Douluo Peerless: Traveling Through the Past, Qian Renxue Asks for Help
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[Peerless Tang Sect Fanfic] [Genius Stream] [Time Travel Stream] [Multiple Female Leads] [Academy Stream] Huo Hao opened his eyes, and time flowed in his eyes. He traveled through time and became the son of destiny, but was unfortunately arranged by Huo Yuhao, the king of Tang Shen. When the awakened martial spirit soul contains the attribute of time, and the guidance of fate makes it merge with the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, the huge spiritual power unexpectedly opens a time tunnel to thousands of years ago. ... Today, ten thousand years later, evil soul masters are plundering, the Sun Moon Empire and the three kingdoms of the original Douluo Continent are in constant dispute, and the aloof Tang Shenwang looks down on the world ruthlessly. When the time tunnel opened, hidden weapons and soul guides collided again, and angels and Rakshasa returned to the world. Huo Yuhao took up the banner of anti-Tang Dynasty and sounded the clarion call for counterattack. Will he become a loyal dog, or will he take turns as a god-king to come to my house today? ... A few years later, the God King fell and Douluo Continent ushered in a new era. Huo Yuhao watched Shrek Academy become Wuhundian Academy, and he knew that he had successfully changed history.
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Official(55)Scraped 6d ago
Why do you write so many female protagonists?
I secretly opened the book and wrote it with multiple female protagonists. Oooh, old fans want to read it without a female protagonist, or with a single female protagonist.
The author writes about the topic very well. But Qian Renxue really couldn't bring her along. Too bad
Don't refute what I say below. That's what the original work is. When he was pretending to be Serum He, he clearly knew that Tang San was the son of the enemy who killed his father. What came to mind was not to kill Tang San, but to take him as a subordinate. The second reason was that his fighting talent was too poor. The level 1 gods are not as good as Ultimate Douluo, they are too holy, point 3. If you let the enemy go at every turn and don't do anything aboveboard, you will become an enemy. Who cares about you? Really can't carry it. Wuhundian has three top love brains
The writing is not good. I feel that the author still underestimates Dou Er and Tang San. How dare you go to Shrek even with Qian Renxue? Are you not afraid of the big hand of the God King? Why don't you quickly moisten the sun and the moon? Ma Xiaotao is also confused about that part. Why do you want to help someone who will get yourself into trouble?
The first section is fine, but when it comes to Bibi Dong, it's quite a stretch. This is my personal opinion. Evil is evil (since I was a child, my resources, life, status, and protection have been among the best in the continent. I want to betray as soon as I am cheated by others. Qian Xunji is definitely evil, but this does not mean that Bibi Dong is a good person. He can make himself Enemies of one's own forces visit their most secret things, what good things they can be, and their character and behavior are all rubbish. The disciples they teach are also rubbish. They help the sworn enemy of their sect and betray their sect.), Whitewashing is really disgusting. Isn't it possible for Qian Daoliu to cooperate with Bibi Dong?
I won't give you a rating now, but let me ask a few questions. First, what does the protagonist's system do? What is the use of this system when the protagonist has been a fool for 12 years? Second, now that the protagonist's mother Huo Yuner is dead, will Huo Yuner be resurrected later? Third, due to the arrival of the protagonist, the entire Douluo Continent was blocked. Huo Yun'er died, and the protagonist did not collect her soul. In this way, Tang San could not receive her soul. So, would Huo Yun'er's soul dissipate quickly? Fourth, if the protagonist does not resurrect Huo Yuner later, is it inappropriate for the protagonist to still be called Huo Yuhao? It would be better not to travel through time. At least Huo Yun'er has lived with his son for 12 years. His son is a normal person, and in the ending, Huo Yun'er is resurrected. Although the ending is not very good, some people died in the middle
Maybe my expectations for an 8.0 rating were too high
There are too many loopholes, and there is no time paradox. You changed the details 10,000 years ago, but 10,000 years later, it is not that simple. In terms of the Ice and Fire Eyes, you picked all the herbs. If Tang San had no herbs, there would be no Nine Treasures Glazed Sect, and there would be no Ma Xiaotao to obtain the Evil Fire Phoenix. Logically speaking, there should not be Ma Xiaotao. There are too many loopholes, and it is very uncomfortable to watch.
The theme is very good, but the writing is not good. The details of why things happened are not polished at all. Because traveling through time and space has changed so much, it is just one event. To put it simply, it is a mental fall.
The plot of Dou Er is poor, but Dou Yi is not as good as an ordinary fan.
