First Clan

The writing is okay, but the previous chapter and the next chapter are completely different. If the author has time, he can restore the previous chapters. What do you think?

Is it possible for everyone to be equal?

The first half of the National War was written in such a majestic and majestic way that I was hooked as soon as I read it. But why is it getting weirder and weirder as you write? Suddenly came technology. Ascend to other realms. The key is that this style of painting is becoming more and more abnormal. The characters' personalities are also different before and after. It's like a substitution later. There are also various names. So embarrassing. What Dragon Knights? What Tianyi Group? Dark girl Tanya? This is somewhat of a middle school. The author of the first half is a master of history and Chinese studies. The second half is just a little two-dimensional literary niche?

Since adding technology and stuff, this novel doesn't seem as majestic as before. The real man throws his head and sheds blood, lying drunk on the battlefield. Jun Mo laughs. How many people have fought in ancient times. Zhao Ning is reborn and fights all the way, turning his hands into clouds and rain. Various strategies, and there are ten years of national war. The real man joins the army to serve the country, and devotes himself to serving the people of the world. It is really exciting to watch. The real man is really a hero, all kinds of heroes are in the sky, and the characters and scenes are really well written. Alas, the writing in the front is really good, but the back part always feels broken, the characters are ruined, and many of the names are not suitable for the situation. The Dragon Knights, this kind of thing should not be in the novels of the Western magical world. It starts with Wuling Hongguang, then the Dragon Knights, and then the dark girl Tania. It seems uncoordinated. The contrast between the characters before and after is too big. Zhao Ning dealt with things indifferently in the past. Once the technological society comes, he has become a little master of scolding. He has lost the temperament of relegating immortals before, and he is an ordinary urban male protagonist. It would have been better if it ended earlier, the writing is good, the feelings of family and country, the intrigues in the court, and the characterization are extremely realistic and delicate, but the later part is ruined, everything is gone, can't the second half be republished as a side story?

I suggest you read the previous chapters carefully to see if they are correct, otherwise no readers will be able to read them.

Is QQ Reading a joke? The severed palm is too serious

Where is everyone equal? This rule will never exist, because there are people who have the world, and who can figure out everyone's thoughts?

The protagonist is too loyal to the court and has no choice but to give up.

The writing is really good, 😸, not many people read it.

You can choose to be a saint or a layman, but you cannot choose to have everyone worship you like a saint and forgive you like a layman!