The Beginning Becomes a Strange Place in the World of Martial Arts

Your transformation is weird. Apart from having two more abilities, what is the difference between you and other warriors? And a lot of things kept repeating, two, three, three or four times. Of course, I didn't see the charge, so I won't give a bad review, because in the early stage, many authors were like this. I left, I was so angry after reading it, I had a headache.

Tempering the body, cultivating the physical body and blood. In the Qi Meridian Realm, you can cultivate your inner strength. 1. In the late stage of the body tempering stage, internal strength is developed. 2. Directly practice internal strength techniques to generate internal strength. At the peak of the Qi Meridian Realm (half-step innate), the eight extraordinary meridians are opened. Open one meridians to open seven meridians. Three or four warriors of the same lineage compete against Yuangang Realm. Two warriors who opened the Seven Meridians competed against Yuangang Realm. Yuangang realm (Xiantian) opens up the eight extraordinary meridians and eight meridians. Concentrating the mind (grandmaster), condensing the spirit and will.

I don't know what other people think or say, but it's quite to my liking. Come on, author.

The writing style needs to be improved, the plot description is too simple, and some unnecessary level descriptions do not need to be emphasized again and again.

Don't say anything, just look at these three covers

Seeing here, the protagonist's golden finger is ready to be used up! You can transform into a weird person or borrow weird powers. Do your skills have any function? ? ? ? ?

The poisonous point is that the plug-ins are powerful, but the subordinates are all white-eyed wolves, and they are of little help to the protagonist. The protagonist also needs to show force to conquer one by one... What's the point? At the rate the protagonist is getting stronger, there is no point in being defeated. Moreover, the protagonist treats those people as treasures and holds important positions

A book of 600,000 words still needs water. How many people can read your crappy book? One insignificant thing can be watered down for more than ten chapters. I'm really convinced.

I watched it, it's quite satisfactory, above average, it has its own thing, but the setting is a little too slow, just like I saw someone commenting that you are trying to sell someone else's meat, there is no bright spot or attraction in the early stage. And when you set it up, another poisonous point is that the protagonist himself is weird, but he still has to learn the secret method of weird fusion to improve his strength. Shouldn't this be instinctive? Others use the secret method of weird fusion to fuse a weird into their body and then increase their strength, but the protagonist originally has a weird in his body. You should all understand what I mean. Overall, this novel is worth reading and there are no major flaws. It is recommended for book lovers who are short of books to read it.

Kill more decisively and strike first in person, add more supporting roles to match up with brothers and friends, and make the weird and unpredictable, a little more evil and a little more scary, the best way to create a horror movie effect. The fog is filled with darkness, and various horror monsters appear to confuse the other world, and then increase your own strength. , There are too few realms, at least 12 immortal realms are very detailed, otherwise it will be difficult to write a realm later. Don't divide it too much, otherwise it will be watery. Open up more realms and have more heroines to increase the fun. Come on, use your imagination.