Pirate Vinsmoke
by My Wife Exchanged Me For Candy
About This Novel
Gods, humans and ghosts in heaven and earth, demons and demons are in chaos in the world, the six paths of reincarnation are empty, and the Nine Transformations of Heavenly Demon Art is here! This is a little sparrow who is cultivating step by step to reach the top and wants to appreciate everything in the world. "Nine Transformations of Heavenly Demon Jue", please support me a lot! ! Bringing RC cells to the world of pirates, what kind of sparks can be produced by the combination of Hezi and Haki? Yuhe, the flying horde is invincible; Jiahe, wraps the whole body with unparalleled defense; Linhe, wraps around the body to become immortal; Weihe, the powerful murder weapon! But the RC cells here don't need to eat people, they eat the powerful Neptunes in the pirate world hehehehehe! ! So don't be afraid!
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Official(29)Scraped 2d ago
Give up as soon as you see joining the revolutionary army
Yu He has awakened and still works like a dog for others, so what's the point of being reborn?
The protagonist is the same age as Sanji, and Sanji is two years older than Luffy, and Sabo is two years older than Luffy, or three years old, I forgot. But the protagonist can't be bigger than Sabo.
Did the author make a mistake?
The one in Chapters 71 and 72 is Lin He, not Wei He. I hope it can be changed. It looks awkward.
The Eternal Whitebeard Pirates, the chapter name has been changed back, this is my favorite novel
The Eternal Whitebeard Pirates, the chapter name has been changed back, this is my favorite novel
Thank you for your support! !
I rarely come to Chuangshi, so I cannot see the comments of some friends in time. Please forgive me. Thank you very much for your support. With your support, there will be no problem! ! In terms of updates, there will be two updates every day. Now I am filling in the previous holes. I said that I will not eunuch any of my books no matter what, so the previous holes have to be filled in. Thank you again! !
Yu He can't fly? I remember I can fly. Could it be that the ghoul I saw was fake?
Hezi + domineering = Hezi who has changed his color
( '?7?1 ' ) Hehehehehehehehehehehe
Very good, and to my liking. .
Hmm... why is Ryota Kise's picture used on the cover? That one is obviously from another anime
The anime that Kise Ryota is in has nothing to do with this. I hope you can pay attention next time and don't use random pictures.
There are so many typos and it's very uncomfortable to read.
There are too many typos and wrong sentences. I often feel confused while reading. I have no idea what is written. I really don't understand it unless I think about it carefully. Then the world of Pirates is very passionate. I don't know why it's not passionate at all. It just feels like the plot arranged in the game, without the ups and downs. Most of the character descriptions also have an NPC feel. Although there are various twists and turns in the development of the plot, the description feels very bland, and the crisis or intense situation is not described. Some details, such as the description of the protagonist's battle with others, are a bit vague. There are very few facial expressions or other details of the characters during the dialogue or other times. It can be said that there are none. I won't mention the others because I can't remember them at the moment. Reading it feels like reading a more detailed introduction. The character descriptions are also different from the original work, and the characters are very simple. For example, when the protagonist and Long first met, the protagonist said that he wanted to join the revolutionary army, but Long didn't even have simple suspicions. Although he is a child, you must know that the OP world is full of various black technologies, and the Devil Fruit alone has several abilities that can turn people into children. Especially if he is a prince of a notorious country, are he not afraid that he is here to cause trouble? As the leader of an organization, it's too casual. Moreover, the protagonist has traveled through time for so long and has no clear ideal or goal. Although I mentioned before that the Hehe Revolutionary Army overthrew the government, it felt like I just happened to meet him and didn't know what to do. It felt like I was taking things easy. There were a lot of things I wanted to complain about while reading it, but this book is still worth reading, and it is better than most other OPs. However, I hope that when writing an OP fanfic, the author can read the original work again and again, and carefully observe the character and various aspects of the characters in the original work, hoping to write a better book.
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Official(29)Scraped 2d ago
Give up as soon as you see joining the revolutionary army
Yu He has awakened and still works like a dog for others, so what's the point of being reborn?
The protagonist is the same age as Sanji, and Sanji is two years older than Luffy, and Sabo is two years older than Luffy, or three years old, I forgot. But the protagonist can't be bigger than Sabo.
Did the author make a mistake?
The one in Chapters 71 and 72 is Lin He, not Wei He. I hope it can be changed. It looks awkward.
The Eternal Whitebeard Pirates, the chapter name has been changed back, this is my favorite novel
The Eternal Whitebeard Pirates, the chapter name has been changed back, this is my favorite novel
Thank you for your support! !
I rarely come to Chuangshi, so I cannot see the comments of some friends in time. Please forgive me. Thank you very much for your support. With your support, there will be no problem! ! In terms of updates, there will be two updates every day. Now I am filling in the previous holes. I said that I will not eunuch any of my books no matter what, so the previous holes have to be filled in. Thank you again! !
Yu He can't fly? I remember I can fly. Could it be that the ghoul I saw was fake?
Hezi + domineering = Hezi who has changed his color
( '?7?1 ' ) Hehehehehehehehehehehe
Very good, and to my liking. .
Hmm... why is Ryota Kise's picture used on the cover? That one is obviously from another anime
The anime that Kise Ryota is in has nothing to do with this. I hope you can pay attention next time and don't use random pictures.
There are so many typos and it's very uncomfortable to read.
There are too many typos and wrong sentences. I often feel confused while reading. I have no idea what is written. I really don't understand it unless I think about it carefully. Then the world of Pirates is very passionate. I don't know why it's not passionate at all. It just feels like the plot arranged in the game, without the ups and downs. Most of the character descriptions also have an NPC feel. Although there are various twists and turns in the development of the plot, the description feels very bland, and the crisis or intense situation is not described. Some details, such as the description of the protagonist's battle with others, are a bit vague. There are very few facial expressions or other details of the characters during the dialogue or other times. It can be said that there are none. I won't mention the others because I can't remember them at the moment. Reading it feels like reading a more detailed introduction. The character descriptions are also different from the original work, and the characters are very simple. For example, when the protagonist and Long first met, the protagonist said that he wanted to join the revolutionary army, but Long didn't even have simple suspicions. Although he is a child, you must know that the OP world is full of various black technologies, and the Devil Fruit alone has several abilities that can turn people into children. Especially if he is a prince of a notorious country, are he not afraid that he is here to cause trouble? As the leader of an organization, it's too casual. Moreover, the protagonist has traveled through time for so long and has no clear ideal or goal. Although I mentioned before that the Hehe Revolutionary Army overthrew the government, it felt like I just happened to meet him and didn't know what to do. It felt like I was taking things easy. There were a lot of things I wanted to complain about while reading it, but this book is still worth reading, and it is better than most other OPs. However, I hope that when writing an OP fanfic, the author can read the original work again and again, and carefully observe the character and various aspects of the characters in the original work, hoping to write a better book.
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