The Prodigal Who Lived in the Republic of China

The article is well written, but I read about 40 of them, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. It's not other places, it's the name for Little Japan. The devil is the devil, why is it called Showa? Showa is what they call themselves. They call themselves "Showa men", but they are just one. They are just a bunch of bastards. I feel that the term "Japanese" is more appropriate, or even "Japanese pirates". When I saw the words Zhao He, I was really disgusted. Plus, I know that there is a Japanese school in every province in China. The hatred of our ancestors will never be forgotten.

The plot is a bit tender and the writing is a bit contrived! The exhilarating feeling of cheating and pushing horizontally is not described, and the feeling of pleasure and revenge is almost meaningless. The protagonist has extraordinary powers, including internal strength, light skills, sword skills, and secret techniques. He assassinates several soldiers and agents who are normal people. Every time he writes, he seems to be drained of his physical strength and exhausted. Is this appropriate? After every battle, the protagonist is as hungry as if he wants to eat a cow. What the protagonist consumes in fighting is not his physical strength but his potential, right? He robbed a gang leader who helped the Japanese sell opium and got one hundred taels of gold + one hundred taels of silver. And if you kill a gang member in the past, you can touch at least a dozen oceans (nearly a dozen taels of silver). Moreover, the main characters are basically engaged in assassination, so they don't prioritize learning hidden weapons. Isn't this a waste? There is also the contact and conversation with the red team organization. The plot is very immature and it is a bit embarrassing to watch.

The book is good, at least it is bloody, but could you not write the Japanese devils as Showa soldiers? This is too polite, the Japanese devils are Japanese devils, will you be blocked if you write like this?

The author's writing style is not good enough, and the writing is nondescript. The plot and dialogue are uncomfortable and embarrassing to watch. In addition, there are also some places that are too long-winded and have to be explained and introduced in places that should not be limited to the number of words.

It's too contrived, and my writing style is lacking.

Or just say "Japanese" and use the name "Showa". It's so awkward.

The overall plot advancement is relatively clear, and the module settings are okay. However, some character settings are not good enough and do not fit the turbulent setting of the Republic of China. Most importantly, there are too many modifiers, which makes it difficult to read. After barely reading fifty pictures, I couldn't stand it anymore. Barely a 3 points.

There is obviously a problem with the purchasing power of the silver dollar!

This author is probably writing a drama, and the words and sentences give people goosebumps.

Do you write essays? It's a lot of talk, just like writing in plain language. Isn't it good at writing in vernacular? Do you have no confidence in your own work?