The beginning was fine, but in the end, you changed the past and affected the future, but not completely. If nothing else, Ning Rongrong could not have become a god without the fairy grass. Zhu Zhuqing and Dai Mubai were bound to die. But in the end, you only wrote about the disgusting effects on other aspects, and everything remained unchanged, right? The most outrageous thing is that he said that if you kill Tang San ten thousand years ago, Tang San ten thousand years later will reverse the course of time. Man, Douluo's God King is not the Immortal King who covers the sky and is perfect.
He really didn't hide his clumsiness at all. He actually told everyone all the characteristics of his martial soul's time and spirit, and stayed stupid for eleven years. Then he traveled to thousands of years ago and took Qian Renxue's disguised Xue Qinghe to the Ice and Fire Eyes, although there was cooperation in this.
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Official(55)Scraped 6d ago
Why do you write so many female protagonists?
I secretly opened the book and wrote it with multiple female protagonists. Oooh, old fans want to read it without a female protagonist, or with a single female protagonist.
The author writes about the topic very well. But Qian Renxue really couldn't bring her along. Too bad
Don't refute what I say below. That's what the original work is. When he was pretending to be Serum He, he clearly knew that Tang San was the son of the enemy who killed his father. What came to mind was not to kill Tang San, but to take him as a subordinate. The second reason was that his fighting talent was too poor. The level 1 gods are not as good as Ultimate Douluo, they are too holy, point 3. If you let the enemy go at every turn and don't do anything aboveboard, you will become an enemy. Who cares about you? Really can't carry it. Wuhundian has three top love brains
The writing is not good. I feel that the author still underestimates Dou Er and Tang San. How dare you go to Shrek even with Qian Renxue? Are you not afraid of the big hand of the God King? Why don't you quickly moisten the sun and the moon? Ma Xiaotao is also confused about that part. Why do you want to help someone who will get yourself into trouble?
The first section is fine, but when it comes to Bibi Dong, it's quite a stretch. This is my personal opinion. Evil is evil (since I was a child, my resources, life, status, and protection have been among the best in the continent. I want to betray as soon as I am cheated by others. Qian Xunji is definitely evil, but this does not mean that Bibi Dong is a good person. He can make himself Enemies of one's own forces visit their most secret things, what good things they can be, and their character and behavior are all rubbish. The disciples they teach are also rubbish. They help the sworn enemy of their sect and betray their sect.), Whitewashing is really disgusting. Isn't it possible for Qian Daoliu to cooperate with Bibi Dong?
I won't give you a rating now, but let me ask a few questions. First, what does the protagonist's system do? What is the use of this system when the protagonist has been a fool for 12 years? Second, now that the protagonist's mother Huo Yuner is dead, will Huo Yuner be resurrected later? Third, due to the arrival of the protagonist, the entire Douluo Continent was blocked. Huo Yun'er died, and the protagonist did not collect her soul. In this way, Tang San could not receive her soul. So, would Huo Yun'er's soul dissipate quickly? Fourth, if the protagonist does not resurrect Huo Yuner later, is it inappropriate for the protagonist to still be called Huo Yuhao? It would be better not to travel through time. At least Huo Yun'er has lived with his son for 12 years. His son is a normal person, and in the ending, Huo Yun'er is resurrected. Although the ending is not very good, some people died in the middle
Maybe my expectations for an 8.0 rating were too high
There are too many loopholes, and there is no time paradox. You changed the details 10,000 years ago, but 10,000 years later, it is not that simple. In terms of the Ice and Fire Eyes, you picked all the herbs. If Tang San had no herbs, there would be no Nine Treasures Glazed Sect, and there would be no Ma Xiaotao to obtain the Evil Fire Phoenix. Logically speaking, there should not be Ma Xiaotao. There are too many loopholes, and it is very uncomfortable to watch.
The theme is very good, but the writing is not good. The details of why things happened are not polished at all. Because traveling through time and space has changed so much, it is just one event. To put it simply, it is a mental fall.
The plot of Dou Er is poor, but Dou Yi is not as good as an ordinary fan.
The beginning was fine, but in the end, you changed the past and affected the future, but not completely. If nothing else, Ning Rongrong could not have become a god without the fairy grass. Zhu Zhuqing and Dai Mubai were bound to die. But in the end, you only wrote about the disgusting effects on other aspects, and everything remained unchanged, right? The most outrageous thing is that he said that if you kill Tang San ten thousand years ago, Tang San ten thousand years later will reverse the course of time. Man, Douluo's God King is not the Immortal King who covers the sky and is perfect.
He really didn't hide his clumsiness at all. He actually told everyone all the characteristics of his martial soul's time and spirit, and stayed stupid for eleven years. Then he traveled to thousands of years ago and took Qian Renxue's disguised Xue Qinghe to the Ice and Fire Eyes, although there was cooperation in this.
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