Versatile Mage: I Can Travel Through the World of Classic of Mountains and Seas

The author has two female protagonists. Do you want to save one for Mo Fan? Or write Zhou Min to Mo Fan. I remember Zhou Min was supposed to like Mo Fan in the original work. Does the author have a heroine named Qin Yu, Ding Yumian, Irene Asharuya?

Add an Apasi as a maid! ! Come on come on! !

Quanfa + Classic of Mountains and Seas, with such a good subject, why do you insist on those female protagonists? The reason was even more ridiculous, and he also said that the heroine would be scolded if she didn't accept it. For example, the mountains and seas can be written as another summoning plane. The awakening of the protagonist opens the passage to the plane of the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Later, some people awakened the alien beasts in the Classic of Mountains and Seas. Alien beasts also descended on the ancient mountains and rivers. The battle between the emperors of the magic plane and the alien beasts of the Classic of Mountains and Seas balances the fighting power. Isn't it a very grand and exciting story? Why do you have to insist on being a stallion? Isn't the original heroine like you a vase? What's the use? The protagonist has to take care of the vase at all times. Wouldn't it be great to add two more original characters to add some color to the plot? In all French fandoms, this girl wants to win over that girl. Also, Stallion does not have multiple heroines. Each heroine has to write their own wonderful deeds. Instead of being a vase next to the protagonist, everything depends on the protagonist.

I'm really curious, I've read so many fics, %%Goldfinger, starting in Bo City, with multiple heroines in the harem Will articles with these attributes really be different? It starts with the Mo Fan brothers, and then awakens, protecting Xinxia from being bullied by gangsters, the demon hunting team, Tang Yue's suspicion, and the disaster in Bo City. Then the original plot and sex were added along the way. I'm really a little tired By the way, the difference may be because the author didn't read the original work carefully and the settings were different. Is there any fan who would recommend something a little different?

In the original book of Jinlin City, there is only one commander-level pseudo-dragon, and there is Lu Nian. Here you directly say that there is a sub-dragon monarch, three sub-dragon commanders, there are pseudo-dragons and Lu Nian. It's disgusting to see. How can no one know about so many monsters, and let a group of middle-level monsters know about it? Students come to explore, disgusting readers, what if there is no male protagonist Mo Fan? He can only defeat one leader of the pseudo-dragon in demon form. The author arranged three sub-dragon bloodline commanders and monarch sub-dragons. Only when this mage comes can he guarantee that he will not die. It's so disgusting.

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It's really a waste of time. You have to take care of everything, just like a nanny. You don't get paid and then use your treasures to help other countries clean up the monsters. It's pure retardation.

The light system is changed to 5.3, And the fire system is changed to 5.5. I originally thought that bloodline talent could absorb spiritual seeds infinitely, and the multiplier would continue to increase later, and then the second creation would make an addition, but it was discussed by many readers. Sorry, I didn't figure it out when I wrote it! ! !

I don't want to give it a star. In the original work, Mo Fan relied on chance. You took all of Mo Fan's path and took away everything that originally belonged to him. Based on this, it is impossible for him to break through to the advanced level, and he has not reached the advanced level. How could he still stay in the national team? It's a miracle that he is alive. You didn't write anything that you should write, and just skipped the heroine. She said it was quite positive. I don't understand. Where did your score of 8.7 Come from? The writing of "Like a Dog" is completely following the path of the original Mo Fan. If you are invincible, just be invincible. Just treat it as a cool article and you still have a harem and write it like a dog. How can you have the nerve to open it? You should at least write more carefully, portray the characters better, and fully describe the characters. You skipped most of the process, such as looking for Monkey in the ancient capital Mo Fan. How did he get there? You haven't written anything yet, it's just because you are too lazy to write, and you don't want to write about porn, so you write more positively than anyone else. People who know how to read this book will give up within three hours of reading it, and those who don't know how to read it still read it as a good book. If you have to impose some things that you don't have, just add them. It's reasonable. But is the purpose of these things in your family just to recruit the harem heroine? Logically speaking, shouldn't it be about improving strength? I think you just live in a woman's belly.

Can we write less of this kind of mindless plot? Killing people and stealing goods? In the magic city? His brother, this is a modern city, with surveillance everywhere, as well as the Demon City Demon Hunting Team, the Magic Association, and the Judgment Club. Are they freeloaders? Do you believe that as soon as there is a magic fluctuation, someone will come immediately? There are also the sub-dragons in front who are not strong enough to dare to summon you. Even if their bloodline becomes a Chinese dragon, what will happen if they become a true dragon? Can it be deprived by force? I remember that full-time mages don't have this ability, right? Otherwise, Mo Fan can pretend like this with Yan Ji? Believe it or not, the Dongfang family has already passed away? Moreover, a full-time mage is a modern city that values ​​​​face. Those in power need to consider whether they will be drowned by the people's spit when doing anything! If you didn't need these, Su Lu would have killed Shao Zheng, your little Kalami! Always write books with those fantasy and brainless novels! Don't consider other factors at all