still wanted to save people?
It's very good, but some places are far-fetched and uncomfortable to watch.
There are some incongruities in the setting of the protagonist. First of all, the protagonist's body can suppress Kaguya's Samsara Eye. The protagonist's soul should be very special. Even a clone cannot be better than a mere class teacher. Also, the publicity identity of the girl in the protagonist's small number is not good. This not only attracts attention and leads to restraint, but also is harmful and useless. Not to mention her own IQ, even Orochimaru should not let her do anything. On the other hand, the protagonist's IQ alternates between high and low, and his personality alternates between emotional and ruthless. The character is not fully developed at all. Don't let other people's opinions affect you, just write the protagonist you want.
Tell me my thoughts
Obito was the person booked by Madara, that is, the person who executed the plan, so Obito died heroically and was saved by Madara at the critical moment. This was originally planned by Madara. Obito saw Rin being killed by Kakashi with his own eyes. This was also planned. White Zetsu and Black Zetsu had come out early, and the Samsara Eye was given to Nagato early. When Jiraiya left, the Third World War was about to start, so the Samsara Eye was already with Nagato during World War II, and Madara should have started moving early. The Second Hokage died in the battle. This was caused by Madara. The second generation stayed because he could escape with the Flying Thunder God, but why didn't he escape? It must have been Madara's action. Another reason is that the second generation had discovered that Madara was still alive, so he used it to lure Madara out for a decisive battle. This also explains why the second generation died in the battle and severely injured Madara.
Why don't you pick up Kaguya? It's exciting to think about it😂, Kaguya has been sealed for so long, and she doesn't even have anyone to talk to, so she transfers her consciousness back to talk to Kaguya about life and ideals when nothing happens, and she won't be the protagonist after she comes out?
Anyone?
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There are so few, I can't read enough (the author is really short and weak), why can't I just go through dozens of chapters at once?
If you have more money and less money, drink in the hotel. If I really like you, I will go directly to get your phone number and send it to me. Thank you! . ,. ,? . ! ? I'm at the school gate ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh































