Starting from Zhongnan

How to say it? The previous story is indeed good and very attractive, but it was written crookedly by the author. Where is the crookedness? First of all, the Jin Yong world that the author travels through is basically the world of relying on heaven and slaying dragons, but the result is that it feels like a Gu Long novel. And the most disgusting thing is, how can it be classified as first-rate or second-rate? Generally speaking, those classified in this way are junk novels. Moreover, the writing style is really not good. There are no descriptions of battles, martial arts, etc. What kind of coercion does it create? It's completely metaphysical content, no, it's completely Master Ma style combat.

Xuanyang has memories of past lives and is a Taoist master. He has a detached mind and will not be bound by morality at all. Doesn't the author know the rules and regulations of Taoism?

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The author should know that there has never been a Daluo Jinxian, right?

What are you writing about? Have you seen it yourself? There are no ten chapters, every chapter is extremely poisonous

I read about ten chapters, and the chapters are extremely poisonous. As the sect that was once the best in the world, as mentioned above, Quanzhen has all the hidden veins. What is the concept of inheritance of a sect? He also collects martial arts skills everywhere! From traveling through time travel to practicing martial arts to traveling, you have to work hard to gain a reputation for being a true hero, prepare for reconstruction, and steal opportunities and multiplayer cheats everywhere! You have cultivated Taoism to the point where it has gone to the dog's belly, and you are returning it to the Taoist master. Where is your Taoist master Ti? I haven't studied anything of my own, and I don't understand the division of realms. When did second- and third-rate people become masters?

The front is fine, but what's going on behind? Stop talking and give up.

Yitian has no connection at all with the rest, and didn't you want to create your own martial arts? In the end, when you were 100 years old and ascended, your martial arts was nowhere to be seen? There are still many loopholes that I won't mention. This is too poisonous.

Is there something wrong with the realm? Shouldn't one be a master after being born? Why is the Grandmaster here no matter how innate it is? If it doesn't work, can you remove the Grandmaster? According to your writing, Xiantian Hou is a great master?