Magical Top Student

The writing and plot are completely different from each other Could you please ask the author who wrote the beginning to continue?

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Okay, another crappy novel. The highlight of the book is fighting against advanced civilizations. However, I saw some magic network, and then something absorbed him, and then he won. By the way, the enemy who can exterminate the galaxy only appeared in about ten words, and then used some of his own creations. Others were confused and ended without explanation. The last chapter was completely wrong. How did Riko become a little girl? It was as complete as writing a table of contents? I was really looking forward to this book, but I was disappointed again. I said I didn't want to read the author's book anymore, and I asked for leave a few days ago, but I didn't keep my word. Anyway, the author looked like he was breaking a jar, and he was speechless. I don't want to say more. I will keep this comment here for people to read. You, the author, will delete it and I will repost it, indicating that it has been copied. You have banned me from my account thousands of times. Please do it and cherish it.

It's over, I'm so emotional

I like the protagonist's experience in the Magic Continent and the period before that the most.

The beginning was quite interesting, but things started to go wrong after the academy competition. It was not very rigorous, war broke out casually, and the battle involving hundreds of thousands of people ended hastily. In addition, the plot is too jumpy and has no transition. I often feel confused after reading one chapter and then the next.

I don't have a problem with slaps in the face, but it's disgusting if it's a coincidental slap in the face every time. And a few times it was too blunt, such as the sound transmission circle... Such a big event was written just to slap in the face... Just once, it will be like this every time... The protagonist is probably the illegitimate son of the God of Slap in the Face.

It looked pretty good originally. Then I saw what the dwarf said about the Chosen One and was speechless. That way I can tolerate it. This chapter. . Why are the enemy and several young knights who don't know the magic apprentice come forward one after another. I also surrendered to the enemy without thinking. If it's the main character, forget it. There is also an army without a high-level knight or magician? It feels like the author is unrealistic in order to create an atmosphere. The enemy troops are all described as idiots

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone comment?

Those who criticize this book, why don't you read it first? The author obviously writes so interlockingly that you can't criticize me until you finish reading it. There is also such a touching ending. If you can't understand it, don't criticize me.