Simultaneously Travel Through the World Starting from Naruto

I wrote a simultaneous interpretation before and it was blocked. This time I changed it and published it again under a smaller account. Interested book friends who have read it can keep it.

I just read it, so I won't say much, but I always feel like I've seen this beginning in a book about Naruto, but I can't remember the name.

Naruto has written so much that there are so many worlds that Naruto has written about. For example, Pokémon is not written at all. Just lick Naruto World hard.

I hope the author can respect the readers who have paid to read your book. How can you describe the number of people inside a courtyard house with countless ninjas? You don't make money like you do. How can an author who doesn't respect his readers make money? How can you make big money without a long-term perspective?

I have a limited fee for two consecutive days.

Four-fifths of the Hokage, with the new guy coming, it will be gone after just one chapter, and at most five or six chapters, the Hokage will be back.

I really want to give some advice to the author. Don't use the word "countless" which is too quantitative and not specific enough. You can say hundreds of ninjas, thousands of ninjas, etc. Fans who like to watch Naruto can write more.

Stitch monster? I have copied a lot of books, or I have read a certain book with a similar plot before, and it is exactly the same. .

For readers like us who like to listen to books, the large number of "accompanying" you use throughout the book really affects the perception. It interrupts my immersion every time. I originally wanted to follow the plot, but then there was an accompanying sound, and then there was an accompanying sound. It was like hitting your head with a small hammer. It was very annoying. Didn't you even read it after you finished writing? There are even three or four of certain paragraphs in a small section. Do you think it makes sense?

I originally planned to read it as a transition during the book shortage period. But... And there are too many words... After a few paragraphs, there comes a So Ababa. And at the same time... And that's... And the gentleman... It's not a big problem, but it's prominent. It feels like I've chewed small pieces of hard debris while eating. It's not harmful, but it's just uncomfortable.